Maneet SS 'Love is Blind' NOTE page 151 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
👏awesome update👏
finally they talked😊
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab prt,dev is such a jerk,treatng her worse then animal,
wow they met ,hope to see their story progrssng.thnxs 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

they met...finally...

dev is such a ..🤬

precap seems interesting...

continue soon,...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh!!! they met again...but kaise situation mein...

Geet has started hating Maan becoz of Dev...

That bloody Dev... she should be stripped and make him dance in front of all his colleagues and business associates... Then he will feel the shame... Bloody Bugger...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely new FF yaar loved it a lottt 😃sorry for late reply i was out of town 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Zeynab...Thanx for pms.

I read all remaining parts and they are fantastic.

I am feeling Geet's pain. Dev is a monster. Doctor was right...Geet should leave him...I request u don't turn story like __mera pati mera devta hai style...I want Geet now to leave Dev and divorce him.
Our Maaneet met now...waiting for what will happen next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part: 7

Mein huin ek Sharaara

" Do you think you could help me even if I told you my problem" she painfully looks into his alluring eyes looking for her answers and for a second she could of sworn that he could from the spark and genuineness she saw in this complete stranger's almond shaped eyes.

For a second even she thought that he could answer all her questions and give what she has been deprived from, what her heart longs for, but just as quickly as the thought came into her head that quickly she brushed it aside. She was so lost in her pain that she didn't even notice that maan was the same guy she bumped into last night. Maan looked on confused. What kind of question was that?
Geet weakly chuckles, " Just like I thought'You can't". She tried to laugh away her pain but couldn't, it was still there.
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The anger again starts to boil threw maan's body at the thought of some stranger telling him that he couldn't do something without her even telling what it is she was already jumping into conclusions that he couldn't'.that the Maan Singh Khurana couldn't.
"BROWN EYES!!!" he screams out in anger, frightening Geet a little bit. "Oh my god" maan thought to himself. Did he just say that out loud? He covers it up by saying, "Just Chup . . . bilkun chup!" he says glaring down at her with his intense eyes.
" Whatever your problem may be, do you think by these trail of tears on your face they will help you and lead you to your solution?" He pauses letting this question to sink completely into Geet's head. " That is what I thought. Even if I want to help you I wouldn't be able to because you need to first help yourself.
Don't bow down to your emotions and let them steer your path instead use your brain and take action and fight back. By crying it just weakens your brain nothing else believe me take it from someone who knows. You are not the only one who has problems. . . everybody does, because nobody's life is perfect. The only difference in people is that those who know how to stay strong and overcome their problems are the ones who live happy and content lives, while those who cry and wait for a miracle to happen so their life could change for the better are the one's who live sad and miserable lives.
Those words had truth backed up by it, but in her case what was she supposed to do? How was she supposed to overcome?

"Aur hai" maan says as he closes in on geet. With every step that he took geet took a step back, but not one of them broke the intense gaze that they held with each other's eyes. " So easily you said I can't help you, but I bet I could because there is not one thing that MSK can't do samjhe tum" maan tells geet before turning around and leaving.
He goes and gets inside the car. His driver pulls right up next to geet and maan puts the window down. " Remember one last thing nobody is worth your precious tears, not me, your friends, parents, or even a spouse . . .No One".
After saying that the driver hits the gas pedal and speeds away leaving a baffled geet, but she knew what she had to do. Maan was so caught up with his ego that he didn't realize he just left the girl that would haunt him in his dreams, when he had finally found her. He looks back and tells the driver to turn around.

When he comes back she was already gone. He runs here and there, but couldn't find her. He kicks the tire of the wheel in frustration and runs a hand through his hair. He just left, without asking her name, or where she lives or . . . But that is when maan stopped where his thoughts were heading.

Why was he so worried for this woman? He hates woman so why is he so anxious to know if she has a place to stay tonight or if she will ever solve her problem. Again her image pops into her head. Her half covered veiled face murmering " Help me". This woman never asked for his help, but her eyes were searching for answers and help and Maan could not bring himself to walk away from that. But what was the use when he just walked away from her when she was right there.
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Geet grabbed the eyeliner and applied them on her eyes making her brown eyes all the more alluring and hypnotizing. She puts that down and chugs down another drink of alcohol.
"Bring me some more!" geet told the waiter.
The waiter just looked at the number of glasses of drinks she already gulped down and she wanted more?
"What are you still doing here" she retorted again, making the waiter scurry for his life to get another drink.
She looks at yourself in the mirror with an evil twinkle in her eyes. Her emotions running through her felt doubled right now due to her drunken state.
She starts to smirk a little, "Dev so easily you told me to impress another man by all means I will, but lets see how you will be able to handle it after all I am your wife and that should mean something".
She didn't want anybody to recognize her so she get's the last piece of clothing article. She slowly gets the veil and wraps it around her face. Only eyes showing!


"Tonight you will burn Dev! With Jealousy and by losing yourself to me!"
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Dev comes and greets Maan.
Dev: Thank you so much Mr. Khurana for gracing your presence to my party.
Maan: It is my pleasure.
All of a sudden the lights go dim!
Dev: Just in time for the performance. Hope you enjoy!
Maan looks closely and sees many women in black covered with their dupatta's over their faces.
They were all lined up in a shape of a triangle and whatever the leading dancer did the other dancers followed.
The hands went up and whispering more like hissing of words started.


Than the hands came slanted down like a Egyptian dance style.


And then all the dancers turn around grab the piece of cloth on the floor's beside them throw the dupatta's off and put the veils on before turning around and facing everyone.
Dev looked more closely to see if that was Geet. He was also blown away with her boldness. He just chuckled.
Geet started to swerve her body seductively driving her hands up her exposed navel up her torso. Then suddenly snapping her head shooting her piercing and alluring eyes right towards Maan's direction, not even knowing that it was Maan Singh Khurana. Even Geet was surprised that he was here, and decides to use him as her target to make Dev jeolous.
Maan breath caught right in his throat and took a step back due to the utter shock of seeing the same "brown eyes" again.
Than she spoke her voice that much more tempting and the spotlight comes on her.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fryqa7G_go[/YOUTUBE]

(Please watch the video instead of skipping it. I won't explain the dance moves, just watch the clip and the moves shamrita shetty is doing imagine geet doing them except with a veil on)
laharaake balkhaake...
Twisting, turning...
laharaake balkhaake...
Twisting, turning...
balkhaake laharaake...
turning, twisting


aag lagaake dilon ko jalaake karuun main ishaaraa
setting hearts on fire, I'll burn them up with a look

sharaaraa...sharaaraa'.sharaaraa..(X3)
main huun ek sharaara...
I'm a spark
Maan had to turn away. He seriously felt like he was losing it. Everywhere he only saw her haunting eyes. He heads over and get's himself a drink and gulps it down. What was happening to him? But no matter what he could not resist watching.
shola hai yeh tan mera are dekho tum paas na aana
This body of mine is a flame; careful, don't come too close!
Geet starts to dance around guys that were around Dev, except it didn't seem to affect him. Instead he gave her the signal to dance around Maan. That irritated Geet a little, but she thought, "Okay whatever you say Dev".
She comes close to Maan and starts to twirl around him and sings close to his ear
shamaa ke jo paas aaya are jalta hai vohi parvaana
Moths are burnt up that come too close to the flame.
Than she runs to the center of stage and sings:
o mere diwaanon baat ko samjho duur se dekho mera yeh nazaara
My lovers, heed what I say: behold my spectacle from afar!
sharaaraa...sharaaraa'.sharaaraa..main huun ek sharaara...
Maan just kept on looking on completely mesmerized by her hypnotizing eyes and dance. He sees Geet advancing toward him, but his senses and muscles were to numb to move.
Geet puts her hands on his shoulders from behind and sings to one ear:

bijali banke girti huun
Becoming lightning, I strike.
and the other ear:

main naagin banke dasti huun
Becoming a snake, I bite.
Even mimicking the bite, and her lips came so close as gently caressing his ear sending jolts of sensuous sparks through his body.
Then by running her hand up his body she sings:
chhine hosh jo sabke main hi to aisi masti huun
I'm the sort of pleasure that leaves you unconscious.
and then slowly blows against his chin all the way up his cheek to his eye and sings:
rang jhalka duun saans mahakaa duun
I'll bring out your true colors; I'll perfume your breath.
Pointing to his heart geet sings:
pal mein jadka duun main yeh dil tumhaaraa
In one moment, I'll leave this heart of yours senseless.
Geet looks at Dev, who was not even looking at her dance and was nonchalantly talking to someone else, whose eyes were on her, but Dev's eyes weren't!
An infuriated Geet looks at Maan and starts to dance very close to him causing him to walk backwards the same time geet singing:
sharaaraa...sharaaraa'.sharaaraa.. (X3)
Maaan slowly slams against the wall and Geet shys and blushes away purposely singing:
main huun ek sharaara...
Maan just looks at her fleeting figure. Everybody was on the dance floor even big business tycoons lost themselves to the dancers and were grooving with them.
Maan starts to sing " lehraake"'
Geet turns around surprised but also says, "lehraake"
Maan: balkhaake
Geet: Balkhaake
Maan starts to advance toward geet singing " laharaake balkhaake'balkhaake laharaake"
Maan grabs Geet's wrist and pulls her, which she comes spinning into his arms at the same time singing:
aag lagaake dilon ko jalaake karuun main ishaaraa
setting hearts on fire, I'll burn them up with a look
Maan says dancing and swaying with geet from sided to side:
sharaaraa...sharaaraa'.sharaaraa.. (X3)
He picks her up and spins her around singing:
tu hai ek sharaara...
You are a spark...
When all of a sudden someone bumps into him making him snap out of his fantasy.
He looks over to geet who was walking backwards into the darkness and before completely disappearing she says, " main huun ek sharaara".

pre-cap:
Geet: "mujhe nahi chata aapka kana, ghar, aur paisa! Tum kaisa meri pati hosakti? My husband knows what my life runs on what my soul needs. Nahi tum meri pati nahi hosakti'phir agar tum meri pati nahi ho toh tum kaun ho?" geet says to Dev a little tipsy from drinking too much. She drank even more after her performance when seeing the indifference of Dev the result of her being completely drunk.

Here is a Vm on maaneet on this song "sharara"

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2J90m1mxLQg&feature=related[/youtube]

HIt the like button if you liked the update...and do leave ur thoughts 😳.
Previous Part~Searching for answers
Next Part~Leaving
Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update now the real story starts but a request dear whhen geet would be in love with maan then make dev jealous and give him a severe punishment in the hands of both maan and geet plz reply

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