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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg, Now Mal is also dead...

I am still sticking with my assumptions that I told in the following post.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1729645&PID=45292769&#45292769

Please continue soon sokkie...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Note: Interlude which probably answers half of the questions. Kind of bittersweet to write this as it means the story is coming to an end. Questions are welcome..

Interlude III

The three were one and one was three but when the fourth arrived, chaos ensued. The place was set for three but the fourth tipped the balance. The artist collapsed at the revelation of the miscalculation. It was a time when the moon was dead and night queen bloomed, darkness prevailed and humans slept. The order to the chaos arrived during the darkest time of the night.

Night; with that, there was a light in the artist's heart.

The walls were made bare, fresh set of paints were purchased and the charcoal found itself in its owner's hand again. Days died and nights evolved and they reincarnated back to days again. The artist paints with black and red, charcoal and blood. The angels cry tears of blood, wings black as the ones of bat and feet bare standing at a gate. The artist knew what lay on the other side; its heat always mocking and the blazes of fire beckoning.

The artist wore the mask and smiled at the person selling telescopic camera, making a joke about being a hobby photographer who photographed birds on air and insects in the wild. The first photo he took was of the one whose lonely face hid between exquisite clothes and whose eyes were lonely as the mannequins of her store. "My Megaera" The words are like a prayer and the artist unknowingly tears up in contentment. Sixteen months later, fury replaces tenderness and the worshiping hands encounter uncontrollable rage and pierce a blade in her chest till the pain inflected heart relaxes with each stab.

There was blaze in her eyes, there was fire on her tongue and when she spoke, the words burned everything it touched; hearts, minds and souls. He first ignored the raging fire as mere warmth and venomous words as curse of a jilted lover. But innocent young-ling devoid of life had burst his heart in agony. The desire to make her enter the gates overwhelmed everything but before he could do so, someone had already shown her the path.

He howls in torment when he is robbed of his chance to open the gates for the second one too. The suffocation of letting it go out of his hands makes him turn his place upside down. The cut in his hand is still fresh and the blood turns him on. His bloodied palm traces a path on the third angel on the wall leaving a bloodied print in its wake. He kisses the sketch and mourns at the loss of another one. He cries in despair not because what he was about to do but because of what she had become.

They say third time is the charm.

His bloodied hands solemnly agree.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

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Wow me first!!!
Oops I'm not a stalker!!! Juz happen to see ur ff at the top of my post!!!
Ok hmm nice interlude!!! Confusing interlude... But U are such an awesome writer!!!
This ff goin to come to an end??? Oh will be sad this ff is finishing soon but hapi at last we will noe who is the murderer!!!
like I said before do come out with another one different n unique one like this!! Defo u got our support!!!
I can't wait for the update!! Pls pls do update soon!!
I what to noe how mal died!!!!
I still have the feeling is vikram and maybe malis also involved!!
Thx for the pm!!!
Edited by zooni20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't have much time so I'm just gonna say that this was amazing! And the story's coming to an end? :|

I wish I'd read it earlier :D

Continue soon!

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm interesting interlude!
i really don't want this story to come to an end but it has to D:
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!! Now i have many answers and new theories but won't open my mouth now..Will wait till the end to see whether I've guessed right..I'm up against a super brilliant mind here..so will tread carefully😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
You were right about the interlude answering a lot of questions - yes the artist or the killer with profile of suppressed rage and morbid thoughts has supposedly been robbed of his chance of vengeance & that too second time and he was a jilted lover too - but of whom Mal or Geet??😲 The case twists & turns a lot!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Initially I could not understand as to how this interlude clears half of d questions but then one of d words did d job.

I have some theories and details of Mal's death r crucial for their verification.
Edited by wilddevil2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome
relii wana kno hu da murdrer is n hw mal died

relii sad da dis ff iz endin 😔 update soon x
Edited by soni4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
(fallen?)angels at the gates of Hell? To perish? or be redeemed (nothing purer, more incorruptible than fire).. (?)

Did he bank on the three angels finding one another, for him to proceed..? confounding, unlikely.😕
or did he start envisioning after he found the three together(though which three?).. hmm he did come back after a few years didnt he..

There was more to Mal than what is known, now I am sure, and a complex bond they shared, her and Geet.
The 4th angel that tipped the balance(?in whose favor?), wow.. that one really puts me neither here nor there.
I do not think Geet is one of the angels, but then who disturbed his plot? or was she one. drats.

how I wish I could say , yess , this interlude did answer my questions.. well, it does answer some about the artist.. and makes the plot all the more gripping.
You write brilliantly.
Do update soon.
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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