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its my 1st ever writting n it will be a AR OS n ofcourse AR as KAJEN


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2 girls r on their scoty

girl1- i just hate it gruhhh hate it

g2- ridzy i thought tujhe barish se bohot payar hai lekin tu to kuch

before she finished her line

ridzy- ofcourse i love rain but i hate mud look this mud on my suit moreover mai bilkul pagal hoon jo mei barish ki season main white suit pehna hooni hoon. ob tu chup kui hai muski kuch bol bhi

muski- kya bolu tu mouka kab deta hai kisi aur ko. seriously ridz tu thakta nehi hai kya? itni bat bolti hai.

ridz- bat karke main nehi thakti kabhi bhi nehi

chushhh

2 girls fall on the road coz a car couldnt break on time n the result is

ridz- oyye ankhe nehi hai kya dekhta nehi hain samne kya hain kya nahi agar nehi dekhta hai to ja aur apna ilaz karwa oyye tu bahar kuin nehi nikal raha hai

then a man with blue eyes coms out from the car n ridz forget to remove her eys n he also lost in her green pairs




then suddenly muski shout from behind and ridz jump from her dream land but cant balance properly n was about to fall. she shut her eyes tight to think will fall on dirty mud but she fell that she was in mis air coz our hero saved her on time



after sometime reality hit them n ridz starts her shouting that how people can be so blind that cant see anyone bla bla bla after a good lecture of 5 mins ridz saw that man remove his airphorne n asked her

man- y r u shouting lady? dont u think its ur fault. its a road look people waiting for ur mercy to move ur butt n clear the road.

ridz- her jaw touched on floor but manage to say how dare u tumhare itte himmat tum jante bhi ho main kaun hoon

man now ittitate very much sais look i dont wanna noe anything just move the bycycle!!!!!!

then muski realize she needs to interupt before ridz say anything she grab ridz hand n go from there

armaan's pov

who the hell is this gal? just runied my 1st day in india. i came here for such a imp work but this girl ruined everything. how can anyone talked too much but i need to admit she looked very cute while talking. dude what r u thinking focus dude focus CHAMP needs u. his love life in danger n i need to settle it by hook or cook.

in MALLIK mansion

a beautiful lady in mid forty was talking on phone.

lady- billy tum kaha ho? aj tumhara beta araha hai after 3 years i will see him. i m so happy

billy- anni i noe u r excited bu have some patience he will be here in any moment. n mrs mallik for ur kind info i m also excited to see him too

suddenly a bell rang

Anni- lagta hai mera beta agyyaa mai rakhti hoon aur tum bhi jaldi ajao

then she opened the door n hugged the man

anni- armaan meri baby itna bara ho gayye n starting crying holding his shirt tigthly

armaan- 1st dont call me baby n letr me in then u can continue ur crying said with a smirk

anni looked at him with a open mouth n said tujhe majak lagta hain

armaan- mom i love u really n i miss u too but now my body is aching due to travelling so can i come inside

anni- so sorry beta welcome to home

armaan- mom where is dad n champ n ofcorse rahul

rahul from behind kisine mera naam liya?

armaan- rahul

rahul- bhaiii

from behind a gal n a man said together

gal- ammy
man- armaan mera bhaiii

armaan- nikki, champ

then all 4 hug together


in GUPTA mansion

a man is busy with last minute arrangement its nonother than shanky means shashank gupta. while his wife padma is busy in cooking. its a imp day for them coz its their eldest daughter anjili's wedding with the son of his best friend

sh- padma bachche kaha hai

pa- shashank aap jake check kije na riddhi n muski abhi tak nehi aya waha anjili bhi udas hai. mujhe to samajh nehi ata y she is so upset? aap jake bat kije apki ladli hai sayed bata dey

sh- k main jata hoon

in anjili's room

anji is sheddding silent cry. she doesnt noe that to do. she is getting engaged to someone whom she didnt love. but the one whom she loved is just scared to stand up for her. what to do. whom to tell 😭😭😭

shanky entered the room n saw his daughter weaping tears he got tensed n asked her

sh- anjili beta. kya baat hai? tum itni gumsum si kyu ho?

an- nehi papa kuch nehi just got scared coz its so new na thats it.

sh- beta tum sure to hona ki tum ABHI se saadi karna chatihi. dekho agar tum na chaho to mai before he complete it she said

an- papa i m sure. n i trust ur choice saying that she lowered lwerd eyes went from there. when shanshank was about to leave he heard a ring of cell phono.

in the evening all the guests reached gupta house. padma notice her 2 daughters she cant compare who is more beautiful but after remember something she marched towads her younger daughter n held her ead.

pa- kaha thi tu? tujhe kuch samajma ata hai ya nehi. puri din ladke ki tarah ghumte rehti hai.

sh- ladke padma kya bol rahiho ye hamare choti beta riddhima aur ko koi ladke nehi hai

ri- very funny she fold her hands in front of her chest.

mu- uncle, aunty, ridz kya aap log bhul gayye ki hame anji abhi ki engagement declare karna hai

sh- arre ha i have some imp announcement

ladis n gantlement i noe aap log yaha anji aur abhi ki sagai ki liye hai sagai to hogi but anjili aur abhi ki nehi anjili aur atul ki

everybody is so shocked to react but no abhi n his family

pa- shashank ap ye kya bole jarahahe

sh- sach padma srif sach. with moist eyes he said mera beti choti si beti jise main inhi hatose bara kiya socha apni baap se bhi bara ho gayye hai but baap baap hi hota hai mai uski pho pick kiya tha tabhi mujhe pata chala anjili atul se payar karta hai n ye atul ye socha kaise ek jod karke meri samne anjili ki liye haat mange ayega. dono ne mere aur mr. mallik ka bohut dill dukhaya

then all the milliks along with atul n anjili entered the hall there engagement took place n armaan n ridz comes to face to face


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Posted: 14 years ago
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would lov to read ar os
plz buddy write soon
and pm me well welcome to IF buddy
me maria
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riarai2346

would lov to read ar os
plz buddy write soon
and pm me well welcome to IF buddy
me maria

thanks a ton
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice os..
loved it..
would love to read da rest of da part..
continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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continue soon n plzz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice start
would like to read more
lov
maria
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Nice updt
all d best 4 exam!
Cmplt it asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pretty interesting ff...275 views on a OS 👍🏼 .not bad at all 😃
really gud continue soon...😃
luking forward to read it...
bye,take care.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc start cont soon
do pm me

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