Maneet SS 'Love is Blind' NOTE page 151 - Page 38

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Part: 8

Leaving

Maan says dancing and swaying with geet from sided to side, "sharaaraa...sharaaraa'.sharaaraa..(X3)

He picks her up and says, "tu hai ek sharaara...", when all of a sudden someone bumps into him making him snap out of his fantasy.
He looks over to geet who was walking backwards into the darkness and before completely disappearing she says, " main huun ek sharaara".

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Dev and geet were quietly driving home. Geet the whole time had her eyes on him. She kept thinking to herself that the way she recently acted there was not one sign of jealousy running through Dev. Kyun? or more like Kaise?
They finally reach home and Dev puts the gear on park. Before he could remove his hand and step out of the car Geet playfully places her hand on top of his hand. Dev just looks at her and then quickly removes her hand and goes inside.
He opens the apartment door , when he hears his name, "Dev".
He stands in place. " I did whatever you told me to tonight, lekin auj'.you have to answer my question" Geet says in a playful tone due to her drunken state. She had drunk even more after her performance seeing Dev's indifference.
Dev: I don't have time for this I am really tired. You are drunk as well I could smell the alcohol all the way from you. Ask me in the morning.
"Nahi nahi nahi nahi" she whined like a kid.

" I am not gonna let you sleep until you answer my question. I thought you are my husband so aren't you supposed to keep me happy, but I don't know why I am not happy? Tell me dev why I am not happy? I know it is your fault because it can't be mine'.it is never my fault, I am too innocent" she kept on annoyingly blabbering on.

Dev: What else do you want from me geet! How can you not be happy I have provided you with food, shelter, and money with not one concern to deal with. You should be thanking me and instead I have to put up with your nagging. Maybe if you were living in the streets that you wouldn't be taking me for granted right now. What else do you want from me geet . . .What else!
Geet: "mujhe nahi chata aapka kana, ghar, aur paisa! Tum kaisa meri pati hosakti? My husband knows what my life runs on what my soul needs. Nahi tum meri pati nahi hosakti . . . phir agar tum meri pati nahi ho toh tum kaun ho?
"Ay ajnabee" geet angrily points her finger at him. "what did you do with my husband?"
She holds on his collar, " Mein tumhe chorunga nahi. You killed my husband".
Geet all of a sudden lets go as the realization of what she said and stats to cry, " You killed my husband. I hate you! You are the devil! ! You are the devil!" she cried and sobbed.
Dev was just about to burst in irritation and frustration with Geet.
He holds her and screams, " I am your husband Geet!"
Geet pushes her off him, " Don't touch me. Mein kahatana ki tum meri pati nahi 'toh nahi ho! I know my husband and you mister are not my husband. But I know you easily will not leave my apartment so I will ask you a set of question'and if you get them right then that means you are my husband '.okay?"
Dev just wanted to smash his head against the wall . . . his wife seriously had lost it. Why the hell did she drink if she could not handle it?

Dev: Toh bolo . . .jaldi bolo so I can give it to you and go to sleep because in consciousness I can't seem to find peace at all.

Geet: Karonga . . .Yaqeenan karonga . . . nahi nahi pochunga . . .and we will see if you will be able to give me my answers! Ghabraho maat okay'there are easy questions.
Dev just smirks and rolls his eyes.
Geet: Question number one what day is it today Dev?
Dev laughs. " I don't have time for your baqwas Geet. I think you also know what day today is. No no no I am wrong the whole world knows what day today is Geet, except you had to pick a fight with me to ask me this". Dev turns to leave.
That laugh was as if Dev was putting gasoline on the pieces of her already shattered heart and setting it ablaze. In her drunken state her emotions and pain just felt doubled.
Geet grabs his hand. " I am not joking. Answer my question or else I will leave you and your house".
Dev turns around and slaps her. " It's Friday Geet. Friday! Now will you leave me alone and end your craziness".
Geet held her right cheek with her hand and looked up at Dev fighting back tears.
Geet: You slapped me'and on top of that answered the question wrong. Nahi you can't be my husband. You can't. You are a monster not even a human. Why are you here to destroy my life!"
"Geet just shut up. If you are done with asking me your stupid questions can I go to sleep now?
" What's the use . . . you will certainly fail. I don't see any love in your eyes for me so how can you be my husband? You want questions lets see if you can answer these questions" she angrily retorted at him in her tipsy voice almost even falling over, but she held the wall.

Second question, " Do you love me?"

Third question " Is there somebody else?"
Fourth question, " Have you ever loved me?"
Dev head snaps and his eyes widen. But there was drop dead silence. His throat runs dry and nothing comes out of his mouth.
" The questions will go on and on if you don't answer I will leave you and really find my husband because I know it's not you! Tell me what you did to him!" Geet threatened as she held his collar.
" Go. Just Go!" he screams and shoves her off and out the door.
Geet looked on shocked.
He leaves and goes and grabs a suitcase and shoves all her clothes and brings and throws it out the door.
"You want to leave me so bad, than go. You can't even recognize your own husband that shows how much you love your husband and you are questioning my love? I will not stop you! Jao! I am tired of dealing with you and your antics Geet. Just leave and don't bother coming back!" Dev says before slamming the door on her face.
She kicks and bangs the door in anger. " Theek hai! I will leave. . . Lekin you will be the one regretting not me! I don't need you either! I don't . . . need you! My true husband . . . my real lover wouldn't do this. . . you mean nothing to me" she screamed.
She doesn't even take her suitcase. She walks out of the apartment building into the rain. It was as if the skies were also crying for her. She felt like she was getting low on oxygen the more she took a step away from Dev. He kicked her out and told her to never come back.
"woh . . .woh meri pati nahi hosakti . . . nahi hosakti" she kept murmuring to herself.
She starts to laugh as she looks up into the sky. " Good that he is not my husband. He is so mean like the devil . . . nahi worse than the devil. He slapped me'the devil never slapped me" she cutely murmurs to herself.
She continued to play in the rain and spin around.


She even cups her hands and then blows at the rain.



The whole time having this captivating smile and glisten in her eyes.
A certain person was watching. He was about to go inside his car after fixing the flat tire, but then that's when he heard her musical laugh and time stood still.

Pre-cap:

Geet starts to smile , " Aap meri pati ho?" she asks Maan in her cute tipsy voice.
I just wanted to say that i know most of the parts have been very emotional and sad, but if not from the next part than certainly from part:10 there will be some light, funny, and even hot scenes. After all Geet is drunk 😉.

Hit the like button if you liked the update and do comment 😳!

Previous Part~ Mein huin ek Sharaara
Next Part~Don't leave me

Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Geet...felt really bad for her. Even in her drunken state, the questions she asked to Dev were so serious...she desperately needed him to remember what day it was and he was completely clueless.
He threw her out the house, such a jerk...well, as they say one door close another one opens.

Precap looks very interesting.

Wonderful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update whatever geet told him that made him that he would regret it later it 's would be true as she would be getting her love, life and everything from her Savior lover whatever u may call him the one and only MSK who is MSK for the world but would become only maan for his geet waiting for next parts eagerly continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update

love the question geet ask
dev even though she was drunk
but he couldn't give the answer
his devil & jerk through her out of the
house middle of the night
i'm sure another door i'll open for
precap sounds interesting
pls pls pretty cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
Edited by simi91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i feel so bad for Geet!
stupid Dev!
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ..

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update
Feel really sorry for Geet
Dev is a bxstard
Continue soon
Xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update, waiting for next part

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