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Posted: 14 years ago
chapter 5
Abhay and piya were silent all along .All weird thoughts came in piya's mind while abhay was driving silently she thought that how he came to know that she was stuck in the library , he came just like a knight in the shining armour and it was such a perfect timing , she thought of all sorts of possibilities but could not link even one of them.Suddenly the car halted with a creaking sound bringing piya out of her thoughts.Piya was startled and said , "why did the car stop?", abhay without looking at her said , " If i knew the answer i would have told you" , they both got out the car and abhay said voice, " why did u come outside ?to help? please get inside its going to rain soon and you are going to get wet " , piya retorted back , "excuse me you saved me that dosen't mean you will dictate me i want to stand out and i have no interest in helping YOU and how do you no it will rain or not ?there is cloud in the sky but that doesn't mean its gonna rain", no sooner she said this than it started drizzling and abhay gave a triumphant look while piya loked away in disgust.Piya forced herself to go inside the car and it was cold outside as well so she went inside and sat with a grumpy face. It was dark and there was no people or person to be found ,only jungle on both sides
while piya was looking the other side abhay said loudly, "Piya the car is not going to work it has some fault so we have to go walking", piya came out of the car but it was still drizzling and said in panicking voice, "What? but... but i ... my house is very far i cannot go walking oh what am gonna do", she was almost going to cry when abhay said coolly, "Oh stop that non-sense of yours , my house is near but have t pass through the jungles as its the short cut otherwise it will take time", piya helplesly said, " Oh do what evr you can lets take the jungle way only but but my shoes are have high heels how will i go?" Abhay said with a sheepish smile , "I can carry you", piya glared at abhay but he grinned at her.So abhay carried piya in his arms and they headed towards abhay's house
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The road was very bad but piya saw that abhay wasn't having any problem, he was walking carrying piya as if he is carrying a book or any light thing and not a human being.Piya felt uneasy as his touch was making her senses go reeling and he was too close and she could feel his breath which was had a sweet scent and his body warmth was making her comfortable.Piya kept on staring at him in wonder, amazement and suddenly abhay's voice made her consicous he amirked, "Don't stare at me like that we have reached my house", and he put her down and said , "Let's go".While abhay led the way piya followed her to the raichand mansion...
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so that was all i could mange to write
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with love
from asmita😳
Edited by ASMI95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes I like it very much. naughty abhay. i wonder how will chandeena react?
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx guyz fr comenting
n updated
Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was soo cute...but itna chota update...wanted more...but thanks for the update...loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
read the post abv my update
i already mentioned dat m gonna gv a
VERY SHORT UPDATE THIS TYM
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part asmi!glad u r continuing!!thanx 4 pm.update soon.
Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry...i didnt see it...thanks...it was gret...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@abhiora-thnx tora
@peehu- oh dun say sry dear...glad u commented and thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update. .but it was short !
I wanted a longer one. .
Aww. .abhay carried pia in his arms. .cho chweet. .
Thanks for the pm. . Continue soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei asmi,
it was a chotu part as u said..
but dont dump it haan..
try to give chotu parts once in 4 days atleast na n when u get time give lambha updates..
so will pia be welcomed by raichands??
by the way didnt she get wet??
doesnt she want to inform her whereabouts to her parents??
please continue girl..

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