Thread 2: Surrogate Relations part 19 (17/8)

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

loved the update...

i am very excited to read the updates where maaneet r getting closer to each other

maan is too much attracted to geet...

chupke chupke thats one best classic movie to watch...

i think dadi's wish is coming true as days pass by...

waiting to c wat next...

pl cont soon

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever
know what chupke chupke is one of my favs!!! Dharmendra and Sharmila n ofcrs Mr.B - superb situational comedy!!!
update-- so another of the friendly night spent together... so Maan still has x-rated thoughts n yet isnt having any heart-head dual??? strange!?!? or hasnt he realised as yet... but considering its been twice in the same evening realization is inevitable...
I loved the last part where both fit into each other like the missing piece of puzzle... must have been a sight to watch the next morning...no wonder daadi didnt have a heart to dismantle such a beautiful picture!!
ab jaldi se kuch mastt twist lao...mujhe mera ziddi akdu khadoos maan chahiye... chahiye hi chahiye!! kuch nahi toh koi competition le aao... kuch nahi toh ek handsome gynaec ko le aao... maan ussi mei tilmilaa jayega!! :D

i am not sure if Maan can turn Angry with this Geet...coz emotionally she is so fragile...i do imagine him to be ziddi but not with possessive streak...
masti twist or masti man coming up...he is still vague in my thoughts ...some one i like so much...but i wonder if i will be able to do justice to him...if my words cud draw him as i see him in my imagination😉

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Loved the update!! I'm so jealous of you yaar..How can you write so beautifully????So well written the scenes were that,I could see all the cute moments unfold before my eyes..Read that you are planning to bring in a new character..competition for Maan,huh?? Great idea!!! A jealous Maan...ummm.. too hot to handle😉

thank u ...want to have a glimpse of whom i imagine as the new character? will post his pic...but i won't present him for a while yet...will keep u gals guessing😉...he is some one like Jeet...i love him already...but will i be able to present him the way i imagine him is another matter entirely...that's why i need time ...

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

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check him out...wait for him...

PART 15 on pg 68
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45350091

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YusLiz

@YusLiz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

such a beautiful and tender update, just right as it'll be too wrong in getting them intimate right aft the dreadful 'attack' from Rahul.

can't wait for ur next update and hve a wonderful weekend with family and friends!

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

Wow I like this closeness of theirs

Great update

wonder how Geet will feel waking up in his embrace

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Loved it, amazing update, continue soon.

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Zeenat

@-Zeenat-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Amazing Update!!!

Maaneettt!!<3

Thnxx for the PM & Pls update SOON!

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

maaneet becoming close day by day😉...
i liked it...looking fwd...

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#380

an awsome update asusual.. i always enjoy reading geet's behaviour.. and ur writing style is like i can imagine everything easily..

really loved the friendly night (and maan's x-rated thoughts) 😉

do cont sooon.. and as for the new character i think he'll be to jealous maan and will be somehow his relative.. well the author knows best.. do update soon

Noor

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