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My 1st OS is based on Karan & Tanisha plus sum other characters dat may b included according to d requirement of d story.

THE UNION

PART - 1

Karan & Tanisha. Even a few months back, dey led lives dat wer poles apart. Each of dem had dreams & aspirations of der own, Karan struggled to get d luv & affection of his father & Ammaji, & Tanisha dreamed of having a happy married lyf wid Aditya. But now, here dey r, shattered & devasted , defeated by der fate. Karan has cum to know dat he's d illegitimate child of his mother while Tanisha's marriage wid Aditya broke up on d wedding day itself, & she left him & his family to defend her own self-respect only to find out later on dat she's pregnant wid Adi's child.


2day, Tanisha & Karan r to meet at a coffee shop. He's called up her & said dat he has sumthing important to tell her. Tanisha is in her 2nd month of pregnancy, it's tym dat she left her job & rests at home, but still, sumhow she cudnt refuse Karan. It's 6pm & Karan's not arrived yet. Tanisha wondered , " baat kya ho sakta hai ? fon pe to itna serious lag raha tha ! " she luked at her watch, it's 6.10pm & still no sign of Karan. She picked up her fon & just den Karan came up.."fon karne ki zarurat nahi hai, main aa gaya hu ", he said, his face beaming wid happiness. Tanisha luked at him.. Karan never luked so charming & handsum b4. " Waiter ! " Karan called out. D waiter came to der table , " 2 cold coffee ! " . "yes sir " & d waiter left.

Tanisha is still confused. " baat kya hai Karan ? fon pe pareshan lag rahe the aur ab khush? " "baat ?!..haa.. umm, nahi..matlab woh " Karan stammered , luking sideways. Tanisha is steadily luking at him..Karan has never behaved lyk dis b4. " Karan, tum thik to ho na ?? " Tanisha is now getting puzzled. " haa, bb bilkul.." suddenly he recalled y he's been here 2day.." Tanisha, woh..kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge ? mai tumhare bachche ko apnana chahta hu, usse apna naam dena chahta hu, taki usse woh sab jhelna na padhe jo maine saha hai..dekho mai janta hu ki meri baatein tumhe bahut hi ajeeb aur behuda lag raha ho, par mera yakeen maano, main yeh sab yuhi nahi bol raha hu..maine aapne iss faisle ke bare me bahut socha..maa se bhi baat karchuka hu, who bhi sehmat hai iss faisle se, bas ab aage tumhari marzi..tum ..tum par depend karta hai sab kuch ".

Karan stopped, gasping 4 breath. He had said d entire thing in a single breath. Tanisha luked at him, totally dumfounded, unable to believe her ears.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good start dear... Keep going.
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great wrk yaar..can't wait for more:)
btw i m sending the link to sarah so she can sticky it:)
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PART - 2

Time: 10 months later.

Tanisha startled up by d sound of an infant's feeble cry. It's her 3 month-old daughter, karan has luvingly named her Krittika. Tanisha rushed to her child's cot, "abhi abhi to sulayi thi, itni jaldi kaise uth gayi ?" she bent to take up her daughter but just den another pair of hands reached out to d girl to pick her up. Tanisha luked up..it was santosh , smiling. D infant calmed down immediately, it seemed dat she knew she's in her grandma's lap. Tanisha felt a bit uneasy..she's got a mother-in-law who's actually a mother to her, so luving, so caring & so much supportive. "maa..woh main isse lene hi wali thi..", " arre beta koi baat nahi, waise bhi mujhe to apni iss nanhi si gudiya ke saath rehna bada achcha lagta hai." She kissed d infant on her crown as she said so."aur ha, karan ka fon aaya tha, usse aane me thoda der ho jayega, to tumhe khana khalene ke liye bhi kaha hai". " koi baat nahi maa, mai wait karungi uske liye " tanisha replied, with a smile on her face.

Tanisha went back to her desk. She has been working as a Data Entry Operator 4m home since her marriage. Yes, her marriage ..wid karan. Tanisha smiled as old memories of her wedding came back to her mind. D wedding took place abt a month & a half latr d day wen karan proposed to marry her. Ok, it may not b an overtly romantic proposal, but it was a marriage proposal nevertheless. dis period of one & half month saw anoder series of turmoil in der lives. Karan's decision took evry1 by surprise & shock in KN..Aditya's face was worth watching ..to c his ex-gf b his brother's wife & dat too wid his biological child..tanisha almost laughed out aloud & den checked herself. Aditya has got wat he actually deserved & tanisha is more dan satisfied.


& Santosh. Dis lady had always suffered & been tortured , physically & mentally at her in-laws. But she bore it all widout a protest, for d sake of her son. Even d day wen karan wanted her to leave KN & go wid him aftr jogi called him d illegitimate child of his mother, she had refused. But tym changed it all. Wen karan declared his decision to marry tanisha, a hell was let loose in d family. Ammaji & jogi wer furious & cud hv easily buried dem alive in d compound of d house. But dis tym , santosh revolted. D pent up anger, grief & frustrations dat had been buried inside her over d yrs erupted lyk a volcano. D eruption left every1 stunned, particularly d younger ones. & den der was no luking back. Santosh decided to leave d family & walk out of KN wid karan & live a happy, peaceful lyf wid her son & daughter-in-law. All ammaji's & jogi's threatenings went in vain dis tym. Now d three of dem live a happy, peaceful & contented lyf in tanisha's rented home & wid d birth of Krittika, d no. of family members have increased to 4.


Edited by polly_03 - 14 years ago
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hurry i can't wait...its awesome !!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ all :
i started writing an OS on karan & tanisha , but now d plot i hv in mind wud actually make d story longer & it may go upto 4-5 parts to finish it. so wat do u say ?? shall i continue & make it a SS ?? den i will also have to change d title of dis thread . coz i'm planning to bring in karan's biological father into d scene 😉. so gv ur opinion plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awesome !!!!!!! keep it up!!hope they will starts karan tanisha track soon on show😳
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Real nice...update soon please..!! 😃

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