Pyaara sa dard[MG]part-14/pg-23

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Heyy 😊

had this idea in my mind and thot that may be i shud giv this a try..😉
dedicated to al those people who believe in d beautiful feeling of LOVE.😳
i have no clue as to whether this wil be an OS/SS/FF 😆
Here's presenting before you...
"PYAARA SA DARD"
PART-1
She sat there flipping through the photos in her picassa web album for god knows how many times.But reliving those wonderful moments in her college life , remembering those precious times with her dearest buddies and most of al, to let herself drown in him,his photos dat she'd somehow managed to steal during d college tours, without letting him know-or so she thought, was the best way she could spend her time.The memories brought in certain emotions that she simply couldn't explain...
"Geeet"...
well wasn't that her name being called in the same old highpitched shrieky voice???
Startled, geet suddenly minimized d window on her laptop n looked around to see her best friend n colleague muskaan walking into the room..
"oye yaar geet, tu na doctor ke paas chali jaa..teri kaanon ko na pakka kuch problem hei! i keep thinking you're deaf ", a visibly irritated muskaan kept rumbing..
oh..by the way, meet muskaan-the superfast express who's simply not tired of talking.
"kya yaar muski..tu ne to mujhe dara hi diya"geet said, trying to sound casual n hiding her puffed eyes.
but d tear stains on her cheek didn't go unnoticed by muskaan.however she decided to let go of it at d moment.She knew that geet was one of those girls with the 3's in life-SWEET SENSIBLE SMART !
she also knew that if there was something that geet wanted to share with her, then she'd definitely do so, without any hesitation, coz afterall they were friends-soul sisters actually..
"acha sun, mein office ke liye nikal rahi hoon..tu bhi aajana..chal..bye shai" saying so muskaan rushed..
Geet and muskaan were working as software engineers in a reputed IT firms.They had successfully finished their training and were now working hard.Currently they were working under two different projects.Geet was on a less efficient team and being the kind hearted person she was, she had willingly taken up most of the difficult work on herself.
she quickly shut down her computer after having one more look at her man,her love -MAAN SINGH KHURANA.Her memories were shot back to the day when he'd literally shouted at her..
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It was the first year of college and the computer science department had to organise a technical fest. Since the scenior students had their board examinations going on, the juniors had to do most of the work.The head of the department had put forward the proposal and he had invited innovative ideas from students.It had been just 1week since college had started and geet didn't even know who were the people in her class.She dint even look at what the professor was sayin.She kept twitching and knotting her dupatta, focussing on d blank page on her note book.
Well, that was the way she always was.She was tagged the nerd of her class, right from her childhood.She spent most of the time with her books,in d library. She din have much'f friends in school because people thought she would only know how to learn and somehow she was termed boring.Her simple innocent mannerisms and the fact that she wasn't hell bent on dressin up or lookin pretty ,just added on to her general "boring girl" image.
Jus as she was trying every possible method so that the professor wouldn't ask her for any suggestion, she heard a manly voice ..
"Excuse me sir..i think we need to divide the responsibilty among all the students so that everybody can be involved. we can have gaming contests, a special exhibition where we can introduce the latest trends n threats in web, some innovative project demo's and..."
A small smile played on her lips and she felt she could keep on hearin his soothing voice..wait, what was she thinking..!!!
"No.36,Miss Geet Handa" she felt numb.as she looked around, she could see him looking at her intently.his face pleasant and a sweet smile adorning his lips...she was lost looking into those eyes and somehow she slowly stood up and averted her gaze to the professor who now looked at her in a very strange manner.May be she was actin all wierd here, coz that was when she realized that the entire class was lookin at her.
She tried to concentrate on what the professor was noew telling her..
"so, as i said already, miss.geet handa and mr.maan khuraana are the students who have scored highest marks in their engineering entrance and in their higher secondary boards. so i think i'l leave them the responsibility of deciding what should be done and i want you both to report to me daily, after class. Alright young engineers.This is gonna be your first event in college.So give it your 101 percent alryt!"
saying so, he briskly walked out of the lecture hall.the bell rang for the lunch recess and just as she was abot to collect her books and leave the class, she felt a tug on her dupatta.She turned to find it clasped on to the door knob.She was about to pull it harder,when she heard the same voice again.."Itne zor se kyun kheench rahi ho??You'r gonna tear it.lo..maine nikaal diya hei..waise haii..hamari introduction nahi hui na ek dusre se,mera mathlab hei, humne personally baat nahi ki na..tho, i'm Maan, MAAN SINGH KHURAANA.."
"mein geet..geet handa" she said in her soft voice.
"chalo geet, humein bohat kaam karna hei.sabse pehle exhibition hall ko clean karna hei.uske liye maine 5logon ko choose kiya hei.5guys from our class who are tall and strong enough.woh log dusting kardenge.By then we need to check the projects and decide which ones to select.Lets go.."
saying so, he held geets hand n moved forward.geet could feel his cool fingers resting on hers but somehow she didn't feel awkward.Infact it felt all nice!!
As they entered the dusty hall, she felt nauseated and dizzy.she was starving and the whole dusty atmoshere was only causing more trouble.Soon they were joined by 5 tall guys, who maan greeted with heyys n hellos ang geet guessed that they must be her class mates who were assigned with the cleaning duty.she gave them a friendly smile.They returned her some friendly nodds n hai's except one'f them who seemed way too disinterested in what he had to do!It was Rohan and if not for the idiotic professor he would never have obliged maan!He had so many better things to do than CLEANING and DUSTING!!but atleast they were better than having to make the presentations and making a fool out of himself.Rohan was admitted to the college only because his parents had the wealth and power as he was really poor in academics.However he didn't want others to know how dumb he was and so had taken up the cleaning duty and wanted to get over with this so called "being a part of technofest"!
"Woh Geet, i'l jus get this permission letter signed from professor bhakshi.by then,you can start checkin the projects alright!"
saying so he walked to the cabin next to the room.
And that was when rohan had this brilliant idea..he glanced at geet and lied that he was an asthma patient..he asked her if she could excuse him from this duty.Geet being the innocent one, immediately asked him to leave the room and that she'll handle it al.Hearing this the rest of the boys were also inclined to leave and they all did, giving her various excuses.
Once al the guys had left, she quickly knotted her dupatta behind her, nd carefully stepped on d stool near her. The board had to be cleaned nd just as she was about to get the duster, she felt dizzy again.She could feel herself falling off the stool and she anticipated the hard floor on her body when she suddenly felt a pair of strong arms holding her.
She slowly opened her eyes and she could see his eyes lookin at her, but this time she could see anger in them..or was it concern??or LOVE???
"JUST WHAT WERE YOU TRYING TO DO GEET.AND WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?WHERE ARE THOSE JERKS?WHAT WERE YOU THINKING GEET??"HE SAID ALL IN ONE GO!
wohh..mujhe neeche uthaaro na pls.. she almost pleaded.she felt shaken because of his loud voice,full of anger.
he gently put her down and looked into her eyes directly,as if asking for an explanation. she said what had happened a few minutes ago and regretted doing it when she saw his entire body stiffen, his facial expressions hard.
"and you simply believed every word of what they'd said??how could you geet!they're trying to take advantage of you kindness geet.But don't worry alright..im here na.. now u're MAAN's buddy and those jerks will not play such silly jokes on anybody again" and the smile was back on his lips.
her heart did a flip flop when he addressed her as his friend.she felt touched.she felt special...she felt LOVED!
"Now leave that duster.we're gonna have lunch from the canteen today.and its maan's treat to his newly found friend GEET"
saying so, held her hand again, like it was the most natural thing to do.Geets heart skipped a beat again. His touch and the way her name sounded from his lips,the effect was magical!!
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Geet was now under the shower. She then dressed herself in a simple casual jeans and top and headed towards her scooty, al set to go for office...
i haven't proofread.😳
So pls ignore the typos and ofcourse excuse the mistakes as well, coz im sure there r gonna be plenty of them. 😆
And a big thank u to ,
for the likes! This is my first ever fanfic/attempt in writing one.And it felt so good to see u guys likin this!It means a lot to me 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u so much for the like and the comment !like i said, this means a lot😊
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congrats !!!!! 4 ur new ff ...

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Very nice..Plz continue 😳
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@ maneetsangel : Thank u so much !really sweet'f u to like n appreciate😊 @ Drashtigorgeous : Thank u! i wil continue soon 😊 @ aamirkhanfan : Thanks a lot😊!
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"PYAARA SA DARD"
PART-2
Her office was at a mere2km's away from where she stayed.But she preferred takin her scooty most of the times because the walk would exhaust her. Besides, she had skipped breakfast today, as she was already getting late.Things hadn't changed much.Se smiled to herself as she remembered the times her maan would ask her to eat more and stay healthier.
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They had headed towards the canteen. Maan rushed to the counter after makin her sit down in a comfortable corner table.By then, he had also realised that she was one of those people who hated any extra attention.He ordered them both jumbo sized fullmeals.And when he came back with his food tray almost full, geet gave him an astonished look! She couldn't eat that in 2days,and he had brought her LUNCH!boy!she was in trouble now..
he sat near her and offered her the tray..she opened the packet and started munching on the french fries.Hey eyes were still gazed down.But she could feel his heated gaze on her.After a few minutes of silence, she looked up and found him looking at her with a disapproving look.
"Hey!y aren't you eating?..Don't you like the food here.I'm sorry ,i should have asked you what you want, instead of deciding for myself.."
"nahi..i don't eat much.." geet replied, this time lookin into his eyes with all the honesty.She didn't want him to be sorry!
"Achaa..thats okay..Tomorrow, we'll orde d mini snack for you.or may be you could share my extra large meal you know.He winked at her and grinned
Geet could feel butterflies in her stomach.He said he would share his lunch with her??But why??Why her? From the amount of attention he was getting, despite them being seated in the most unnoticeable and isolated corner, she did realise that he could get any girl he wanted.The way those mini skirt clad girls kept lookin at him, she was pretty sure of that.But didn't he know that?Didn't he realise that being with her can actually tarnish his reputation os the "super hot hunk"? Or did he even realise that he was the centre of attention , the most eligible newcomer in college??
"Kahaan kho gayi ho?Waise don't rush home in the evening.We need to meet proff.Bhakshi..We'll go together.."his voice brought her back to the present.
"hmmm"she gave him a slight nod..
And that had become their normal routine.. They'd share their lunch and maan would make her eat, sometimes pleading and sometimes threatening her to finish whatever little she had in her plate..
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She parked her scooty in the parking area and swiped her card in the machine, to enter the office building..She was looking forward to a day full of work as it was the implementation phase of the project code.She Prayed o her babaji and started off with her work,but not before stealing one more glance at his photo in her cabinet ...
okay..
that was the second part.Pls do tel me if you guys find this fic boring.No hard feelings alryt.You can be totally honest!
Al criticisms are welcome and so are the likes😉
Take care 😊
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"PYAARA SA DARD"
PART-3
The day went by as usual for geet. It was hectic.She'd grabbed a sandwitch for lunch and somehow managed to gobble it up.By evening she was completely burned out, but felt happy that her work was going fine.I was past 7in the evening when she finally decided to call it a day and decided to go back home.Just as she was crossing the main road and turning towards the highway, she saw a group of people. Well, now it was almost an everyday sight for her.Teenagers speeding and racing and kiling themselves.She saw that the people around were trying to carry the man and take him to the hospital and thats when she got a glimpse of the person..
"MAAAN"she screamed..but somehow,the voice refused to come out of her vocal chords.She rushed to the spot and felt a ripping pain spread through her body as she felt blood oozing out from his his face..He was unconscious and for a minute she felt that her world was shattered,as though there ain't any reason why she should breathe anymore..Befor she knew, she ran to him with al the energy left in her. He was almost being kept in the auto and there was some man sitting near him.She rushed inside and sat inside the auto and almost shouted at the auto driver.."Aap jaldi gaadi chalayiye..We have to take him to the hospital immediately"The auto driver asked her "Ji aap kaun?"nd she jus kept quiet because she herself wasn't sure of the answer to that question.
And the ride to the hospital was the longest one she'd ever had.She kept mumbling to herself"I'l not let anything wrong happen to you maan..You're gona be fine maan.."
The doc's had rushed him to the ICU.She waited out, tears streaming down her cheeks.She prayed to her Baabaji to take care of him.She stood outside,looking through the glass door of the ICU and absorbing all his pain. After around an hour,the doc came out and geet rushed to him.."ji,ab woh kaise hei?he'll be alright na?"
The doc gave her a gentle smile and said."ji,there's nothing to worry.He'll be fine.It was a minor accident ,but its good that he was attended to in proper time.He has fractured his leg and his forehead has a wound that needs proper dressing.Humne unhe room mein shift kardiya hei.Infact you can go see him now."
she sighed in relief and before she knew, her legs carried her to the room...She opened the door and walked to his bed.
He heard the door open and tilted his head slightly to see who it was...
"GEET"he said..it was almost a whisper and the next thing he knew was that she had just flung herself into his arms and was sobbing bitterly..
"Kya zaroorath thi itni tez gaadi chalaane ki?Why can't you be more careful maan?hamesha apni manmaani karthe ho..tumhen patha bhi hei what went through me." she kept on talking and he let her release al her pent up tears and fears..
"Bas geet..chup ho jaao..i don't like tears in your eyes geet."his hands held her in an embrace for quite some time and then he felt that her sobs were dying slowly..She almost tried to get up from his hold , but he simply held her more firmly and before he had even realised ,the words had left his mouth.."kahin math jaao geet.Bas yahi raho, mere paas,mere saath,meri baahon mein"
She felt a shiver bolt through her entire body and couldn't even realise if it was indeed real, or yet another figment of her imagination.Somehow, she decided to make use of the most of it and simply lay there in his arms,inhaling his familiar masculine scent..She felt at home,at peace, listening to their erratic heartbeats which were now calming down..
Precap:"I've let go of you once geet.And Maan singh khuraana is not an idiot to repeat his mistake.Tum meri ho geet and now nothing can come between us"before she could register what his words meant or what was happening, she felt his lips smashed onto hers..
okay😊
part 3 is also up! Hope u like it😳
i'd love to hear suggestions from you!😃
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awesome...plzz add me to ur pm list...
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great part...loved it...they meet again...wow!the precap is interesting
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nice story line...awesome parts...cont soon...

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