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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice prt,dis geet is so diff n best
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnk u for introducing Vicky... Was really wanting geet to help maan find Vicky m voil!!! I agree I just love this geet... So frank abt everything... Although she has not me Vicky yet, she told her entire truth abt her life.. Wowww...
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear,,,,

except dev and NT all other characters are sweet and bubbly...liked anya and pari as well...
so vicky is gng to give an entry to KM soon...geet is very clever to her age and very matured as well...plz show some maaneet scenes as well...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Glad to hear that ur son has healed. I hope that all o his scars disappear soon.
The update was awesome. Geet told maan the right thing... Dad is a fatherly figure... Incase of adoption , who so ever performs fatherly routines, becomes the righteous dad... So it's all justified!
Lookin forward to all the rituals with maan instead of dev ;)
plzzz update soon. I luv this ff of urs.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luvd how geet opened all doors of communication to Vicky with only one goal in mind... Vicky's return.
Geet is cool
I missed my maaneet. I want to read their interactions ... Loads of em ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updates
finally vicky s coming back
n i love this geet she s so confident
n anaya... i think it wud b fun watching her
abt precap - interesting
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

mreee missing u shruti ... missing your updates 😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
humble request pls always read the accompanying note with the ff it may answer many of your questions
and also that pls pls pls I want bigh comments

Part 33

Geet was happy as well as busy of course with exams, or what. As she was sitting by her board drafting a sheet Pari entered her room

P: hi Geet

G: hi Pari, how are you?

P: good, what are you doing, oh sorry continue I will just sit here Savitri Devi is not around and I just want to ease down

G: make your self comfortable

After about an hour as Geet completed her work and called Nakul to send in some juice for two Pari was still engrossed in the magazine

G: hey, what are you reading?

P: oh just a fashion magazine, look these models they look so cool and see these dresses OMG, if I were a model I would have got to wear all these sexy I mean glamorous dresses

G (smiled): these dresses are only meant for models in real life one cannot wear them they will look so vulgar

P: come Geet, don't talk like a granny come look at them some are amazing

As Geet looked at the pictures Nakul came in with the juice, he kept the glasses on the table and as he was leaving noticed the picture girls were seeing

N: keep that book away and never ever see it again or Madam will sure suspend you Pari (he warned and left)

Pari just shrugged while Geet looked at her in confusion

G: Pari what's wrong in this magazine?

P: actually this model who is wearing a bikini is Sameera

G (gasped): what?

P: yes, I told you, I don't like that woman though she has got a great figure and she sure is hot.

G: she's a model

P: yes

G: did Maan meet her on some modeling expedition?

P: no, never, theirs was an arranged marriage

G: arranged

P: yes, Sameera was some Mr. Bakshi's daughter who I think was a business associate of Khurana's or may be friend IDK much, but one thing was she was a spoilt brat, and she spoilt Khurana's reputation, and what all she wanted was to get out of the clutches of her conservative family and go to modeling, and that's what she did, after marriage she grabbed a modeling project for a cold drink company and as bro says the day the pictures came in the papers the couple had a bitter fight, after a month of that she learnt that she was pregnant and Bhabhi says she aborted the child without telling anyone and that was the last string Savitri Devi threw her out, MK sir was broke it took him months to recover from the loss of the unborn child.

G: did she ever come back?

P: no, bro says they signed the divorce papers and gave them to Savitri Devi, but did she submit them in court or nit that is not known to him. Only Khurana's and Bakshi's know about it, and who will dare to ask them.

G: so sad, Maan should have been very tolerant to her misdeeds that is the reason he left the main building and lives in the out house

P: no, that is another story

G: means?

P: Geet their life is full of twists and turns, actually during last fiscal year Savitri Devi threw Dev out, Vicky followed him and MK sir did not like the way she forced the two to leave so he also decided to leave but then she had a severe heart attack and he did not go but he never returned to the main mansion.

G: all this is very confusing

P: yes it is but as you will think about it its very simple, a failed marriage, an illegitimate son, a cousin who had many misconceptions, an arrogant old lady and it all this mess the elder son gets to suffer out of no fault of his; simple

G: very simple

At dinner Maan came in as usual and chatted with Geet and DM about their day and after the dinner he called both the ladies

M: DM, I want to tell you something

DM: what?

M: the other day you told the people at HSPur about her being pregnant

DM: yes

M: Brij called me today and said they want to come for Godh Bharai as she is in her 7th month now

DM: um

Geet was shocked she did not like her family interfering in her life at KM.

M: DM, do you want them to come

DM: no, ok call them I'll talk to her Darjee

G: but DM what will you tell him, the truth

DM: keep listening, I am quite an experienced lady Geet, trust my notions

Geet nodded and was about to leave

DM: where are you going? Sit here and listen, you too will have to talk to him later, a simple hi hello

By now Maan had been connected to Handa's

M: hello, Maan here

Rajji picked the phone from that side

R: hello Rajji here, how are you? How is Di?

M: want to talk to her?

R: yes

M: ok I'll give her, Geet Rajji talk to her

G: Rajji (she had tears in her eyes) how are you? How is Titoo?

'

G: am fine here

'

G: yes, they are very nice

'.

G: she's a gem

'.

G: ok Rajji, call Darjee DM wants to talk to him

'.

She hands the phone to DM

DM: hello ji

'.

DM: we are fine here

'.

DM: yes she is also fine

'.

DM: no, he is still in Canada

'.

DM: but we do not have any ceremony at our side

'

DM: it's a long story, here Godh Bharai is seen as apshagun

'

DM: no, no you can send in gifts for her if you want, Brij and Titoo can come with shagun and wish her and you can send in Rajji with them, Geet really misses her.

'.

DM: its ok, only thing is inform us the date and time of your arrival, we will be waiting

'.

DM: yes why not, Geet your Darjee wants to talk to you

G (trembling, Maan taps her shoulder and assures her): hello

'.

G: I am fine

'.

G: yes, he's very busy

'.

G: yes

'

G: bye

After the phone call DM retired complaining that it was a long day, and as she turned she smiled being sure the two will spend some time together assuring each other

M: Geet, mind joining me for a cup of tea, that ginger tea of yours

G: ok, I'll just prepare

She left for the kitchen and he followed her

M: what was he saying?

G: nothing

M: Geet you are a very bad liar

G: actually what he was saying was

M: that you should be with Dev, you should nit leave him in a foreign country with those white girls

G (looked at him in surprise): how do you know?

M: by looking at your face, you have quite expressive eyes

She turned and took two cups and poured tea and gave one cup to him and took one herself

M: let's sit in the study

G: ok

M: so, Geet how are your papers going on

G: quite ok

M: hey cool down, Brij and all will not be able to harm you any more

G: um

M: and look at the positive side you get to meet Rajji and Titoo, you missed them um

G: oh Maan how can you be so normal, is it like practice makes a man perfect

M: pardon

G: you have had so much pain in your past that you have learnt to hide it.

M: pain' past' I didn't get you

G: Maan when you told me about everyone why did you leave Sameera behind?

He stiffened at the mention of Sameera

M: she was in no way linked to you

G: Vicky also is not related to me, but you did not leave him

M: he is the part of the family and some day you will face him

G: and Sameera is she not the part of the family

M: no, she broke all the ties the day she '

Silence

G: she aborted your child

He closed his eyes the pain was still fresh

G: Maan isn't it why you supported me all the way because I were not ready to kill the unborn life

He did not say any thing

G: Maan its time for some more truth to be told, do you love her?

He opened his eyes, they were filled with hatred: I never did, I only was with her because of marriage woes, she was never mine, and she was just to self centered, like my room my jewellery. I was sick of her way before the incidence took place, it was the last thread

G: Maan

M (he did not seem to hear her): you know Geet, it was good that I married her else I would have been bound to marry Arjun's sister NT, in a way Sameera saved me from NT

She just looked at him in awe; he was in so much pain she realized

M: the day we got married, she was complaining that she did not like the room and asked me to either change the dcor or the room, I changed the room; the very next day she was like we should go to honeymoon to Switzerland, whereas I have already told her that I had only 7 days in spare so we will go to some place like Darjeeling or may be Shimla, but she made a issue of it and I was forced to take her to Switzerland; that was just a beginning she cribbed on every thing, made a issue out of no where, she even went to be a model against everyone's wish, I was living in a hell with her. After that modeling contract we started living in separate rooms, and then next week our family doctor told me she was expecting I was so happy I forgave her and was cherishing the feeling when that pictures got published, and then she got some offer from Mumbai and then she had to go and she did not want her condition to stop her and she finished everything, everything, Geet everything

And he sank crying bitterly

Geet stepped close to him and he rested his head on her lap still shedding tears

M: Geet you will give me that happiness of being called papa '.

G (wiped her tears): yes Maan you are the father of my child, and no one can change this, she will always know that you are her father, and she will not only call you papa but also will share that father daughter band with you, and that's my promise to you my savior and mentor.

He hugged her: thank you Geet, you are an angle

After some time both left for their respective rooms unknown of the fact that DM was looking at them wiping her tears.

now that's a long update 6 pages of word document😉
what do you feel about this?
say thanks to chatter box Pari
she again opened a card
Sameera, you all have been wondering for long about who is she where is she etc, I hope most of your queries are taken care of
i just love this bond that Maan-Geet share...
when DM and Geet talke to Darjee I did not feel like writing the Conversation on Darjee's part, you may assume what ever you feel like as to what he said... it was not my concern... but if you all want me to write do tell I will add that part also, though it is that GISIPITI nautanki
now these Handas are comig to KM for Godh Bharai...
what will happen when they come?
will they know about Dev being in jail?
will Brij know that Dev is married to NT?
will Vicky's arrival coincide with Brij's entry at KM?
I know you all have many more queries, hope tp see to them in coming updates
hope I am up to your expectations
if not feel free to tell
waiting for your responses write soon
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
huh at laast we kne abt sameera
and as predicted
she is B****
loved d update
DM is jus too goood
hw she manage darji and familyy
OMG I lov her
alsooo
loved d maaneet moment
aww poor maan
feeling bad for him
cont sooon
shruti di 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved d update ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

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