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Posted: 14 years ago
Weee. Aweesomeblossom Upd, Naz 🤗
Lovely part, Yaar :) Upd sooon ❤️
Muwaah xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey naz... again here also sorry for being late... its lovely part... maan doing stripping is very funny... lol... 😆😆... priya seeing n then I laughed very much imagining maan's face then... 😆😆...
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Posted: 14 years ago
update kab milega ..
me waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI all...am I making you all waiting for long😳😆...hope you will enjoy the update...

Maan and Geet have a busy day in the office and return home all tired. Nandini rushes them to get ready as guests will be arriving soon. Priya tries to take permission to skip the party from dadimaa but dadimaa gets angry over it. Party starts and guests starts coming. All Khuranas take care of guests n all congratulate dadimaa now that her youngest grandson is back, the next party will be on his marriage. Dadimaa laughs n says sure...Maan and Dev are busy with the clients who came to the party...Maan asks Geet to get a file from their room..

Geet: Maan if dadimaa will come to know you are talking about business party she will get angry..
Maan: Geet. They are international clients. I had to cancel the meeting because of this party. It will just take few minutes...can you just get it..

Geet agrees and leaves to get the file. Geet goes to their room, searches for the file, and comes out. Geet senses somebody around, but thinks may be some servant. Geet starts walking through corridor when lights go off. Geet notices that only the corridor lights are off. She senses something bad and starts walking fast. She takes few steps when someone holds and drags her into a room. Geet is all shocked.

Geet: who is it?

She gets no reply. Geet shouts for help but the party music does not let her voice reach anyone. Geet is all scared..

Geet: What do you want??

Geet senses its the same person whom she had faced in the lift...Geet feels bad when the persons hands run all over her body. She tries to fight back, but in vain...As the person moves closer.

Maan is waiting for the file. He asks Priya to go help Geet to find the file. Priya walks towards Maneet room but sees its dark in the corridor so thinks of taking the other way.

Geet: Look...I dont know who you are but if Maan will know you are doing all this to me..he will not spare you..

He holds her by her hair, pulls closer, Geet collects all her strength pushes the person hard away from her and tries to escape from the room. He runs towards her and pushes her hard. she falls down but lands outside the room. He holds her leg n tries to pull her back but she holds the door and in the meantime breaks a vase.

Priya hears the noise. She walks towards the room, but she can hardly see anything.

Priya: somebody here? hello...Geet??
Geet: Priyaa..
Priya: Geet...Are you in the room?..

Priya walks into the room n switches on the light after bumping into some furniture. She is shocked to see horrified Geet. She looks around but finds no one. She walks out of the room n finds someone walking towards the hall where party is going. She runs to see who it is, but just finds a group of people talking. They look at Priya who came running. Priya just walks back to the room to Geet, gives her water, and makes a call to Maan who does not pickup as he does not notice. Priya consoles Geet who is shocked. She brings her down as she cant leave her alone.

Geet: Give this file to Maan.
Priya: but Geet...
Geet: no need to tell anyone anything as of now..
Priya: what...?
Geet: I dont wanna spoil the party. all are so happy n enjoying I dont wanna spoil their moods.
Priya: Ok.

Priya gives the file to Maan...Maan finishes his meeting n notices Priya still waiting as if she wanna say something..

Maan: you want to say something.?
Priya looks at Geet..n remembers her words.
Priya: Actually...
Maan: Anything wrong?
Priya: Someone...Geet...that room...I mean..

Maan does not understand anything but he walks towards Geet n puts her hands around her face. He finds her eyes to be swollen.

Maan: What happened?

Geet looks at Priya. Maan forces Geet to tell him what just happened...Maan gets all furious...Police is called...Maan Geet Priya n go outside n talk to them. Inspector looks at Geet n remembers the lift case n is hardly interested to taking up the case. Geet says she has not seen the person as it was dark

Inspector to Priya: Have you seen that person..
Priya: I have not seen him..but..
Inspector: are u at least sure its male not female..
Priya: actually...I dont know..
Inspector: u mean u have not seen him ..he shouts at her n she gets more confused...

Inspector: Mr. Khurana..I think ur wife needs a doctor..

Maan gets furious...n holds the inspector by his collar, but Geet stops him...police leave...

Maan: Dont worry Geet. I am there with you always..
Geet: I know Maan..

They 3 return to the party. Maneet sit in a corner. Priya takes a round and takes a close look at all the guests and tries to remember what she saw n remembers that person has worn something which reflected glittery light..so she comes to conclusion he has not worn a business suite...She is still in her search when a waiter gives her something to drink.. She just takes n drinks without noticing what it is..

waiter: Sir. she took the drink..
Vicky: Good...now its gonna be fun.

Priya starts feeling weird then things start to turn blurry for her..Vicky goes n pushes her to the dance floor..Priya looks around...music..colors..lighting..guests... n her past scene comes before her when they had a grand party and all praising her beauty and charm...she remembers dancing around her parents n starts dancing...Vicky gives a evil smile..now you are gonna be out of this house...Nandini goes n drags Priya back from dance floor n gets angry over her for behaving weird...She takes her to Geet n asks her to handle her friend...Maneet make Priya sit n Maan notices that Priya is not smelling of alcohol n both get suprised why she is behaving weird. Party ends...

All the khuranas gather. Maan tells dadimaa what just happened. Everybody go search the room n corridor but find nothing. Dev enquires about lights but finds it was just coincidence...dadimaa consoles Geet.

Nandini: All this was happening n ur friend was busy drinking n dancing even after knowing all this..
Geet: She is not drunk.
Nandini: di...please...have u seen her state..she is not in her senses...
dadimaa: Priya...whats wrong with you dear...what happened..
Priya is still in her own party mood n cant see Khuranas but starts imaging her own family...

***Precap: Dadimaa: Priya is not gonna stay in outhouse..***

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomw update
Wanna know hu this creepy weirdo is
Didn't lyk wat vicky did to priya
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update dear. Eagerly waiting for d nxt part. Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
who is da person after geet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update

who is this psycho ?

i guess vicky needs a lesson or two ...

continue soon

love
Sana

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