MN * YOU & ME - It's MAGIC. Part 18 - Pg 88. - Page 8

wow amazing part

aww... kinzu such an cute update!!!
so MN's 1st meet ws quite interestin!
luvd it!
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗

thank u so much sweets .. and as some of you pointed out that the concept is similar to mulan's FF - Truly , madly , deeply ,do .. so i would just say .. that both of us are writing on a gril with a dusky complexion in our own ways .. 😊

@mulan .. i love mehakuu!! .. 🤗

As they walked out of the cabin, with mayank's arm possessively lingering around nupur's waist, the glances were now accompanied with whispers from the staff. Nupur was feeling fire radiating from the point of his contact and travelling through all her body, but she kept her eyes lowered and took some deep breaths, chanting all spiritual verses she knew by heart.

A whiff of fresh air made nupur realize that they were out of the office. A black Mercedes stopped in front of them, and taking the keys form the driver, mayank opened the front door for her, "please", he smiled and with his voice so soft, nupur felt everything else fading away. She smiled back and sat inside while mayank softly closed the door. She saw him going towards the driving seat through the wind screen and smiling slowly, she lowered her head.

He got in the car , leading to yet another displaced heart beta in nupur's heart , and they were on their way.

"I love continental", he said, taking a sharp turn, and finally breaking the constant 10 minute silence, "whatever you want, I am okay with it", she replied.

"are u sure?, I mean if you ..

"no it's okay", she said assertively and mayank shrugged his shoulders, "cool then!", he took another turn and nupur started looking out.

She was enjoying his company, she liked his cool attitude, and his unique way to respecting. She blushed and looked at him through the corner of her eye and then looked away.

"OMG!", suddenly she gasped and mayank was alarmed, "what?, are u okay?', he asked slowing down the car,

"umm yeah .. sorry 'actually i had to make a phone call and I just forgot', replied a embarrassed nupur, fuddling with her cell phone and mayank shook his head, "you scared me", he sighed and re ' gained the speed.

Nupur quickly dialed gunjan's number,

"haan gi meri jaan!", gunjan's affectionate greeting made her smile, "umm, gunjan, tum ghar chali jao, I'll be late", she said almost in a whisper, stealing a glance at mayank, who seemed not at all interested in her conversation.

"ohhh '. Late ?? .. kahan ,..

"baad main gunjan .. bye", she immediately cut of the phone and gunjan on the other side huffed, but she knew nupur was happy.

**

"All's well?", he asked as nupur placed her phone back,

"yes, sorry for scaring you", she said and mayank smiled, "no problem, by the way we are almost there", he took another turn and they were in front of the famous 7 star restaurant of the city. Nupur was about to get down but didn't because he already said, "please, allow me",

She smiled and again saw him coming towards her seat through the wind screen and then he opened the door and nupur got down the car, and as he closed the door, he took a step towards her, "I hope you enjoy my company ma'am", he smiled, and with those eyes cutting through her, she was about to breath deep but couldn't bcz in the same instant, his arm was again around her waist.

This time she didn't gasp, but the feeling of fire was still there. They walked in and the manager led them to a cozy yet elegantly decorated corner, a perfect private place for two people.

Nupur was amazed at how beautifully and simply the table was decorated with just flower petals and sunlight coming in through shades was making it more beautiful.

"Please", mayank pulled back the chair and giving him an elegant soft smile, she sat down and mayank took the opposite seat, opening one button of his coat.

"So I guess we shall order first, batein tu sath sath hoti rahin gey", he said opening the menu, "actually I am hungry, breakfast bhi nahi kiya aj", he sighed going through the pages and nupur chuckled.

She opened her menu card and was confused so she placed the card away, 'umm ' I'll have Lsaganai with white sauce, "he said looking above the menu card, hoping she would be ready with her choice too, but she was just looking outside the glass beside them.

"you love staring outside windows right?', he said bending bit on table, and alarmed nupur sat straight.

"umm, no ..

"no , you were even staring outside the car and here also", he smiled and nupur just smiled back, she had no other answer.

"anyways, I'll have lasagna, what have u decided?',

"same, lasagna", she said sweetly and mayank raised his eye brow, "it is not necessary to agree to me all the time", he said, closing the menu card.

"I'll keep that in mind", she said normally and mayank chuckled, "hmm, even you know how to answer", he observed her skeptically and very sure of that pink blotch appearing on her cheek, she looked away, and almost in awe of her blush, he called the waiter.

As the waiter went with the order, they both were again left with no work, which meant they should talk,

"umm, so what was your first reaction when you were told that you have a proposal"?, mayank asked , looked very interested and nupur fumbled yet again.

She was very happy!!. Since childhood she had dreamt of her marriage and obviously on the proposal she was very happy, but telling him the extent of her feelings was awkward,

"uumm, I was amazed, but then I was happy bcz dad is really fond of you",she said and meanwhile her speech, her heartbeat raised to another bar.

"hmm, I was oaky .. I mean had to get married, so when ami came with your proposal, I was like okay , although I didn't know you, but knowing my mom , I knew she'll get me perfection", he winked and nupur, scared looked at the plate, that maybe her heart pumped out of her ribs and was lying there.

"okay now , I hope you know that I have been through some affairs in my past, I am sure you know, the newspapers and all", he said, all of a sudden going very serious.

"yes, I do", she said plainly.

"so, any questions ..", he said, yet again searching her face but she simply shook her head.

"MAN!, you are too obedient, and I like it", he smiled fully and going at a loss of words, nupur yet again took refuge in the blurred view outside the window.

Mayank was yet again going to taunt her but somewhere, in this short span of time, he guessed that she was not that cool attitude giving type girl. She was simple, afraid of taunts, or more likely, she was scared of snide remarks. She always wanted a simple conversation and he liked it.

Just when he was smiling on her habits, the waiter served them with the lunch and mayank exclaimed a "yummy!!", leading nupur to chuckle.

The lunch was in silence, because mayank was hungry!, and after the lunch, paying the bills, he pulled back nupur's chair and both of them were on their way back to their car.

"So, after a yummy lunch, which we almost had at dinner time, it's 7 already, will you like some icecreams?", he looked excited

"umm, icecream .. umm .. alright", she said slowly, but inwardly, she was scared of the darkness spreading. She took a deep breath and took out her phone from her bag. It had nothing.

She was surprised but then placed away the phone., "don't worry, 7 is not late", his voice alarmed her and embarrassed she just murmured a , "it's not like that".

**

They reached the icecream parlor, which was a total contrast to the 7 star hotel they just had lunch in, it was a simple shop, by the side of the road.

"this place has the best kulfa of the town", he exclaimed joyfully and nupur's face fell.

"kia hua?", he was quick to notice.

"umm, wo .. I don't eat kulfa", she said scared and now it was mayank's turn to get embarrassed, "oh I am sorry", he said spontaneously, "I should have asked", he said and now nupur felt guilty,

"it's okay .. i..

"actually you agreed to everything so I thought ..", he sighed and revered the car, "no, please, it's okay, at least you can have kulfa ..", she said in desperation, cursing herself for this honesty, but the car was on the road by this time.

"I am really sorry", she said fiddling with her duppatta,

"come on!, I should have been sorry!, it's okay, what flavor do you like?", he asked and nupur slowly said, "strawberry".

After enjoying a strawberry icecream, they both were on their way back home and nupur was yet again nervous.

They reached her home and driving through the parkway, mayank stopped the car, right infront of the huge main door of the Bhsuhan Mansion.

Again opening the door, he led her out and smiled, "so Miss Nupur, you are back home, safe and sound", he said giggling and nupur smiled, "thank you for the lunch, I had a lovely time", she said , trying hard to control her shy smile.

"I agree to your feelings, even I had a lovely time", he smiled assuredly and before nupur could even blush, both of them turned on an elderly voice, so well known to nupur.

"SO you both are back", Mr Bhsuhan, came out, smiling and jolly, and mayank immediately steeped forward, "good evening sir", he said extending his hand and Mr Bhsuhan took it smiling, "good evening mayank!".

Nupur just smiled and went to her father's side, "I hope it was a nice meeting", he asked, placing an arm around nupur's shoulder and observed the smiling glance mayank and nupur passed to each other.

"Indeed it was", mayank said respectfully, "and sir now I'll take your leave", he said and Mr Bhsuahn smiled yet again, "I was thinking about a round of coffee", said a smiling Mr Bhsuhan

"I would have loved to sir, but some other time, we have just had ice cream", he said in one go and nupur took a deep breath.

"hmm, okay then, some other time", he said.

"okay then sir, good night", he said and turned towards nupur, "good night nupur", his voice was soft, and nupur standing near her father, just smiled slowly, "good night", and again with a smile, he was gone.

Nupur slowly moved inside smiling and Mr Bhsuhan followed her, "so does my princess needs to share something?", he asked and looked in her eyes which were smiling, 'no dad", she said, with going red and in awe of her smile, he kissed her forehead,

"I told you he is perfect for you, by the way, do text gunjan, she has given me strict orders to remind you as soon as you reach home", he said and went away, he understood that his daughter needed some time alone with her friend, he knew she was blushing.

Nupur rushed to her room and closed the door.

She smiled and kept on standing on the door for a few moments. Was this a dream?. He was just so PERFECT!.

Blushing hard, she took out her cell phone and typed a text for gunjan!

"gunjii!!"

She placed the phone away and went to change and on return the reply was there.. She was quick in replying, nupur giggled, but seeing the msg she frowned,

"nupuuurr!!"😃

"Urghh!, gunji why do you use so many Us in my name 😕?"

"I'll answer it some other time'😳 Tell me girl HOW WAS ITTT?? 😃

"Ummm .. *blush* ,, can we talk?, as in on phone?'

"ummm .. sorry nups, actually your jiju slept early today, and umm .. I can't .. move .. *blush* .. you know he is all snuggled upto me .. *blush* .. so can we just talk like this .. *blush* ..

"hahhahahah .. so many blushes .. hhahaha .. okay, we 'll talk like this .. okay so it was a DREAM .. *sigh* .

"A DREAM!?, urgh nups, be clear, you know this philosophy goes over my head,😕 "

"silly!!, a DREAM means it was PERFECT!, He is so GOOD! .. *sigh* ..

"ohhh .. tu ne oh dewane kaisa jadoo kiyaa .. piya piya bole matwala jiyaa 🥳..Hmmm .. would please elaborate on the word GOOD.😛

"gunjiii!, he is just perfect, respectful, cool, jolly, crisp and very handsome .. *blush* ..

" OOO MMM GEEE .. nupuuur .. *tiiight hugs* .. GOSH I am so so happyyy!"😍

"so am I .. *blush* ..

"awww .. nupsieee. .. I am having these teary eyes .. love u sooo much princesss!, okay now I'll be there on your head before you even wake up! .. I want see all your blushes .. "😍

"I'll be waiting!"😳

"you won't get a chance, I told you before you wake up!",😎

'hahah . okay ma'am, now, u stop using cell, jiju will wake up!, we'll talk tomorrow",😳

"why using your jiju as an excuse, I know madam now you need some time alone, blushing and dreaming hun?, I know you too well!!, love you princesss .. *tiiight hugs* .. keep blushing!! .. mwah! .. catch u tomorrow .."

"Good night gunjan!, love u tooo!! .. by the way don't tight hug me ,, jiju is hugging you right now ..😉

"nupuuur! .. *blush* .. by the way soon you'll have someone to hug and sleep too .."😉

Gunjiii .. *bluuussshhh* .. good night .. no more replies!"

Blushing nupur, placed away the phone and snuggled in her blanket, gunjan's words had made her go red all over. She took a deep breath and re- called today's events, which increased her heart beat again.

GOSH - He was MAGIC.

Chapter 4 - Page 17

errmmm... zyada lamba coment nahe ho gaya?😲😆

edited! :)

firstly all those who said mine story and kinzu's story matches, u see guys we both know this particular girl and so we decided to write on it, in a completely different manner! as u will soon come to know when my princess will write ahead!!! but for now, keep enjoying both stories!! 😳

amazing amzazing update...

i really liked Mayank, he is so respectful and Cool person as Nupur said, and Nupur Gunjan msgs are so good and cute loved them. Brilliant update Kinza

lovely update kinzu 👏... but i still dont trust mayank 😳 he's different 🤔

aww but nupur is adorable... love this girl... she is too obedient for mayank... somehow i feel that this is how its going to be even after they get married... mayank is going to do what he wants assuming that its okay with nupur, and nupur is going to just nod her head...

wow...amazing kinza...very nice as usual...:):)

All these blushes of Nupur made me also blush while i was reading the story...lols...

You created MAGIC once again, Angel :)

*tight hugs* like the ones Gunji and Nupur give each other :D