M&G FF: His Maid-en Princess (New thread:Pg 140)

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Ahoy there everyone! *waves*

Anybody remember me? *people scratch their heads and look around as Tia looks expectantly for an answer*

TIA!!!" shreik Muskan, Saz, Caco, and Sana in unison! Everyone looks strangely at the foursome and then realisation dawns!Ah, yes! I used to write an FF here, once upon a time, not so long ago.. (last year, to be precise, around the same time) called : ~Girls Don't Count~Winces at the glares of some expectant readers of: My Loss, His GainI know, I know, I have yet to update that FF and believe me, I am trying hard, real hard to find some time for it.Anywho, so the main reason for being here again, is, that long ago I had started an FF on IF with a totally differnt cast of characters, for a differnt show. The FF was discontinued since the show came to an end. However, it was my very first work of writing, my very first piece of fiction and so, very very close to my heart. So, to cut a long story short, I have been requested (or rather asked) to put the FF here, in the Geet forum as a MAANEET one; incorporating the cast of Geet within.Now, I'm a tad bit wary about the whole idea, (also embarassed to display my first piece of writing which wasn't really so well-written) but nonetheless, I'm planning to give it a try. I'm putting up the first chapter and only if I get a decent response will I continue with it. I want to know what you guys think of the whole idea and is it acceptable to you?The story basically, is based along the lines of the fairytale Cinderella (with Geet being Cinderella, of course and Maan, a prince, her knight in shining armour), however, it it based in the modern day setting. The characterisation of all the characters is definitely gonna be a surprising difference from that of the show.So, what do you guys say about this idea? Check the first part below.P.S: If I were to pair DEV with someone, who would the readers want it to be?

Nayantara

Pari

Myra

Nandini

Sasha

So, that's me, signing off for now and your feedback will gauge whether I am to return or not!!

Cheers,

Tia

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chp.1 Prince Maan Singh Khurana

It was a bright sunny morning. The sun was shining brightly, yet the weather was cool and pleasant. A perfect day to go hunting thought Adi. He was smart, decent and a good looking guy. A fair complexion, brown eyes, messy and tousled hair. His features were such that could easily capture any girl's attention. He had gotten the horses ready and they were due to leave any moment now. He patted the back of Emporio. Emporio was a huge horse with a coat of shiny white silk. Emporio was the prince's horse which the king had gifted to his son on his birthday two years ago and since then he had been the prince's favorite. Both of them were very fond of each other and enjoyed each other's company very much. But where was the prince? What was taking him so long? Adi was just wondering when he heard a voice.

"We ready to go Adi?"

Adi turned to find a tall and handsome guy standing before him. It was the prince.

Prince Maan Khurana, the elder son of King Jay Singh Khurana and the future king of the Khurana Kingdom. He had really unique features. A fair complexioned, perfectly chiseled face, with eyes to die for-yes, even though blue eyes are a rarity among Indians, Prince Maan was endowed by God by just those bright deep blue eyes-jet black hair, and a height of 6.5'. He winked at Adi and gave him his killer smile. He had that million dollar smile which easily made girls go weak in the knees. Today he was dressed in a beige cotton shirt and coffee brown corduroy trousers. He had a gold chain around his neck and a platinum bracelet dangled at his wrist. Simple - yet a total stud!

"Sure kunwar ji, we've been waiting for you for quite some time," replied Adi.

"Yeah, pitaji wanted to have a word with me hence I was held back for a while. Hey Emporio, how you doing today champ?" said Maan.

The horse nodded his head and neighed softly in reply. Both of them mounted the horses and started strolling towards the forest. Maan really loved the forest. It had a calm and peaceful aura about it. Once you enter the forest you feel that you've left all your tension and worries out there somewhere and you feel light hearted.

"So kunwar ji, what did Raja Sahib say?" Adi inquired.

Even though Adi was the prince's right hand man, he and the prince shared a more intimate bond. The prince treated him as his younger brother and always shared his ideas and feelings with him.

"Well, pitaji wants me to get married. He said that next week on the inauguration ceremony of the swarna mandir(golden temple), he has invited all the kings from all over India along with their families, so then I can meet all the princesses and select my future bride from them," replied Maan.

"Right kunwarji, so what did you say," queried Adi.

"Well, I said that even if he and choti maa selected a bride for me, I would agree to and respect their decision," replied Maan.

"But kunwarji!!! This is a decision about your life! If you had this wonderful opportunity, why did you let it go?" exclaimed Adi.

"Adi dear, you know me very well. You know that I'm not interested in all this and that I don't believe in love. I have already met so many princesses on various occasions, but none of them intrigued me or ever touched my heart. So these will also all be the same. Hence, I thought that rather if pitaji and choti maa selected a girl for me, she would be perfect," said Maan calmly. It was no use arguing with the Prince and Adi knew it. He dropped the topic but still couldn't stop thinking about it.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one
lets see who this princess is?
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start

Dev with Meera
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dev n Nandini wuld be cool
Nice strt
Maan is sweet
Adi is cool
Lets c wats ahead
Update soon so that we dnt have to scratch our head to remember u😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dev with meera...
i love this ff...it sounds amazing...plzz add me to ur pm list...thnxxx...continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!!!! 4 d new one ...

interesting start ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...


continue soon ...

if dev is positive ... then pair him with myra .. otherwise NT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start...please do continue but please please update both FFs...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tia. hey. i am actually luving dis 1st piece of urs. too sweet n gud. thnx 4 d pm. do add me to d pm list. n pair dev wid myra or nandini, both wud be fine, nandini is still bttr. luv, pooja.

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