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Lovely update.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Kwool nycee update

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Okaii thnx for tellin xx


thnx a lot dear!!

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aaw thnk u dear!! i shall not stop 😊 its great to see such a sincere reader! i am really grateful!!
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Lovely update.

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hey rachana! thnx a lot!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO EVERYONE!!
STARTED TYPING THE NEXT UPDATE HOPE TO FINISH IT IN A FEW DAYS... 😊
LUV
MADHU
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hello my dear peeps 🤗
sry thodi late ho gayi i mean kuch zyaada hi late ho gayi 😳 magar i did give u guys a hot hot OS haina 😉 aur phir aaj friendship day (still is as of US standard time 😉) hai so u cannot throw jhuttis at me 😆 now enough of my bak bak here is the update...

Chapter 32: Making Ends Meet
~Present~
The clock chimed twelve at midnight when the phone rang loudly in the hall, echoing in the empty Khurana mansion. Daadima groped for the phone in the dark while switching on the bedside lamp. She looked at the caller ID and a smile crept on her lips. She switched on the phone to be greeted by a familiar voice.
"Hello Daadima," the voice on the phone said.
"Haan bete, boliye," Daadima said holding the receiver.
"How are you Daadi?" he asked.
"Hum bilkul teekh hai, aur aap?" she asked smiling.
"You know me Daadi, always super!" he said haughtily.
"Haan, haan, kyun nahi, magar something tells me you are more than super. Kya hua bete?" she said knowing him too well.
"Daadi, you are too good!" he said surprised at her correct guess.
"Hmm so toh hoon," she said with a smile.
"Aakhir Daadi kiski," he said arrogantly.
"Bete," Daadi said feigning anger.
"Daadi," he said equally serious before both of them were bursting out laughing.
"I miss you Daadi," he said with a tinge of sadness.
"Me too."
He paused a few seconds before continuing, "Anyways Daadi, the reason I called was to tell you I got your message. Aap fikar mat keejiye, I have emailed you with the detailed plan and I am positive we can make the ends meet. I wont be able to tell you in detail now, because I gotta run, teekhai Daadi?"
"No problem bete, I'll see what else I can do. You carry on," she said calmly.
"Alright Daadi, take care, love you!"
"Bye bete, love you too!" she said, her mind relieved of all worries.
X'X'X'X

"Muruga unakku thunayum ullatho! (Muruga do you have company?)" Geet sighed loudly, looking at the paper strewn all over her desk. "Hmm unakku enna kanna kundarathile kumaranukku kondatam aana inge irupavarugalukellam thindatam! (Hmm! You are relaxed on the mountains but here we are all in trouble!)."
It had been more than five months since Geet got back on her schedule in Khurana Constructions. The routine was hectic and she had a lot of pending work to catch up on. Although Maan had relieved her of the secretary post, she still wanted to do it for him, adding to the additional list of to do things as a junior architect. Projects, blue prints, submissions had exponentially increased making her work unusual hours, yet she had enjoyed every bit of working with Maan. He had guided her and supported her well through her time in Khurana Constructions. Of course, they did have their daily dose of fighting and disagreeing but it ended by the end of the day. Their bond of friendship had steadily grown strong. There was not a day without him visiting her after work and spent some time with Anu, who had willingly stayed back a few months along with Arvind in Delhi.
Maan was all fun outside office but once he entered his cabin he was the usual angry young man again and nobody was an exception to his anger. Work was important for him and none could be excused from doing it. So Geet was stuck today, over time, trying to finish the blue prints for the presentation that was due tomorrow. The clock on the wall read 8:35PM and she still had a long way to go before she could pack up. She stretched her neck to see what he was doing and saw through the blinds he was busy studying a file. She blew a puff of hair away from her face and looked back at her work, "Hmm! Lucky fellow, once he drowns himself in work, khaane peene ki yaad hi nahi rehta hai. Magar mera peth aisa nahi hai," she said sadly and as if on cue her stomach grumbled, "haan baba main kya karoon yeh kaam puri nahi karti toh jellyfish chillayega," she said patting her stomach. She sighed reluctantly and got back to her work cursing the work at hand.
Geet was engrossed in her work when she heard a knock. She looked up to see a tall, well-built, handsome man stand by the doorway. He had a certain boyish charm on his face while his deep chocolate brown eyes resembled a very familiar pair. "May I come in?" he asked cheerfully. He wore a dazzling smile on his face that could have easily blown over women of any age. She wondered who could visit her at this time of the day and hesitantly asked him to enter. "Aap mujhe pehechanenge nahi magar main aapko zaroor jaanta hoon Ms Geet," he said flashing his perfect set of teeth. Geet still stood numb at the fact that an unknown stranger to her knew her name. He strode towards her, "Oh! My apologies I haven't introduced myself," he said apologetically, "hello, I am Vikrant Singh Khurana, Maan's chote bhai," he said extending his hands.
"No wonder he has the same set of deep brown eyes and the similar mannerisms," she wondered before extending her hands. Vikrant shook her hands warmly while she greeted him, "Hello Mr. Vikrant. By the way, I am curious to know how you know me," she said perplexed at his statement.
"Arre you don't have to be so formal, naam toh hai bada magar main hoon toh bahut chota so please call me'"
"Vicky?" Geet finished for him, smiling warmly at him.
"Wow you are one of a kind," he said surprised at the way she caught on.
"Why thank you," she said bowing down slightly. "But you still haven't answered my question."
"Haan, I am getting there. Well to tell you the truth our first meet, I wouldn't call it good for it wasn't under pleasant circumstances. You were injured and unconscious. Veerji was rushing you to the hospital while I drove the vehicle. I must say he was pretty shaken up to see you like that," he said somberly.
"I'm afraid I didn't know about you driving, else I would had come to personally thank you. Thank you so much," she said gratefully. "It was a sudden attack and I didn't have any clue after I fell unconscious. But if not for Maan and you I think I wouldn't have seen the next daylight."
"It's alright Geet, saving a damsel in distress mera farz banta hai," he said winking at her.
"Says the knight in shining armor," she said winking back.
"I must say I'm impressed with your choice of diction. I think I have met my match," he said genuinely impressed with her responses.
"I'm glad to have been of some help. By the way, what brings you here?"
"Jhoot bolun ya sach?" he asked.
"Jhoot hi bolo," she said playing along.
"I came to attend my computer class and on the way I thought I would visit veerji," he said grimly.
"Nice one, ab sach please!"
"My girlfriend was bugging me to see the latest new club, two blocks down the road," he said grinning cheekily.
"And?" she probed further.
"Let's say it just got too boring that I sneaked out leaving her," he said guiltily.
"What?" she asked shocked at his revelation.
"Hey don't judge me there!"
"I think there is nothing left to judge," she said looking at him accusingly.
"Bas, hota hai hota hai," he said carelessly.
"And what brings you here?" shaking her head at his nonchalant reply.
"I wanted to say hello to my Maan veerji, it's been long since I saw him. Seems he is busy all the time. I guess new friends make him forget his old family," he said sadly.
"I'm sorry Vicky for taking away your time from your brother," she said with concern.
"Arre, don't worry, main bas mazak kar raha tha. Its actually really nice that he is spending time in something other than his robotic work."
Geet noticed Maan walk into her cabin just as Vicky was talking to her. "Lo! Talk of the devil, the devil appears," she whispered causing Vicky to chuckle.
"Yeh kya ho raha hai?" Maan asked cocking his eyebrows while Vicky turned around to face him. "Arre Vicky tu?" he asked with surprise.
"Haan veerji," Vicky said walking up to Maan and giving him a quick hug. "Aap toh bahut busy ho, aur abhi naya dost vost mil gaya toh hum hi aapko milna chahiye varna aap hume bhool jayenge," he said winking at Geet.
"Aise koi baat nahi Vicky," Maan said seriously.
"Main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha veerji," Vicky said smiling.
"Aao, main officially mere khaas dost se milvata hoon," Maan said walking towards Geet.
"Khaas dost ka yaad jab aata hai tab aapko saare kaam se fursat milta hai," Geet said rolling her eyes. "Vicky tumhe pata hai main poore din office mein hi hoti hoon, magar janaab subah se chillate rehte hain," she said narrowing her eyes. "Geet! Yeh doh, voh doh, aise karo vaise karo," she said imitating Maan causing Vicky to burst out laughing.
"Geet!" Maan shouted.
"Exactly, aise hi," Geet said gleefully while Maan slapped his forehead in frustration.

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"Anyway, Vicky this is Geet, Geet Handa, a very close friend and special friend," he said proudly, side hugging her.
Geet poked him with her index finger. "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, humari mulaakat ho chuki hai," narrowing her eyes.
"Accha?" he asked innocently as she nodded, affirmatively, "toh koi baat nahi, Maan Singh Khurana ka introducing style kuch hi alag hai," he said haughtily.
"Pssht, says who?" she said eyeing him disinterestedly.
"Says Geet Handa," he said winking at her.
"Ha ha, yeh joke tha?" she asked sternly
"Tha toh?" he asked crossing his arms on his chest.
"I love your jokes," she said giggling, before hugging him. She overlooked to see Vicky, who was grinning widely at their little conversation and gestured, "Thoda paagal hai," twisting her index finger on her forehead. He couldn't believe his veerji being so happy and smiling. It was long since he had seen him enjoy with people and he was thankful for Geet for bringing such a change in him and just wished it stayed that way always. Their mother's death had brought a lot of unwanted changes in Maan; he had secluded himself from the outer world and had built himself a shell around him, preventing others to access him. The smile and the joyful mood had changed Maan into a robotic man, making him forget there was a family behind him, his grandmother and his brother.
"Geet main pagal hoon?" Maan asked sounding hurt.
"Aap sunliya?" she asked, her mouth forming an 'O' and realized it would be no point arguing against him and continued, "Haan koi shaq?" she said coming out of his embrace.
"Actually on second thoughts I am pagal, tumpe," he said flirtatiously.
Geet, who was used this kind of teasing from him, decided to play along. "Haye, main marjawaan," looking down shyly.
"Bhai vah! Kya scene tha!" Vicky interrupted watching them go back and forth.
"Thank you," Maan said bending down royally while Geet giggled away.
"Alright veerji, I am going to take leave. Have important issues to deal with," he said seriously.
"Teekhai, magar Vicky from when did you start having important issues to deal with?" Maan asked cocking his eyebrows.
"Aapko pata hai veerji, girlfriend ko manana kitna important kaam hota hai," Vicky said shaking his head.
"But the last time I knew was she had already accepted your apology, ab kyun manana?" Maan asked puzzled.
"Uff ho veerji, yeh nayi vaali hai and already I am on the wrong foot," Vicky whined like a child while Maan and Geet looked shocked at his casual revelation.
"Kya nayi girlfriend already?" Maan asked skeptically. "Seriously Vicky, could you become serious."
"But seriously veerji, becoming serious is not a serious issue, just mujhe mauka chahiye to seriously prove myself," he said smirking at the play of words.
"This is serious Vicky!" Maan said, his tone a bit edgy.
"I am damn serious veerji," Vicky said with a straight face.
"Guys seriously?" Geet said getting sick of all the serious talk. Maan and Vicky burst out laughing while Geet stood confused at what all the laughing was about. "Kya?" she asked, confused while the men still continued laughing uncontrollably.
"You wont get it Geet, seriously," Vicky said before bursting in another peal of laughter.
"Hmph!" Geet huffed in anger, turning her face away in anger. She stood with her hands crossed, pouting like a little child who missed her chance to get candy.
"I am sorry Geet, I didn't mean it that way," Vicky tried reasoning but Geet continued to look away. Vicky looked worriedly at Maan, who gestured back he would take care of it and asked him to leave. Vicky shrugged and hoped Maan took care of it for he was scared of Geet's sudden mood change.
Maan slowly approached, "Jaanu," he said slowly to see her reaction.
"Pesathe (don't talk)!" she said turning away from him.
"Muruga, help me Muruga!" Maan prayed loudly, looking at the roof. He was walking towards her and started to hold his ears.
"A proper sorry Mr. Khurana," she said sternly, eyeing him from corner of her eyes.
"I am sorry da Jaanu," he said as sweet as possible. Geet saw him and smiled from the corner of her lips but quickly regained her angry posture. But Maan had caught her smiling and sighed in relief. "Thank you Muruga for making her smile," he said, looking up.
"Oi hello Mr. Khurana! Who said I smiled?" she asked regaining her angry posture.
"Arre abhi abhi toh tumne hasi thi," he said pointing to the corner of her lips.
"Nahi toh," she said trying hard not to smile.
"Voh dekho, vahaan," he said pointing at her lips. "Ek choti si smile."
"Nahi," she giggled turning away from him.
Maan curled all his fingers except his index and middle and started approaching Geet as though his fingers were walking. "Nandu varuthu, nandu varuthu,**" he said slowly crawling his index and middle fingers on her arm and traveling up. She was tickled by his touch and tried to move away but he held her firmly and slowly traversed towards her neck before tickling her feverishly.
"Maan chodo," Geet said with difficulty while trying hard to get off his grip as he tickled her away. She was continuously giggling away while he tickled her asking him to get off her.
"Dekha, you are smiling," Maan said continuing to tickle her.
"Maan, that's cheating!" she said trying to pry his hands off her.
"Too bad Jaanu, cheating ya not cheating the point is you are laughing," he said smiling victoriously hugging her.
"By the way, yeh tareeka kahan se seekha aap?" Geet asked surprised by him mouthing 'nandu varuthu'.
"Bas, seekha," he said arrogantly.
"Maan!" she said slightly whacking his chest, "boliyena!"
"Kyun sirf tumhe Tamil aata hai, mujhe nahi?" he asked. "Vaise tumhare saath reh reh kar kuch toh asar hona chahiye na."
"Very funny," she said rolling her eyes.
Vicky who was standing outside the cabin and looking at the scene that just happened a few minutes ago was shocked. He couldn't believe his ears; the Maan Singh Khurana was apologizing to someone! He knew his veerji had changed because of Geet, but didn't fathom the extent of his change until he saw what took place a few moments ago. Maan didn't seem to think twice before he accepted defeat and apologized. Vicky had guessed there was something special about this woman who managed to completely change his veerji the day Maan had rushed her to the hospital but seeing the amount of change she had instilled in him was only visible today. He wished and prayed that the smile on his veerji's lips remained permanently and for that he knew what he had to do, keep Geet in his close proximity. After all the sorrow and hardships Maan had to face, robbing him of the smile, Vicky knew that smile deserved to permanently stay on his veerji's lips. He decided that come what may, he would make sure she was by him, becoming his strength, his light, his smile. Although Maan and Geet were unaware of their need for each other to stay happy, Vicky knew it and was determined to make both ends meet.
**Nandu varuthu literally means crab is coming but it's a general practice among Tamilians to make someone laugh to say that while tickling the other person. The person who wants to make the other laugh says that while letting his/her index finger and middle finger crawl up the other person's arm and tickle them once he/she reach the other person's arm pit or neck.

A small clip for demonstration purposes 😉:
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-eaXXNbXXo[/YOUTUBE]TAG

so ho gaya na vicky i mean vikrant singh khurana ki entry 😉 kaisa laga?? please share ur views and comments n dont forget to hit the like button.

oh i almost forgot plese check out my new n upcoming ff: ROYAL AFFAIR
ph forgot to wish u guys 😃



Edited by Maaneet_09 - 13 years ago
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😊

*EDIT*

It was really really Beautiful!!!

Finally Vicky popped in to the picture both in Present & Past track.

So Daadima - Vicky are up to something ...let me guess I think its related to Maan - Geet.

But Madhu still now U have have not cleared the picture how come Daadi knows Whereabouts of Geet???😕

aww ...Miss.Chatter Express started her main hobby ...cribbing with her Murugan & cursing Maan.

Vicky entry is really Cool😎 ...he is so damn Cool & full-of-Life.

Seriously Madhu I should say I really liked the Serious convo - must say U have got something seriously to make some cool serious topic.

Btw How many GF he has???😉 coz I can already see someone is drooling over him ...Seems like a real charmer ...what to do ...MSK ka asar hena😳 ...kyu Madhu ...Am I right???

kya tareka hai mananae ke liye😳 😆 ...must say she knows the way to make MSK bend down.

Maan - Geet moments were really Beautiful ...First I didn't get what U mean by that crab part ...after watchimg the video ...I got it😃

Vicky is happy to see changes in his bro's life ...& loved the way how he realized Geet's importance & now I really wish it would be better if Vicky comes to know about that secret & it would really help Maan to get back to them.

awesome update!!!

love u sweetu🤗

PS: If U find anything weirdo ...please feel free to ask ...coz I'm really feeling drowsy while typing it.

PSS: OS comment will come later ...have only read half ...still half way to go.

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Loved the update! and Vicky's entrance! Thanks for the update! Can't wait to read more!
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it was awesome...i just loved it...maan geet n vicky's convo was amazing...n then maan trying to make geet laugh...this was damn good...tickling her...haha...continue soon...n thnxxx for the pm...
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