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Posted: 14 years ago
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In the morning Piya woke-up in a very happy mood , but was shocked when she realized that she had missed the first lecture and was late for her second ; it was something that had never happened Piya had never missed any of her classes . She rushed up to bath and change for college but reached only for the third lecture . It was her favorite - Classic English by Miss. Supriya Saigal . This was her second day in Ms. Saigal's class and she found the class well packed . She took the forth row beside a girlie dressed loudly laughing girl . The moment she sat the other girl turned to her and shouted , "Ooh! New Girl . I've never seen you here , where are you from , I'm Ruhi and everyone know me as the most popular , most beautiful Tracker . You can ask me anything and i'm the one who knows all the answers-"

Ms. Saigal - " But you just fail to put them in your answer sheet right . Don't forget your a repeater Ruhi Juneja . And Piya you will be lucky if this girl leaves you alone . Everybody this is Piya Jaiswal a school and inter-college topper and Brockdale full scholarship winner ."

There was very less applause . Piya didn't want any appreciation but this was a bit surprising .

Ms. Saigal -" Oho Come On students.. the full scholarship is being won by any student after a decade ."

For this it looked like few students understood and clapped loudly and the class continued . According to the syllabus they will be working on William Shakespeare's Romeo & Juliet for the first 4 months . They had to first read the play to understand the 17th century's word styling , later see the 16's and 18's version plays' and present a thesis understanding , analyzing , classifying and comparing the various plays . Piya likes classic novels but she had never read a Shakespeare, she noted to pick the book from the library . The rest of the college was fine and in the lunch she met her economics and history professors to apologize for missing the class and they forgave her .

After her 5th class Piya thought of taking a round of the college before going to the library . She noticed that the college had more number of students than yesterday , more number of bikes and cars and more number of modeling girls and whistling boys . Piya herself received a few whistles from a group of boys and there was one guy who was stopping them , she didn't know who he was but thought of thanking him if ever they meet .

Piya reached the shadowed yard behind the college close to the jungle and saw two girls . One was short with dirty un-combed hair in baggy jeans and the other even from a distance looked like a fashion freak . When she got closer she knew who they were , the baggy jeans was Misha and the other was Tea or Tiya ; these were the names Piya heard more than 100 times in college . Misha was laughing loudly , enjoying seeing the other bounded badly who was struggling to hold her balance and eventually fell . Piya couldn't see this anymore , she walked to them -

T - "Misha , what are you looking at .. why don't you get down and help me ?'

Misha - "T , trust me darling you look more beautiful like this . Anyway I didn't do this and i know you don't need any help right . what did you say - 'T is a perfectionist , she never needs any help !'.."

Piya saw that it would be stupid to expect Misha to help T , so she just got-down and started untying the knot .

Misha - "Ohai! Madam Big Head Winner why don't you just mind your work and leave the little brainless bimbo to me ?"

Piya - "Look who ever you are , you can't do this ."

Piya untied the other girl and help her to stand . She swept her dress and hair and tried to stand but almost fell again , Piya caught her . Seeing this Misha made face .

Misha - "See Miss Perfectionist ! you need help even for standing . And looks like you have another tail in your butt ." Saying this she left .

T - "What no i don't need any help . And you Charity candidate stay away from me . God my dress , my hair i look such a mess !" and she also left .

Piya was shocked . One was bossing over a girl and the other screamed straight on her face just for helping her . She didn't know where she went wrong and leaving this she rushed to the library to pick the book . Piya spent the evening and the night trying to read the novel but kept repeating the same page , around mid-night she slipped to a very uncomfortable sleep .

Next morning Piya woke-up hours before sunrise and felt very impatient . Her whole day passed in a blur and in the evening she couldn't remember any minute of her morning . Piya was confused as such thing never happened to her . Throughout the night she tried to re-collect her life in day but failed .

Abhay and his family were traveling from Delhi to Dehradun . In two days he had crossed 3 continents to get to Dehradun . Drishti and Rhone left for Hawaii from Tibet and later moved to North America . After that Chand Haseena and Abhay reached Mexico crossing Cape Town and reached to Delhi from London . They had to travel only in the times of sun to avoid Salazar . Back in Dehradun the story was set , a Business family from London wished to return to mother land India and preferred to settle in Dehradun . In the new place they will be called Raichand , who had purchased the old house in north Dehradun closer to the mountains . Things were well planned , the story was set flawlessly and half of the assets of the city were now linked to the Raichands . Already the business sector of the city was waiting to have a look at them , the name was goggled which told the history of Chand Raichand from London . Chand Raichand a business tycoon from UK was born and bot-up in London but was strongly rooted to India by family and tradition . He belonged to the royal architectural and investment family from Delhi , he was married to an Indian girl from Kashmir - Haseena and was gifted with a handsome and talented son Abhay . Chand and Haseena had adopted a French girl as daughter and named her Drishti ( who was described as a beautiful Princess in the royal family ) , Rhone Haseena's nephew also lived with them after losing his parents in an accident .

In the past two days if Piya was sleep confused Abhay couldn't even blink his eyes , he felt like if he blinked he would lose it but didn't know what he would lose.. He felt an annoyance which was not at all because of the long travel , it was an impatience to reach to Dehradun . He didn't want to go there but neither could he stop himself from running to the place . He thought about his conversation with Drishti and Rhone before leaving Tibet .

Drishti - " Abhay be watchful when you reach Dehradun . Something is going to change in your life . I don't know what it is , i can't see it , for now your life looks like a super speed roller-coaster ride ... you move very swiftly and suddenly you disappear and i can't see you anymore . I didn't tell this to Chand , i feel its right not to tell him . But you be prepared , be careful ."

Rhone - " Ya brother a blind link is developing . I can't see from where or to whom but i strongly feel its gonna connect to you . You are going to connect to something . I don't know its good or bad but it will happen soon ."

For the first time in centuries they were hiding something from Chand . And it looked like to Abhay that the whole secret is around him . He didn't know what was coming , but he thought if its death i'm ready for it . He suddenly felt he was ready to die , but why ? He didn't have the answer .

Both are now in Dehradun . Impatient and confused . Uninformed and unprepared of the unknown power around them .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
WOW awesome update...What will happen to Abhay?plzzz tell me..anything serious?...Thanks for the PM...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar.I love ur writing style.U present everything so well.After a devasted news I m glad u update these FF😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

WOW awesome update...What will happen to Abhay?plzzz tell me..anything serious?...Thanks for the PM...😊



for now nothing is happening to Abhay..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow yaar.I love ur writing style.U present everything so well.After a devasted news I m glad u update these FF😊



thank you..
ya after the worst news i'm shattered and the team is doing shit with Abhay and Misha i don't get if they are ending the show i really wish -- naaa i demand them to get Abhay Piya close...
are they destined to pain ???
what is misha playing can't she see they are born for each other?
if they are made for each other then why are they standing in opposite banks of a river??


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Posted: 14 years ago
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PLEASE CONTINUE SOON... AND DO PM ME...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i want to see more... when ur updating pm me 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx! 4 PM dear..😊
N wow! awesome update..good going..👏
Waiting 4 1st meeting of Abhay n Pia..😛
Love ur writing..keep it up..n..of cource, all d best 4 next ff-update..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatiluvsabhiya

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON... AND DO PM ME...



surely when i update i'll pm you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reashma.

i want to see more... when ur updating pm me 😊



thanks ...
i'm working on it... once its done i'll update it and pm you.

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