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Hi guys! M back wid another update but b4 i do dat i would like to Thank all of u from d Core of my heart. u guys r really loving nd supporting everytym. ur comments always motivates me nd inspires me to write more. So thanx to all of u. Nw here's d Part 36 of my FF. hope u all will like it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.

Nd ya one more thing i m trying to finish dis FF in d net 5-6 parts as i dnt want to drag it much like Ekta's Serial so keep commenting every1 until it goes

PART 36:

After having d lovely Dinner date both Maan nd Geet return back to Farm House. It was quiet Late nd next morning all of dem has to leave for Mumbai so it seems dat everyone has gone to sleep. Maan accompanies Geet till d Door of her Room. She wass about to enter d Door wen Maan hold her wrist nd Pulled her towards himself. His one arm was wrapped tightly around her waist nd his other Hand was holding her wrist tight. Both have an intense Eye lock for few moments.

Geet: Maan, wats wrong?

Maan: R u not Forgetting sumthing?

Geet (confused): Wat?

Maan: Dnt u knw?

Geet: no Maan. Nd I dnt think dat m forgetting sumthing

Maan: Really? R u sure?

Geet: ya. Acha u tell me wat I m forgetting?

Maan: u forgot to give me my Good night Kiss!!

Geet blushed at Maan's statement

Geet: Maan!!!

Maan: Wat Maan? C'mon give me

Geet (blushes even more): Maan stop it na. pls.

Maan: no, until u give me my Gud night Kiss.

Geet Struggles hard to get away from his Grip but he was too strong for her.

Geet: Maan Pls.! koi Aa jayega?

Maan: So? First of all everyone is sleeping nd secondly if by chance anyone comes also den I dnt think he or she would mind. Afterall I m wid my Would be Wife nd everyone over here knows about our relationship so think of any other reason ok.

Geet: So u wont give up.

Maan: u think I'll?

Geet (to herself): hhmmm So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana is stubborn! But m not less stubborn den u. lets see wat I do (den to Maan) Fine I just give u ur Good night kiss

Maan(surprised): Really?

Geet: ya. But close ur eyes first.

Maan: ok.

He said nd closes his eyes nd Geet started moving closer to him. He could Feel her breath falling on his Face. He smirks nd wishes he could see her face at dat tym. Geet first kisses his Forehead, den his Cheeks, den she came to his Lips. Maan started to lose himself wen he felt Geet near his lips. Geet could sense dis through his expression nd she knew dat it was d right tym. She was about to kiss his Lips wen she stops.

Geet (shocked): Armaan!!!!

Maan too instantly opens her eyes wen he listens Armaan's name he turned to look at d direction where Geet is Looking nd found no one. Geet find dis opportunity right she quickly pushes him away nd Ran towards her Room. Maan got confused in d sudden happening of incidents nd wen he realizes he saw Geet getting inside d Room.

Maan: Geeettt!!!!

Geet smiles holds her Ears, makes an innocent face to him nd gives him a Flying Kiss before she gets inside d Room which was enough for Maan to melt. Geet smiles once again nd shuts d Door of her Room leaving Maan behind smiling.

Maan: Pagal! But I Love her very much.

He said nd goes towards her Room.

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At the Room Geet quickly Changes into night Dress nd was about to go for Sleep wen she decides to check her mobile for any SMSs from Maan as she knew dat Maan will definitely Texts her after dis. nd she was rite there was a text from Maan.

"Today u got Escaped but not Next tym Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana because next tym I wont cum in ur tricks."

She both smiles nd blushes after reading his Msg. Maan addressing her Mrs. Maan singh Khurana always makes her feel special. She quickly texts him back

"Try Me Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Gud Nite nd Luv u a Loads"

Then she notices dat dere are few missed calls also nd it was from her Vindhya Di.

Geet (To herself): Oh Shit! Geet hw can u be so stupid. U haven't told Vindhya Di About it yet. She must be worried for u. idiot, stupid, Fool. Well its not late yet. Call her nw.

She said nd started dialing her number. After two-Three Rings Vindhya finally picks up d Call.

Geet: Hello Di!!!

Vindhya: Geet! Thank god u called. Y were u not picking up ur Phone? U knw hw much worried I was? Where was u in d evening?

Geet: Wo Di I was Wid Maan

Vindhya: Wid Maan? Nd wat u r doing wid him?

Geet: Wo... we had a date today.

Vindhya: wat date? Geet u really confusing me now? Yesterday u said dat everything is over between u two nd Maan Loves Savera nd all dat Crap nd nw u r saying dat u had a date wid Maan. Would u bother to explain me wats actually going on over dere?

Geet: oh I m sorry Di! I couldn't able to catch u after dat actually the thing is...(nd she explained everything to her which was happened till nw) nd at last it was only me who was stupid to think that Maan Loves someone else but it was just a part of their Plan nd he loves me.

Vindhya: Geet u knw wat, u r stupid no idiot to think that Maan could do such a thing. I told u also that Maan is not like dat but still u came to d conclusion.

Geet: Ab SORRY bola na Di. Ho gayi Galti.

Vindhya: u better be nd from next tym dnt go straight to the conclusion. First clear d confusion wid him den only decide sumthing.

Geet: I promise Di.

Vindhya: Good. Acha Tell me sumthing?

Geet: ya wat?

Vindhya(naughtily): Did Maan kissed u at date?

Geet (blushes): Wat? Di wat kind of question is dis?

Vindhya: y cant I ask dis? c'mon u never hides anything from me. Tell na

Geet: Di its Too late I think I should go to sleep now.

Vindhya: hey Geet, tell na?

Geet: Dats it Di, m putting d Phone down. Gud nite nd sweet Dreams nd Give my Love to Parth.

Vindhya: Arey Geet suno to... (she said but den notices dat she cuts d call)

Vindhya (to Herself): Jhalli! But thank god everything is fine nw. Babaji Pls Keep her always Happy like dis only.

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Next Day every1 left for Mumbai nd in d evening Savera has gone Back to London. She agains takes d Promise from Geet dat she wont tell anything about her disease to any1 not even Maan. Geet Promised her but only in d condition dat she'll go thru every possible treatment to save her life. At d terminal Geet nd Savera were hugging each other. It was weird but true dat dey met just a few days Before nd nw just created a sisterly bond between dem.

Geet: Savera, Promise me that u'll take care of urself nd will get well soon.

Savy: I promise Geet, I'll take care of myself. Nd dnt worry I'll attend urs nd Maan's Marriage nd not to Forget my stupid Bro's Marriage too. Arey nothing would Happen to Savy so soon. So relax!

Geet said nothing but smiled

Savy: U knw wat Geet, I had came here to help my friend nd nw wen m going I got two more d ever cutest best buddies i.e. u nd Shilpa. M sure she's perfect to become my Bhabhi. Acha by d way can I ask u sumthing?

Geet: ya Sure

Savy: do u have Vridant's no or any Idea where he resides at London

Geet (confused): Vridant but y?

Savy: u knw we both lives at London nd we both r heart-Broken so m thinking that we two will have a perfect Match. Wat say?

Geet: Savy, u cant be serious

Savy: m Damn Serious yaar. It would be best. SAVERA nd VRIDANT!!! Sounds PERFECT!!!!

Geet: Shut up Savy. U deserve a 100 tymes better guy den Vridant.

Savy: ok ok ms. Geet cool down I was just kidding

Geet: better be.

Suddenly dey heard d security Check announcement

Savy: ok tym for me to go

Geet: But where is Armaan nd everyone else?

Savy: who knows my Brother better den me he must be at Parking Lot weeping because m going nd Maan nd Shilpa were consoling him

Geet laughs at her statement.

Savy: ok nw I really have to go so u just take care of urself nd of others 3 too.

Geet: ofcourse.

She said nd hugged her again nd watches her until she get disappeared.

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Next Day everything has became Back to Normal. Armaan nd Shilpa gets busy in d Sanjeevani nd Maan nd Geet at KC. But d only difference is dat they always seeks chances to glance at each other nd finds excuses to meet alone. Geet nd Maan both were working at their respective Cabins stealing glances of each other wen Pinki came to her.

Pinki: Hey Geet!

Geet: Hey Pinki! Hws u?

Pinki: I m fine as always. But wats wrong wid u?

Geet: Means?

Pinki: arey means from last few days u r acting so weird. I mean u suddenly Gone for 1 week without even telling us nd den wen u came back u were very much disturbed nd den again no contact of u for 2 days nd now today also u didn't even meet me in d morning. U knw hw much I missed u but it seems u didn't missed me a bit

She said while making face

Geet: Aww my sweet Pinki m so Sorry dear. But trust me I missed u a lot but really got stuck up in sum Personal Stuffs but nw everything is fine

Pinki: Pakka

Geet: haan Baba Pakka.

Suddenly Pinki notices d Pendant at Geet's neck.

Pinki: Wow Geet its so Preety. But ye pehle to tere paas nahi tha.

Geet: haan Wo... Actually...

Pinki: ok ok I understand ye tumhare Fiance ne di na tumhe? Aur wo bhi inhi Do dino me? Hai na?

Geet blushes remembering all d moments nd den looked at Maan's Cabin where he was working. Pinki waved her hand in front of her

Pinki: Oye Geet, kaha kho gayi bata na?

Geet: Haan, he gave me.

Pinki: Wow Geet, u r really very lucky yaar. He really loves u a lot

Geet (smiles): I knw

Pinki: To bata kab milwa rahi hai mujhe Jiju se

Geet broke into laughter as soon as she hear word Jiju from Pinki's mouth. She laughed thinking dat Pinki everyday meets her "Jiju" but still curious to know. She wonders wat happens wen she came to know who is her Jiju

Pinki: Geet I haven't cracked a joke over here dat u r laughing like hell

Geet (controls her laughter): I m Sorry Pinki, wo mujhe kuch Yaad aa gaya tha. Dnt worry very soon u'll meet ur Jiju.

Pinki: Promise?

Geet: Promise

Dere talks were interrupted by Peon who came there to inform Geet dat Maan is calling her to discuss some designs. Geet smirks as she knew dat which design he was going to Discuss. Pinki takes her leave as soon as she heard dis nd Geet goes towards Maan's Cabin.

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On d other Hand Sasha was pacing furiously in her Room its been almost 5 months since Geet ahs joined d Office nd she still cant find a way to get rid from her, moreover she noticed d closeness between Her nd Maan which was unbearable to her. She had to think some way to get rid of her. She was thinking about some plan wen she noticed dat Geet is going towards Maan's Cabin. She smirks as she know dat she'll definitely get something which will help her in her plan. By thinking dat she quietly Follows her without getting noticed.

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On d way of going towards Maan's Cabin Geet as usual blabbering wid herself

Geet (To herself): Ye Maan bhi na, har waqt koi na koi bahana chahiye milne ka aur kuch nahi to designs ka hi bahane milne bula liya. Agar office me kisi ko shak ho gaya to, par nahi ye baat inhe kaun samjhaye. Inhe to romance se hi fursat nahi milti. Koi nahi Geet abhi aaram se baith k use samjha dena. Hai na! haan.

Saying dis she slowly knocks at d Door of his cabin. Maan very well knew dat it was Geet. He quickly get himself seated on his chair nd opens d file in front of him to show dat he's actually working.

"Come in" He said.

Geet enetered inside d cabin nd saw him concentrating in his file she knews dat it was all fake. She quickly goes to him nd poked him on his shoulder. Maan acts like he didn't noticed it, she again poked him

Geet: Maan!

Maan gives no response

Geet (raises her voice): Maan!!

Maan raises his head nd saw her standing in front of him.

Maan: Arey Geet tum? Tum kab aayi?

Geet: Good Question. Well is duniya mein 22 Saal 2 mahine 10 Din 11 ghante 25 minutes aur 56 seconds pehle aur tumhare cabin mein 5 min pehle

Maan: Geet I m not getting a word of u.

Geet: O really! Maan stop acting nw. I knw dat u r just finding excuse to meet me alone.

Maan: wen did I said dat?

Geet: Maan, dnt be innocent ok.

Maan (gets up from chair): ok in case u dnt like Innocent people so... (he pulled geet closer to him nd wrapped his Arms around her waist tight) I'll be naughty den.

Geet (tries to free herself): Maan wat r u doing? We r in Office.

Maan (leaning closer to her): So?

Geet (looking staright into his eyes): anyone can come?

Maan (still getting closer): So?

Geet: dey will see us like dis?

Maan: So?

Geet: dey will... talk about... Us (her voice trailed off as she felt Maan's Warm breath on her neck.)

Maan: So?

Geet couldn't say anymore as Maan dipped his head in her hair forming almost a hug. Geet closes her eyes. This is not d first tym he touched her but everytym he touches her she felt Thousand butterflies running in her stomach. His touch was truly Magical.

"Geet" He slowly whispered in her ears. His warm breath falling on her ears make her tremble.

" I told u na next tym u wont be able to escape" he whispered in her ears nd Geet opens her eyes nd looked at his Dark Brown eyes which was looking at her intensely. She quickly gains her sesnses nd tries to Push him again but he was too quick nd he caught her by holding her wrists nd crashed her against him by making his grip tight on her waists. Geet eventually gave up nd looked at him with her big hazel eyes.

Geet: Maan! Wats dis?

Maan: Wat? M just loving my Lady Love

Geet: o really? Here in d office?

Maan: y? its not written in any book dat we should love our Partner only particular places we can love dem anywhere all wat important is the feelings should be true

Geet: Not bad Mr. Maan Singh Khurana (she said while encirciling her arms around his neck) u r getting Romantic Day by Day

Maan: Wat to do wen I had such a beautiful girl in front of me

He said nd again started to lean closer to kiss her wen geet pushes him a bit

Geet: Chaddo Maan! Har waqt lafanga giri.

Maan: Lafanga giri?

Geet: aur Kya? Office hours me yeh Sab? Mr. Maan Singh Khurana aap shayad bhool rahe hai k aap is company k MD hai aur aapki kuch responsibilities hai aur agar aap isi tarah se karte rahe to office me Taale lag jayenge

Maan: To kya hua Geet? Tum to fir bhi mere saath rahogi na

Geet: Maan! Enough now. U remember na u had meeting with Mr. Mehta after 1 hr. so first concentrate in dat.

Maan: ok but in 1 condition

Geet: Wat?

Maan: u'll wish me ALL D BEST.

Geet: ok, ALL D BEST.

Maan: not like dis

Geet: Den?

In reply he again started leaning closer to her. She understands his intentions she quickly pushes him away nd gets herself freed from him.

Geet: Fir Masti? Chup chap concentrate on ur work? (she warned showing her index finger to him)

Maan (murmurs): isne to abhi se Wifes wali harkate shuru kar di

Geet: kya bola tumne?

Maan: nahi Geet I was saying dat if u say ALL D BEST in my way den my Meeting will be successful

Geet: Very Good logic Mr. MSK but it doesn't work on me

Maan (looked away in anger): Fine den I'll go without taking ur wishes only.

Geet: Good for u

Maan (murmurs): Good for u

he notices dat geet is moving towards d Door so now no chance of Good luck in his way. Den suddenly he feels her lips on hus cheeks. She quickly came to him Kiss him on his cheeks nd said " ALL D BEST" nd before Maan could react she ran out of d cabin leaving Maan dumb founded. Maan touches his cheek nd smiles at her

"Pagal" he said nd den again get back to work. He wished to God dat dey will become as happy as they r nw always nd no one can ruin it. But d least he knew dat someone is watching them nd planning to do something which can separate dem. It was SASHA who gets furious first wen she saw both of dem dis much close but den smirks as nw she knows wat to do.

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa was going to OPD for rounds. Suddenly she felt a strong hand at her wrist nd before she could understand she get pulled by him towards d Fire Escape. She was about to scream wen he shuts her mouth wid his palm. Only den she watches the face of dat Person who pulled her nd it was none other den ARMAAN.

Armaan Slowly removes her Hand from her mouth nd looks at her eyes Deep. He notices d starnds on her face which was due to d sudden pull. He tucked dem behind her ears nd dey had an Eye lock Session for few minutes wen Shilap decided to break d silence.

Shilpa: Armaan!

Armaan: hhmmm

Shilpa: y did u pulled me over here?

Armaan: y? r u afraid of me being alone

Shilpa: no Armaan nothing like dat

Armaan: its ok Shilpa, I was just kidding. Actually I want to give sumthing to u

Shilpa: Wat?

Armaan: first close ur eyes.

Shilpa did d same Armaan took out a ring from his Pocket nd slips in her Finger. It perfectly fits her like meant for her only. She felt something slipping in her finger nd she was curious to see it.

Shilpa: Armaan! Can I open nw?

Armaan: no Shilpa m nt done yet

By saying dis he turned her so dat she her back faces him. He slides her hairs to one side on d shoulder gently caressing her back nd den puts a chain around her neck nd den turned her towards him so dat she can face him.

Armaan: nw open

Shilpa instantly opens her eyes nd saw a Beautiful ring on her finger. She smiles nd den she looked down nd sees dat a Beautiful Pendant hanging on her neck. It was d same pendant which Armaan tries to gift her dat day but she didn't take it as she was not sure about his feelings yet nd Armaan promised dat very soon she'll accept dis gift nd nw its d rite tym to gift.

Shilpa: Armaan dis...

Armaan: u like it?

Shilpa: Like it? I loved it Armaan. Thank u so much

She said nd hugged him tight nd he too responded nd hugs her tight.

Armaan: just be wid me like dis only Always nd I promise dat I'll fulfill all ur wishes

Shilpa: I don't want to wish for anything else as long as u r wid me. I just wish dat we always be together like dis only.

Armaan: We will be

He said nd hugs her more tight nd kisses a soft kiss on d top of her head.

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In KC, it was 3 PM nd every1 is working. Maan was out of office due to meeting nd Geet was in her Cabin working on sum project wen she realizes dat she needs to go thru d Account file of dis Project before she works further on it. She came out from her cabin nd started moving towards Adi's Cabin wen she notices dat every1 was looking at her suspiciously. She didn't understand y every1 is looking at her strangely today. She scanned herself from Top to Bottom. She was perfectly fine den y every1 is looking at her so strangely. Den she decided to shrug all her thoughts nd again started moving towards Adi's Cabin wen she was stopped in her tracks by Sasha.

Geet: Wats it Sasha Mam?

Sasha: u were asking me

Geet: I don't think anyone else has stopped my way

Sasha: Well Geet u r not so innocent dat u dnt knw anything. By d way from where did u get these tricks from?

Geet: I m really not getting wat r u trying to say Sasha Mam.

Sasha: Aww Poor Baby. She's is so innocent. Dnt try to act smart Geet I know all ur intentions

Geet: listen Sasha Mam I really dnt knw wat u r saying nd I dnt want to waste my tym in ur silly talks so let me go.

She said nd about to go wen Sasha held her Arms to stop

Sasha: dnt try to avoid my questions geet. I know very well d Girls like u.

Geet: Maine aisa kiya kya hai Sasha Mam.

Sasha: u are asking me. Hw shameless u r.

Geet(yelled): SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP! U have no rite to say anything about me without any reason

Sasha: So u want reason. Ok I'll give u. will u bother to tell me about dis?

She said nd showed sumthing in to Geet after seeing which Geet widens her eyes. She haven't thought day sumday she has to gone thru dis Phase nd She very well knew dat it was done by SASHA but at dat moment she was not in d state of clarify herself or answer her back.

Sasha: So ms. Geet Malhotra m waiting. Would u bother to tell me dat wat u r doing in dis Pic wid ur Boss dat too so close to him.

Tears started forming in her eyes she don't know wat to do? Hw to answer her back? Becoz at dat moment her brain has stopped working nd she was really praying dat sum miracle could happen nd she gets out from all dis.



So Guys this is it. Sorry no Precap dis Tym also😆. hope u all like it feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it nd keep commenting. will PM every1 later currently doing official work so will PM every1 as soon as i reach home so dnt get Mad on me if u didnt get my PM. Press d like button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism its necessary.😊😊


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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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great part aakriti...
awesome...
loved maaneet moments...
sash daayan...😡😡
i hope maan comes at this point and bashes sasha...
plz continue soon
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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well very nice
I think now pinky will know about her JIJU
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Fab part... Loved it... Naughty maan and naughty geet... Evil sasha... And i know anyhow Maan is going to save her lady love...
Plz cntinue soon..
Waiting!!!

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