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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Strange~
Introduction:
Annie: A sweet girl and intelligent girl..who has lots of friends but someone comes in her life and attracts her towards him..
Daniel: A mysterious guy..who gets admission in college..not talkative..has no friends..and is a great business teenager..
Its a very strange story about me and a guy named daniel ...itz inspired from dream which i dreamt a few days ago..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept pm me when u update🤗
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~Strange~
Part 1:Meeting and Making New Friends...
Fisrt Day at college...i got admission in a well known college named Mount College...i entered the college..people were talking and some were sitting while mostly of them were finding the principal's office..i started walking..i asked a student standing near to me..
me:hi..!!. can u tell me where is the principal's office??..plzz..
student:sorry,i dont knw ...i m also new here..
me:oh..!!..sorry..
student:thts ok..
he said this and went away..
i asked a girl ...
me:umm..hi..!!..can u plz tel me where is principal's office..??
girl:ya..itz on the left of satdium..
me:and where is stadium??
girl:it rite there..silly..
she pointed to a vast plain where some boys were playing cricket..
i sighed and went..i was passing tht a ball hit me with full force..on my arm...
me:Ouch...!!!..aaah...!!...
i put hand on my arm and my luggage bag fell on ground..
a boy came running..
m soo sorry..!!..m really very sorry..plz forgive me..
me:thts ok..i knw it was an accident..
r u new here??
me:yes..my name is annie..
oh..my name is Tom..
we shaked hands..
t:u want to go to princi office?
me:ya..
t:i will take u there ...doll..
i blushed on hearing it..he took me to principal office..
me:may i come in?
p:oh..yes yes..
me:hello sir..!..m annie ..m scholarship student..
p:oh..yes yes..sit sit..ur results r marvellous...we would love to admit u in our college..
me:thnx..
p:so,u can hv ur classes by tomorrow..the girls hostel is rite there ..near to the jungle..
me:thnx alot..
p:ur welcome
i came out and took deep breath..i was going tht a girl was riding a bike and she almost crashed into me
me:heyy..!!..watch out..!!..
u stupid..wht were u doing huh??..suicide???
me:no..u were going to kill me..
u shld hv watched me coming..
me:look,i dont want to hv f8..
hmm..u sound intelligent..whts ur name?
me:annie
my name is sandy..
me:nice name
s:wht..??..nice..??..u call it nice.
i got confused...
me:ummm..ok..m going ..
s:where?
me:to hostel..
s:ok..oh w8!..can i leave u there..??
me:...umm..ya sure..
i sat on her bike and she dropped me at the hostel
me:thnx..
s:hey..no thnx no sorry in frndship..
me:ya..
i was happy tht i made 2 frnds in one day...
Next morning,i woke up..it was nearly 8:30..am and my class started at 8:45 am..now i was getting late..i dressed up,got my books..and started to walk..i was walking tht a car stopped and tom came out of it..
t:hi..princess...wht r u doing here.?
me:..m getting late..the class will start at 8:45 and m late..!
t:dont worry..i will leave u..
he took me to college ...i thanked him and ran as fast as i could..but unfortunately,the class had started ..now i slowly stepped into class..
Me:may i come in?
teacher:yes..y r u late??..dont u knw rules of college..?
me:srry..i arrived yesterday ..so,i tired and had slept alot..
teacher.:ur new thts y m forgivivng u but not next time..itz a warning..!!!!
me:ok..ma'm..m sorry..
i sat down wid sandy..after the class..she introduced me to some of her friends...i also made them my frnds..
s:there is a party at my house tonight..
me:oh wow..!!..when?
s:at 8
me:ok..i will be there...
s:hey..lets go to my house..
me:..okkk...lets go..!!!!!
PRECAP:I GO TO SANDY'S HOUSE..SUCH AWESOME HOUSE..!..
Note:Hope u liked it..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's kind of interesting FF...
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~Strange~
Part 2: Party at Sandy's House..
Me and Sandy were going...we reached Sandy's house...i didnt knew tht she belonged to a rich family..but seeing this i got to know about her..we entered her house..it was looking just like a palace...there were servants and beautiful things all around..
S:come on !!..dont u want to see the house..??.
me:ya...i want..
she took me upstairs..showed her room and all house..all of a sudden,we heard a women screaming.
SANDYYY...!!!!
me:sandy,i think she is calling u??..!!
s:who?
me:the women screaming..
s:...!!
a women came out of the kitchen..she had a spectula in her left hand and a water bottle in another...
me:who is she?
s:shhh...!!
Sandy...!!!...wht the hell were u thinking of huh??..u blew up the cooker..!!..wht were u doing with it..??tell me honestly or i m gonna slap u..!!..u hear me young lady...!!..
s:mom..!!..i was checking the cooker tht wht were u going to cook..today before going to college..and the flame of stove was light so,i thought i should heat it up but it blew up...
mom:?..u r such an idiot...!!!..if u dont knw how to cook so,dont touch things...but no..miss sandy has to check everything...
s:m sooo sorry...!!..look i made a new frnd..her name is annie..
sandy's mom noticed me now..
mom:ohhh..!!how sweet girl..!where u live lass?
me:i live in hostel...
mom:and ur parents..where they live?
me:they r dead..
mom:oppss..m soo sorry i didnt knw..
me:thts ok..
she smiled and took me with her to the lounge..
mom:now sit here..i will make some snacks for u
s:yahooo..!!
mom:not for u sandy
s:but y?
mom:its ur punishment..
s:thts not fair..
mom:it is..
she went and sandy sat wid me..
s:hey..can u do me a favour..?
me:wht..??..
s:plzz hide some snacks in ur bag so i can eat em later..bcz i hv no pocket money left and my mom will not let me eat till dinner..m starving..
me:mmm...i will request her to forgive u
s:try it..
aunt came there and served all snacks..i spoke gently
me:aunti...plz forgive sandy..she is hungry alot..and she has no pocket money
mom:wht...???..she wasted her pocket money...
sandy banged her head to wall..
me:i knw its bad..but plzz forgive her today..plzzz
mom:ok ok..but only this time bcz u r our guest..hmph..!
me:*sigh*
we all ate snacks..i went back to hostel and started getting some clothes out for party..i couldnt chose wht to wear..
me:this one...no..!itz colour not bright..oh..this..naa..this is too long..yess...this one is perfect..!!..i will wear this..
it turned night..i got ready for party..i was wearing light pink colour skirt..which was long till my knee..
i eneterd the party..all the arrangements were sooo nice...i met sandy who was wearing red shirt and jeans..
s:hi..annie..!!...
me:hi..
s:so,hws arrangements..??
me:very super duper..
s:thnx..
me:sandy..!!...wht hv u done..??
s:wht?
me:u said thnx..y?
s:oops..sorry..
me:ah..!.now u said sorry
s:forget it..
i went to the bar..i ordered a milk shake..and drank it..during it a girl named Diana eneterd the party..she was very proud..and considered herself the queen of college..sandy came to her..
s:hello miss bimbo..!..wht r u doing?
d:ur mom called me..
s:wht..???..but y?
d:maybe she didnt wanted me to miss party
s:u lieing !
d:she is coming..lets see..oh hello aunti..hw r u??
mom:m fine dear nd u nd ur mom?
d:they r f9...aunti..sandy is getting confuse tht who invivted me to this party..plz tell
mom:oh ya..sandy..i invited her..bcz u didnt i thought itz not nice to left someone..enjoy the party..
d:now,did u get it?
s:ya..i did..u loser..
me:umm..hi..diana..!..
diana took a glance at me and said with a filthy expression
d:hi..!
a girl called sandy and she went away...
d:can i talk to u? whatever ur name is..
me:itz annie
d:ya..whatevr...ur dress...itz quite ...down market u knw...my servents dont even wear dresses like this..i mean it soo ewww...!!..look at it..pink..!!..itz not "in"..nowadays...well,u can join me..
my eyes filled wid tears..but i controlled myself
me:no thnk u!...i dont need u or ur dresses..etc..
i went away..i met tom there..
t:hi..barbie doll..!!
me:hi..!
t:wht happened??..y ur face soo dull?
me:itz tht diana..she ruined my happy day..
t:wha ya yaara...!!..
me:wht u doing?
t:m gonna f8 her..
me:she is girl not boy..
t:i knw ..i hv to warn her to stay away frm u!
me:no itz ok..oh..itz almost 10:00pm..i hv to go or the hostel will close down..
t:but..!!
me:byee..and tell sandy too tht i m going..
t:ok..!
i was going through an empty road..it was cold..i heard a sound..like a bit scream..it was not too much..but very light.i started to go in the direction of jungle..the more i go..it kept on getting louder but all of a sudden,it stopped..i couldnt hear anything..i asided some bushes and wht i saw.i couldnt believe..a man covered in black was eating a human..he was eating as if it was chicken...i couldnt see him but only his back..he turned his face with speed but i couldnt see his face..i screamed and ran away..it followed me..i ran and ran..it had a knife also..i was asking for help...it caught my hand...and pulled me towards itself..we were so close..i was terrified..and was sweating..i could smell the blood..which was on his mouth..i tried to free myself..and in an instance it was gone..i went to hostel..closed the doors and windows..i couldnt forget the way he was eating a human..i changed my clothes..and went to sleep..
Precap:A new guy in college..he is weirdo...i m going to find abt the one whom i saw in jungle last night..
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~Strange~
Part 3: A New Guy in College..
The sun had risen..i got ready..picked up my bag and as usual i went to college on foot..it was soo cold..i couldnt forget wht i saw last night..it kept on coming in my mind..i thought tht i hv to find abt it or else maybe someone else could be eaten also..i was lost in my thoughts tht i saw bushes moving..i went there..i felt someone's presence but when i pushed them aside no one was there..i reached college..!..i met sandy and tina..we started to talk..now it was time for my class..i was going to my class but a car stopped..i went near the gate and stood there..everyone was frozen..a cute,fair and handsome boy came out of the car..wearing goggles..he took them off...and marched towards the principal's office..i kept following him..i was feeling as if he was attracting me like a magnet..but sandy came there and i stopped..he went away..
me:ahhh..!!..sandy!!!!..wht u want??
s:slow down..y r u getting angry..??..i was stopping u..u were following him..
me:huh?
s:come on..!!
me:but..??
s:come.!
i went to the class..in the class i was thinking abt him only...the class was over..i ran towards the gate..he was sitting in the car..and he drove...i then,made myself to investigate about that thing in forest...but how..??..it was the biggest question in my mind..
it was night,i came out of hostel..i had a camera,a wood and a knife in my hand..i went into the forest..i could feel something..i was very afraid..someone appeared out of nowhere but it wasnt it..it was new guy..gorgeous and fair..i stood up..he said
b:wht r u doing here at this time??(in hypnotizing and rude voice)
me:wht is tht to u?i m here for...ummm...aah...nothing...just sitting and feeling the pleasent atmosphere..
b:is tht so?
me:ya..
he went away by saying nothing..and i kept looking at him until i could see his slightest trace..nothing came there..i went back..
next morning,i couldnt wake up as i had woken up for very long time..but somehow i went to college..on the way i met tom..
t:heyyy...!!
me:hi..!
t:hws u?
me:f9
t:hw m i looking..??..hott huh?
me:umm..yaa
t:lets go..!
me:hmmm..
In car:
me:tom..!..do u knw something abt the new guy in college?
t:aa.hh..!no..i dont..y u askin?
me:oh..nothing..
the scene shifts and i m in class,tht boy also comes there and sits near me as class was full..
teacher:gm..oh..ur new student?
b:yes, yes i m(in lazy voice)
teacher:where u frm?
b:london
teacher:ok..wht ur parents do?
b:they r dead..
teacher:m sorry..so,u live wid ur aunt or uncle r8?
b:wrong..!!..i hv my own 500 crore business..after my parents' death i took control on their business..
teacher:wht ur name?
b:...daniel..
teacher:full name?
b:itz enough for u to knw..
teacher:u r ill mannered..dont u knw how to behave wid teachers..!!!!!!!!
he was quite..
i got just the info i wanted...thnx to teacher..but the thing which struck my mind was tht n8..
i was reading a book in library...when i looked around i saw tht daniel was looking at me..i felt shy and hid my face in the book..then,i went to put the book to its place..i took lader..i placed the book but the lader lost balance and i was gonna fell tht daniel caught me..we were lost in each others eyes..everyone was staring at us..the librarian coughed and we came into senses...i was in his arms and he opened his arms and i fell on ground...with a rude look he went away..i rushed away from there too..and sat under a shady tree..i saw him passing by me and he sat on the bench..he opened a book and started reading it..i also started reading..just then,diana came there..he sat close to daniel and said..
d:hi daniel..!..wht u doing?..ugh!!..reading book..forget it
she threw the book and daniel gave him an angry look..
d:heyy..!!..wht happened..?? dont u want to talk to me..?? hmmm..??
daniel: GET LOST..!!!!!!!!!
hearing this she said:oh come on sweet heart!..i knw ur past is so dreadful..only i knw this nobody else knows..
Daniel..:for ur kind info,i announced this in my first two classes..everybody knws..
d:ok..ok..geez..tum tu peeche hi pad jate ho..
she kissed him on his cheek and went away..i started to boil...i lost temper..i tore my notes..and broke my pencils into two pieces..i stood up and went to diana..
me:hey diana!!!
d:wht is it u freak?
me:i hv to say only 4 words to u: STAY AWAY FROM HIM..!!!!!!!!!
D:from who?
me:from daniel!
d:oh u mean my bf!
me:he isnt ur bf u fool..!
d:hw dare u call me fool..?
i fled away..so,tht there wouldnt be a cat f8
i went to forest..there was calm and quite..sunshine lited the forest..i w8ted there for tht thing but no luck nd i went back hostel..i got a phone call..
me:hello..!..who is this?
person:.stay away frm me and jungle..or i will have to kill u..
me:wht..??...r u tht ...eating human...??
person:yes,i m,and if u not stop following me i will have to eat u ..
me: *gulp*
call ended...
me:who could it be???
THE END..
PRECAP:I TRY TO TALK TO DANIEL..LETS SEE WHT'S HIS RESPONSE..??

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