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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi musky update soon want more bekhudi. I knw ur busy with dreams.plzzz update snooon. 😭
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behkudi

part 11

He turned his head & smirked tucking her closer with his hand resting on her hand that now held her tummy. Oh god she was out of breath.
Is this the way u do presentation...leaning a bit more forward to whisper in her ear sending shivers down her spine.


His hands caressed her sides, then turend her around.. his hand pressed firmly at the nape of her neck & draw down ward pulling her closer..her eyes widened & dazed as it drew down her spine always stand up straight confidently.. don't stoop..she could barely make sense of wat he was saying. Concentrate on ur content.

her eyes popped open when his hand shamelessly moved further down to her hip. She tried to push him away he squeezed harder & tucked her in. she furiously looked at him. He pulled her closer, until they were almost pressed together.
Shhh!! he instructed quietly against her ear.
He could feel her tremble at the sound. His hand slid around, circling her delicate back curves she turned her face in anger giving him a disgusted look struggling to let go. A look he can't accept, he couldn't stand. His demeanor became violent. He inhaled sharply hauling her up against him & slammed his mouth over her shoulder. He reached over & pulled her sleeves down snapping the strings behind. Before she could register wat he was doing he was all over her kissing sucking his way over her neck & when he reached the delicate skin just below her ear he nibbled it leaving his mark.

She hissed in pain. Her hands fisted in his hair, was not gentle..nor was he. She pulled his head from her neck trusting him away.. only to see him crashing down to her lips claiming her..drinking her anger, melting her fight. Her fist lessens in his hair betraying her own self. She pulls him closer. His hands slowly pulls her sleeves up & tucks them together. She suddenly realzes her act & pulls away.. he doesn't let go.. & harshly squeezes her waist. Tears well down her eyes with his rudeness. She manages to push him away & crosses her hand covering herself with the duppatta.

He was angry really angry at her. He turned his face & threw everything on the table the table down on the floor. She cried & ran away from there. She went down the steps holding herself & the purse.. through the dark roads at that hr. she was crying.. she lost track of time & the sensibility of not stepping out at that hr.. atleast not by walk. Few cars passed by.. cabs slowled down ..but she didn't respond.. her hair was all messed up.. her thought was lost at his rudeness. Why why was he rude..
why does he hurt her.
Why is he always angry at her aakir meri galti kya hain.
Few guys stopped her way & pulled her inside the car.
She fought & ran away from there.


KC Office

Maan was getting wild at her leaving him like this. Her tears, her refusal, her disgust look irrated him to the core. The office phone rang again.
He was in no mood to answer.
Then his cell phone rang.. looking at the number he knew it was from geets house.
He didn't want to speak to her. Before he could cut it..it went into voice message.
He left it.. & threw the phone on the table. His phone beeped again as a voice mail was delivered to his number. He was tempted.. tempted to hear her.. he fought with himself & finally heard the message. It was her father. He was abt to cut it.. when he heard the worry on the other side,
he immediately called back
.. Geet abhi taak ghar nahi punchi?
Papaji '
nahi beta
I will check with the driver & call back
.
He immediately calls the security at the main gate.
Geet kaun se gadi main gayen hain?
Security ' sir woh tho car lekhar nahi gayeen
he smashed the phone..
yeh ladki bhi na..aab kanha jake doondhu ussen
he tries her number. It came switched off..
Maan got worried, he fished her address from the HR file & followed the route in his car.

Geet ran for her life, they chased her.. they ripped her duppata & threw it away. Her purse was thrown away. They managed to corner her beside a tree. She backed up feeling terrified. she closed her eyes as their hand reached to touch her.

Maan hit them with a rod from back. He was ruthless, Geet looked at him in horror. The anger in his face horrifying. He ruthlessly smashed their bones .. each one of them spit blood out of their mouth. He threw the duppata at her as he smashed the last guy to the ground.

Geet hugged him & cried in fear. He pulled her away in anger & looked at her face. His expressions were unreadable. He was angry..he was concerned. He was in pain .. he shouted
aisen koi road pe chaltha hian kya?
She continued to sob
he shook her shoulder
agar tumhe kuch ho jata tho?
His grip was hurting.
She got angry & snapped his hand off.. kya hojatha.. wohi hojatha.. jo app.. don't know why she couldn't accuse him of the same act looking into his eyes.
His eyes could kill u in anger..he choked her throat to the tree.. kya kaha tumne
she couldn't breath.. his jaws tightened.. his muscles stiffened & he was wild.
.. her face turned red.. her eyes now softened.. blood shooting towards them.. she could see darkness surrounding her. Her eye diluted. ..her hands fighting with his strong arms... which only seemed to choke her further..she couldn't even speak.. Maan.. she cried in pain.. he left her instantly.. she fell down.. gasping breath in intervals.. catching up .. she bend down.. trying to breath.. she couldn't.. she bend down holding her stomach.. coughing..
he turned his face away from her
challo ghar drop kardeta hoon
she snapped his hand.. with almost no energy left in her.
He held her hand & dragged her to the car. He threw her in the side seat. She tried to get off.. he opened a bottle & splashed water to her face. he..took out hanky & wiped her face. She tried to push his hand away. He squeezed her cheek & wiped her face. He smashed the door at her & went around collecting her bag that was thrown by those guys.

He walked back to her . He stood looking into her bag. She looked at him angrily & then got annoyed & asked..wat r u looking in my bag
he smirked when he found it & gave back the bag.
She snatched & kept it in her lap. She gulped when she realized wat he was looking for... her strawbery lip gloss. He opened it & reached to apply on her lips. She tried to move away. He got wild.. & turned back in front.. behind the wheels. He applied the gloss in his lips. Geet looked at him & wondered wat happened to him.. she almost smiled.. her smile was shot lived..next sec he softly caressed his glossed lips on hers, his lips burned her.. his breath fanning taking away her breath...his fingers had slipped into her hair ..sending shivers..he was wild like himself..but his lips caressed very softly..she closed her eyes..in anticipation of another of his passionate wild kiss..he just left her.. he smirked wiping his lips with her duppata. She was too shocked to react.

-behkudi part 11-
precap
maan jealous again.😉
-PREV PART 10 NEXT PART 12-

thanks a lot to all the readers to have waited
thanks again
greedy muskan will update next part when I get my 350like buttons..
just a humble request.. u know i can't stay without u all
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im first yipppeee. Awesome update. I still can't figure out Maan's demeanor. How he just looses himself to Geet. But loved this part. Thanks muskan.
Edited by Ambibamby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG this maan confuses me 😆
& that gloss scene 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
whoaaa wat way to apply a lip gloss... aww 😍
hahaha niceee part
loveddd ittt
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

this is wrong Muski

ab mein akeli 350 likes kaahn se laongi

assume I punched the like tab 350 times OK

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superv update i like this maan very very much last scene was awsome
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Posted: 14 years ago
umm muskan.. I might not comment very often on this ff... Hey I do like it, but still need to kind of understand what its about.. But I'll LIKE it till kingdom come😎 , thanks for the update.😳



oh i forgot.. Looking forward to a red hot jealous maan☢️
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
akhir Boss chahte kaya hain...😕kaisa yeh pyaar hai😲...superb updates Di👏...waiting for more :)😍

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