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Posted: 14 years ago
Sanguuu Babes🤗

First of all I am so sorry for being so late for the replies! Finally Theory exams are over; Only Practicals left!😳

Okay Now to my Update Criticism!

Well The end has surely left me wondering! Is Maan and Geet having some old clashes? The way she said; Pinky I need to move on and everything happens for a reason!

Man I love Mystery and Sorrow! So bring it on! Love the Dadi and Maan bonding! Awwieee😃


This line cracked me up badly!🤣🤣
He thought, Geet, mere dil ki meet.

Now update Joldi Joldiii😳

Love
Mayuuu


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

hi

just now came across ur ff
its really awesome
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Thanks a lot..pls add me as ur buddy...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mayu-

Sanguuu Babes🤗


Mayuuu babes 🤗

First of all I am so sorry for being so late for the replies! Finally Theory exams are over; Only Practicals left!😳

Good to see your comment, as usual.. BTW how was ur exams?

Okay Now to my Update Criticism!

Well The end has surely left me wondering! Is Maan and Geet having some old clashes? The way she said; Pinky I need to move on and everything happens for a reason!
Hmm... uske ke liye you will have to wait and see😉

Man I love Mystery and Sorrow! So bring it on! Love the Dadi and Maan bonding! Awwieee😃
Mystery and Sorrow...Na..you know i hate tears...ermm ...sorrow..😆 it will be a bit sad, story needs to progress na...

This line cracked me up badly!🤣🤣
He thought, Geet, mere dil ki meet.
😆 Thanks a lot...

Now update Joldi Joldiii😳
Update coming up...

Love
Mayuuu




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

Wonderful update...
cntnue soon..

Thanks reema...Update coming up...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sangi1588


Mayuuu babes 🤗

Sangguuu your new Name😳 Hope you like it!😃

Good to see your comment, as usual.. BTW how was ur exams?

Exam was good; I hope I score descent! And Exams getting over on the 5th Aug!

Hmm... uske ke liye you will have to wait and see😉

Jaldi and now if you dont I will run with a Danda🤣🤣

Mystery and Sorrow...Na..you know i hate tears...ermm ...sorrow..😆 it will be a bit sad, story needs to progress na...

Pushpaaa I hate teras But I love Tears!😆 But I dont mind reading a very tragic part!

Update coming up...

Jaldiii😈

Love
Mayuuu


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Posted: 14 years ago
Recap : Geet's thoughts...I have no regrets in my life. I think that everything happens to you for a reason.
The hard times that you go through build character, making you a much stronger person.

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Part 5

Everyone messes up
There's always something said wrong
Words can be hurtful
Hearts can be crushed
Love could be lost

She sat on the porch, looking at the moon, and wondering what she has done wrong to get such a treatment from him that changed her life, completely or to say for good and best.
She completed her MBA from a prestigious institution. In her heart , she knew what he has said was absolutely correct. She needed to step out of the box.
But now the past doesnt mean anything to her, nor does Maan mean anything to her. She has lost interest in LOVE. She does not believe in love, any longer.
Her heart was broken, and she doesnt allow it to mend.

5 PM, CCD.

Maan was eagerly waiting for her. It was fifteen minutes past five and she was not there yet. He started to become restless, walking up and down, looking at the watch. Waiting for her anxiously.

A car halted right in front of him. Geet got down from the car looking heavenly beautiful. Maan's heart skipped a beat, looking at her. Dressed in a salwaar kameez and her hair tied up,
she was the talk of the Cafe.
Men started to notice her. Maan quickly went to her, and asked her to proceed to the reserved seat for them in a private corner.

"So how are you today?"

"Good and how are you?

I am great. I cant tell you how excited and happy I am . All thanks to you for coming for a coffee with me today . He said with genuine smile.

she suddenly shifted gears, lets order, i will have a cappuccino.

same for me.. let me go and order

Geet's eyes followed him. He seems so sweet and a thorough gentlemen , how come he did this to me. But whatever he did, changed my outlook towards life.
I have become so confident and so successful. And also beautiful . In fact I should thank him, but before that a small lesson to be learned Mr. Maan Singh Khuraana. Geet thought smilingly

So here's our coffee..enjoy

Thanks.

So Geet Handa..are you a related to Chetan Handa, handa group of industries..??

Yeah, hearing to what she said she bit her lips and luckily for her, Maan was busy with his coffe and he didnt hear. "No"
your surname is same , so i thought.
Geet just smiled, nervously. She didnt know why she was nervous.
So Geet, to be really frank, i have started to fall for you. I am a very frank and outspoken person. The first time I saw you in Sheena's party ,from then onwards i am trying to reach you,
then i saw u in the event, i couldnt stop and started signing..he said embarassingly, you just mesmerize me..i dnt know but i have never felt like this before.. and then yesterday, when we bumped to each other, i thought it was
the force playing around us, to make me meet you again, and so i couldnt resist and asked you for coffee.. Maan said looking at her..

all this while, geet was sipping her coffee, without any reaction. I should not do this to him, i mean , i need to tell him the truth about myself. She was lost in her own world.

You are so beautiful, you are awesome in every sense. Geet was shocked to hear this from him. Her eyes bulging out.

Well educated too , he winked i know you have done your MBA from IIM, Delhi..i saw you in their alumni list.. google zindabad..and he laughed at his own joke..

She looks ugly, You Are so beautiful ,Geet closed her eyes tight, trying to shoo off her thoughts.

Because of you today, my standard has increased here in Dehradoon. Look at the people, they are just so jealous of me...

Because of you today, my standard has increased here in Dehradoon.
please , Maan singh Khurana has some standard, and i dnt want to spoil my reputation by going out with her, she kept her eyes shut.

Geet , Are you Okay? you are not saying anything..Maan asked with concern.

She kept her cup down and stood up, i need to leave..i just came here , since you wouldn't leave me yesterday. Thats it MR. Maan. I am not at all interested in you. So please dnt bother me hence forth.

She took her purse and left..leaving Maan staring at her..He quickly realized and followed her...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRwbkpCEEGc[/YOUTUBE]

Woh Hai badi Kamsim
Woh Hai Badi Charming

He began singing, walking around with attitude...

Lagta Hai Logoon
Woh Hai Meri Darling

Geet , stopped walking , turned around to see Maan Singing..She gave an angry look with one eyebrow raised. Total disbelief that he would actually do this. People started gathering round. Geet started to become conscious and a bit embarrassed. She started walking in a hurry..

Neela Dupatta ,Peela Suit
Kahan Chali Tu Dil Ko Loot
Dil Mein Tere Haan Me Haan Hai
Hoton Par Na Na Hai Jhoot

Maan came close to Geet, pulled her towards him.. Began to make her dance forcibly holding her by the waist.

Ye Ladki Ka Haq Hai
Ladkoon Se Woh Jayee Rooth

Geet just snapped and started walking..

Ke Ladke Phir Bhi Aayengey
Peeche Pehne Suit Boot..

Maan followed her..
Geet couldnt take more, she had to reply back and once and for all, make him Shut up..

Neela Dupatta Peela Suit
Chali Chali Main Dil Ko Loot

She turned around, straight on his face, Stamped Maan's feet,
he jumped back on one foot, catching his injured right feet by his left hand.

Har Ladka Meri Nazar Mein
Meri Jooti Mera Boot

Geet was showing off her sandals to him..Wore it back , started walking...

Chalee Manchalee
Kahan Chalee Mujhe Chod Ke

Maan literally fell on his knees, with both hands placed on his heart.

Rakh Diya Dil Mera
Hai Tune Tod Ke

And started moving forward sitting on his knees...

Toota Phoota Dil Tera
Raste Ki Cheez Hai

Geet turned around, came close to Maan...taking his heart and smashing it under her feet.

Ladki Ko Chedta Hai
Bada Bataameez Hai

Geet then pulled Maan's ears..
Maan gave an expression of shock and sadness. Geet laughed out loud and left...

Thodi Si Chaalak Hai
Thodi Masoom Hai

Maan pulled Geet by her arms, and looked straight into her eyes, she couldnt take it any longer.

Uska Deewana Hoon Main
Use Maloom Hai

She Snapped out his arms, and ran towards the car. Maan followed behind her and asked her to stop. But she didn't.

He literally pulled her arm, within an instant she stopped. Shivers ran down her spine.

He came near her. Geet composed herself, I have to tell the truth, before he starts to build a castle in the air.

She slowly turned around, Maan stood there, looking at her, with a confused look on his face.

I am Geet Handa, Daughter of Chetan handa, Handa Group of Industries.

Maan loosened his grip , and he froze.

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So guys, how did you like the long update... Please be free to criticize or appreciate..please do check out my reply to your precious comments.

Previous Update: Part 4
Next Update: Part 6

Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...waiting 2 know abt d past...cont soon...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...Maan trying to manao Geet in filmy style...i wonder when will somebody sing for me like this on the roads of dehra dun...he he...
loved it...awesome part...but he is just falling for her beauty...

Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Vidushi89 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
The italic part luks lyk its in the last and maan had said these lines before
Why did maan freeze wen she said hu she was
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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