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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
with geet I was also laughing...LMAO🤣
Cotinue soon!
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loved the update./...
n adi was too hilarious 🤣
wonder what maan will do him 😆
cant wait for their date
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for d link yaar...
luvd ds ss...
maan s so romantic...i luvd conversation b/w adi and maan...
i was laughing holding my stomach...
pls pm me d nxt part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome SS!!! its more funny than romantic😉 Can't imagine Maan putting up such an act to get Geet in KC, bechara Adi aage kya kya nahi karna padega...
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🤣this part is very funny

ur sense of humour is too good😉
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wow...nice part yaar...
ab adi toh gaya ...
plzz update it soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha! your updates are amazing! I finally read them all! plz plz update soon!

I loved Maan and Adi's interaction in the room in from of Geet! NIce payback by ADi lol 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...!!!!
LOL...!!!!
adi was hilarious...!!!!
chusa hua aam...ROFL...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
love Adi acting like Maan, and trying to make use of the opportunity ...
now when she will find about him??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,
Sorry for the delay...but finally an update for this 😆
Enjoy!
Part IX
Everyone in the accounting department was shocked to see Maan sitting there. They were so scared to move let alone do their work. Maan chose to sit next to Geet and was showing her around. He was relieved when Geet didn't pick up who he really is. Maan looked at Geet who was smiling to herself while working. "What is she thinking about? Maybe our date. what should I do? Maybe I should ask Adi for more help. wait umm no I can't. He is already doing so much for me and besides I can do anything without anyone's help. but what? Think Maan..you have done so much what's one more. I will tell her the whole truth during out date but I have to make sure it is something special so when she sees all the hard work I put into my date, she will forget what I did. but first let me find out what she is thinking to see if she wants me to do something special.." (he pokes on her shoulder. Geet looks at him with a smile)

Maan: What happened?

Geet: Nothing just thinking...

Maan "Thinking about our date I see..." hmm about what? You are smiling

Geet: umm I don't know if I should say it...

Maan: Come on you can say anything..what is so funny?

Geet: Well I was thinking about MD

Maan "I knew it..she was thinking about our date...wait, hold on Maan...did she say MD? She was thinking about Adi? Why was she smiling to herself then?" What about him?

Geet: I just found it funny. Pinky told me MD is such a DD but I didn't find any of that sort. I was thinking what is wrong with her eyes

Maan: DD? ("Yeh DD kya hai? They gave me a nickname in the office behind my back? And this Pinky, she talks a lot I need to fix her..I wonder what else she told about me. I hope she doesn't tell the truth to Geet about me before I do. I need to make sure Pinky doesn't come near Geet at all.")

Geet: Haan DD..you know...(she looks down feeling shy) Dhak Dhak...

Maan ("hmm dhak dhak..I like that nickname...they chose such a perfect name for me..."): dhak dhak..aur our MD?

Geet: yeah that is what Pinky was saying along with him being mean and whatnot but I didn't see any of that sort. He looked more like a monkey then DD. He should be working in a circus. I mean from what angle does it look like he is mean and khadus? ("see I told Adi to work on his acting. He had to look believable. I have to give him more training tonight." just then he sees Pinky coming toward Geet. When she stepped next to her...she forgot what she was going to say when Maan gave her a deadly glare) Pinky hey do you need something?

Pinky (still looking at Maan's death glare) woh umm lu lu lunch time

Geet: Are you ok? Why do you look like you saw a ghost? (she looks at Maan who softens his expression a bit for Geet and smiles at him. She looks back at Pinky where again Maan was giving her a deadly glare signaling for her to go...)

Pinky (gulps): bye Geet..I have something to do...(she huriddly left from there while Geet looks at her confused...)

Geet: I wonder what happened to her? She never did this before.

Maan: hmm she will be ok am sure. umm Geet it is lunch time, do you want to go?

Geet ("haila..lunch and with him...oh my god I know I am going to embarrass myself. I am such a accident prone whenever am nervous. Only I know how I composed myself all day today. What should I do? I can't say no to him or else he will feel bad. He did help me out a lot already...") umm sure..lets go to the cafeteria.. (All the employees look at Geet and Maan with shock. Maan led Geet in front of him while he followed her. He looked back at all his employees with anger. All the employees started scattering around the department pretending to do something. Geet turned around to look at Maan when she noticed that he wasn't behind her and was shocked to see all employees running around. She goes up to Maan..) What happened? Why is everyone running around?

Maan (looks at Geet.."what should I say? I can't say that I was scaring them...think of something...") haan they saw a bug on the floor and started running around...

Geet (looks on the floor..): Where is it?

Maan: You have to be scared...

Geet: I am not scared..I am looking for it so that I can kill it...

Maan (disappointed..."Damn she is not scared of bugs...I imagined her to be scared and run into my arms like they show in the movies. She is something alright. Not like most girls...hmm of course she had to different after all its my choice.") umm maybe its gone..anyway lets go for lunch (As they were both walking toward the cafeteria..Adi came and stopped in front of them. He tried to pull off MSK "glare" look but well lets just say he made a fool of himself. Geet tried so hard not to laugh while Maan gave Adi a signal to move...)

Adi: Where are you two going? (folds his hand over his chest like Maan did)

Maan: We were going to eat lunch

Adi: hmm (he walks off in Msk "style" but because of the way he was walking it looked like someone had hit him on his butt...Geet started laughing out loud while Maan shook his head with displeasure..."Meri sari waat laga di is Adi ne...He can't even walk properly...he has a long night ahead of him")

Geet: I can't believe that he is the MD of this company. I mean he is nothing like the way i thought he would be. He is funny.

Maan ("Great...he made me a clown in front of Geet...now what...wonder what else I have to hear...") umm shall we go?

Geet: Yeah...(Both went to the cafeteria...everyone looked at Maan shocked there was a pin drop silence. This was his first time entering the cafeteria, Geet looked around at everyone and then looked at Maan. "What happened? Why is everyone so silent? Is there something on my face or my clothes?" She begins to check herself making sure there are no stains or anything of that sort. Maan looked at her confused.)

Maan: Geet what are you doing? (he whispers)

Geet: Checking if I have something on me.

Maan: Why?

Geet: Because everyone is starring at us...(she points to everyone in the cafe with her eyes...he looks at everyone..."damn everyone is ought to get me..I have to do something..")

Maan: umm Geet I see something on your face..why don't you check it out over there at the shiny counter? (He slightly pushes Geet toward the area. Once he made sure she wasn't looking he glared at everyone that made them stop eating and gulp in fear. Maan came near one table that was empty and sat down. People around his table got up in fear, one of whom almost fell down, one by one everyone left the cafeteria...No one dared to look at him while leaving. Few that did stay, moved to a far away table away from Maan. Geet turned around and was shocked see almost no one there ...)

"What is going on? First everyone in the office started running around and now everyone in the cafeteria disappeared. This office is so weird. I wonder what they saw?" She goes up to Maan and sits next to him.

Geet: Where is everyone?

Maan: Woh they all left after finishing their lunch. Anyway what would you like to have?

Geet: Lets see what we have...(Both got up and went to the counter and looked at the option in front of them. Pinky came in the cafeteria to eat but stopped in her tracks when she saw Maan sir there. She turned around quickly to leave but Geet spotted her and called her over) Pinky come here where are you going? Eat with us.

Pinky (turned around and looked at Maan in fear): woh umm no I ate

Geet: When? I didn't see you here when I came

Pinky: woh um I ate at my desk. I have to go now...bye (she quickly left the cafeteria leaving confused Geet behind...)

Geet: I wonder what happened to her? She has been acting weird all day today.

Maan: hmm I don't know...

Geet: I think I should go behind her and ask...(she puts the plate down and was about to walk away when Maan held her hand. The people that were left in cafeteria started choking seeing Maan hold someone's hand. Maan looked at them with anger.)

Maan: I mean don't go..she should be fine..maybe she is stressed due to work...it happened before

Geet: hmm maybe you are right. It must be because of that khudus MD...what does he think of himself? Doesn't he know how to treat his employees. I mean you saw her right the poor girl is so scared and worried every time I see her. That dusht danav...just because he is the MD doesn't mean that he can rule over everyone. (Maan listened to her talking all about MD cursing and calling him names..."yeh to band hone ka naam hi nahi leh rahi...kya main itna bura hoon? Meri kya galti hai agar Pinky mujhse darti hai? I was only looking at her nicely but not as nicely as I look at Geet.)

Maan: Geet stop..aren't you running out of words for MD?

Geet: ha I just got started...(Both sat down on their table...)

Maan: Anyway Geet forget that...I wanted to ask you something...

Geet (looks at him confused..."oh god I hope he is not telling me that he likes me. I don't know what I would do if he does. How would I react? I knew I should've wore something nice. Damn it..I should see it coming...but anyway what will I say back? He has to be expecting an answer...I didn't practice my lines in front of a mirror...oh my god I am going to embarrass myself.." (she looked at him and he smiled at her) "aahh am gonna die if he gives me that smile every time...its ok Geet take a deep breath..and make sure you think before you talk..." : umm about what?

Maan: Well about the deal we had

Geet ("deal? Kaunse deal? Kab? oh my god think Geet think...what did you say and when did you say it? aaahhh my mind blanked out...I can't remember...I should just play along...nice and smooth...don't over do it...maybe he will tell you about the deal..." she smiled..) ohh yeah that deal...I remember

Maan (sighed in relief.."thank god..I knew she wouldn't forget...now I need to find out when she is free and make plans according to that...") Ok great...so when...

Geet ("yeh kya ho raha hai? When ka kya jawaab doon? kya kahoon? if he is asking when then let me pick something randomly...hmm ok...i got it..."): umm Saturday?

Maan ("woohhoo...ok I have to plan a lot") Alright so I will let you know the time...

Geet ("time? now what should I do? I just picked a random day...what is he talking about?") time?

Maan: Yeah time..you know for our date...(Geet chocked on her food hearing date..."date? OH MY GOD..how can I forget...am not ready but if I tell him that it will hurt his feelings...what should I do..I can't even sit in front or talk to him without embarrassing myself..how am I going to handle a date...and that too ALONE? I am dead...I need to tell him right now that I am not ready..." She was about to speak when Maan held her hand and started gently stroking her hand with his thumb and smiled at her...Geet voice got stuck in her voice...she opened her mouth to say something but no voice came out...Maan looked at her worringly and stood by her side...and started patting her back...)Geet are you ok? Say something?

Geet ("how can I say something if you are this close to me? and on top of that you are touching me...he looks so cute with his worried face...and his smile...(sigh) Geet come out of your thoughts and answer him..he is waiting for you...") I am fine (she said in a squeaky voice)

Maan: Are you sure?

Geet: yeah (she clears her throat and smiles at Maan. Maan goes back to his seat after making sure she is ok...)

Maan: You had me worried there for a minute...anyway I will pick you up on Saturday around 8. Is that ok with you?

Geet (How can I say no? I have no other choice..damn I need to go home asap and practice...) Umm yeah its fine...

Maan (holds her head) I can't wait...(He kisses her hand...with a smile..Geet blushes and quickly pulls her hand away and walks away..."aahh I love it when she blushes..I have to tell Adi...I finally asked her out..." He gets up as well..and leaves)
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Maan was about to knock on his cabin door but stopped remembering who is the real boss here..He barges in the cabin to find Adi with his head on the table sleeping..."That a$$ I specifically had told him some work he has to do on behalf of me and here he is sleeping. Iss pyar ke chakar main main apni company toh na koh doon...jaldi mujhe kuch karna pade ga warna Adi ne toh poora intezam kar diya hai...let me wake him up first...") He sees a glass of water and throws it on his face. Adi wakes up in a jerk and looks at Maan..

Adi: What the hell. Is this a way to wake someone up?

Maan: You shouldn't be sleeping in the first place.

Adi: This job is boring. Nothing to do.

Maan: You were suppose to do what I assigned you

Adi: Yeah but I didn't get it...so I was waiting for you

Maan: fine move over...let me do it...(Maan spends next hour and half catching up all the work...after he was done he calls Sasha in to give her directions. After she was gone Maan turns toward Adi..) Anyway, I came here to tell you that I finally asked Geet out...

Adi: What? You serious? Finally a first step

Maan: Yeah..but for now I need to prepare for the night...so am gonna go..ohh and meet me at my house tonight...its important

Adi: Alright...bye...(As soon as Maan left he went to sleep...)
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At Khurana Mansion Dadima was walking by Maan's room when she heard some noises. She opened the door a little bit and saw Maan instructing Adi on how to walk and talk like him..."Hey bhagwan..kya ho raha hai? Is he planning on opening MSK Acting School? Is he starting an army of himself? for what? The world can't handle one MSK god knows what's gonna happen with army of them running around all over...I need to talk to Punditji and do a havan ceremony for him. Poor Adi...he has to bear with Maan...he looks so tired..."

Precap: Date
P.S. I am little stuck on what to do on their date...any ideas guys? Such as what song should be used that is funny and romantic at the same time...

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