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Posted: 14 years ago

LOVED IT...
just read it n feeling like addicted
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...

uff...ye sam ko jaldi bahar nikalo...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!!!
thx for the pm... continue writing cant wait to read the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update now saameera is dead maan wil nt leave her..
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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting zoha 😍😍
hurry up 😭😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 48

honey, I'm not angry seriously. now go and drink your soup. you also have to take medicine. I will try to come home early today. she nods her head a little as he is seeing him. I love you. he smile saying. I love you too. your my world geet, don't shed your precious tears for small things. it hurt me. she wipe the last tears. now give me your smile. he said cheekily which instantly made her smile. now that like my mishti. go now. he hand the call saying her bye. but her words and tears were in his mind. he was worried about her. little things make her hurt. And he was damn sure sameera have said something to her. She will have to pay for it.

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It was night when all were having dinner with their night suit. Geet. Eat something, Maan may come late.

No mom. He told he will come soon. I will wait for him.

All ate their dinner and satin the living room. How was your first day meera? Geet asked. It was good bhabhi, I was so nervous. But Vicky helped me. She smiled looking at Vicky who smiled back and look at geet who wink him. He chuckled at her. Good Han Vicky. He smiles looking down. His bhabhi never leaves any chance. Bhabhi, you have to help me. I am having my exam after few days. Geet smile at Annie. Of course Annie I will.

Vicky laughs a loud. Oh bhabhi, how will you help Annie if bhai doesn't let you away from him. All laugh at her while she looks down shyly. Sameera rolled her eyes. Bhabhi how was your proposal? I mean bro doesn't seem like romantic. Then how did he propose you? Meera asked curiously. Geet remembered the day when he proposed her. The most beautiful day of their life. She smiled looking down at her ring which he put in his finger. Those days were so beautiful. Meera what are saying? Bro and unromantic. Can't you see just with the name of proposal bhabhi is so much blushing? All laugh a loud looking at her red face. Vicky you are talking so much. Let Maan come then I will say him. Vicky mocks her.

Say what. All turn around to see Maan standing at door. He smiled looking at geet. She smiled back. Losing his tie he sat beside her. She moves close putting her back on his chest. He wraps his arm around her holding her fingers.Hmm. maan Vicky was saying something. Vicky gave a pleading look at her to which she. Smirked. All giggles at his plight. What? Maan voice made him more nervous. He will kill him if he comes to know everyone was teasing his wife. I will tell. Maan Vicky wants to join business.

His eyes popped out.What? Business? Bhabhi? What are you saying? All giggle at him. Maan smile hmm. Good that you finally decided. Vicky gave a pleading look to geet. No Vicky, no more excuse. I already have helped you a lot. But now not more. I can't see my Maan working all alone. You have to go now. Maan smile kissing her hair. She was worried about her.

Sameera was unable to see both of them so close in front of family. She was burning each moment seeing Maan embracing geet so safely mad geet comfortably sitting. She stood up and went to kitchen.

But bhabhi. He tried to excuse but geet cut her firmly. Enough Vicky, no more excuses. Sighing he look down. His last weapon is also now against him. Ok fine. When I should join.

From tomorrow. Wow. He just has a night for his life.Ok. Means have to wake up early. All laugh a loud looking at his face; he was surely looking like a puppy.

Suddenly there was a loud thrush sound, all turn to kitchen while geet jerk up looking at kitchen. Sameera who broke the jug stood there looking at the shattered pieces. All went to her to check if she got hurt. But she was fine. Geet stood there still in her place, the voice was too loud for her. Her mind just scratches with it. She was numb, not knowing what to do. Maan stood there looking at sameera. When his turnaround he found geet standing like a statue. Then it hit him. Loud voice is not good for her. She feels scared and suffers from attack. Going to her he instantly wraps his arm around her. But her eyes her on the pieces only.

He cups her face. Let's go honey. He tried to make her move but she didn't. Her mind was numb to take any action. His word caught everyone attention. All turn to look at them. Geet lets go. She was not moving from her place her eyes were still. Meera and sameera look at her curiously. Vicky came forward and looks at Maan. Bhabhi, go to your room. He tried to push her. Maan and Vicky know she will suffer from attack any moment but they didn't want all to look at her in this state.

Maan tried again moving her face from the pieces. Geet look at me. Look. He said firmly but her eyes were not moving. Mom clears the pieces. Vicky told her mom. She instantly starts to remove them. Annie also joins her. Maan felt her body shaking and turning cold. Vicky, come with me. With that he scoops her in his arm hurriedly taking her in the room.

Entering the room he put her in his lap rubbing her back. She closed her eyes shaking badly. Give the medicing. Vicky ran and grabs the medicine. Maan took it and tried to push it to her mouth. But she throws the medicine whispering. No. please no. she tries to move away from him but he hold her tight. Leave me. Just leave me. She starts hitting his chest. Vicky closes the door instantly locking it. Both try to hold on her but she hit them. Don't touch me please. She starts screaming hitting Maan. They tried to control but were unable.

Maan hold her both hand. Geet, it's me Maan. Stop it. It's me. She stops slowly looking at his face. It's me Maan. Look. Her eyes were full of tears moving her fingers to his face she feels him and whispered. Maan. He nods taking her in his arm. Vicky takes another medicine and water and gave to Maan. He takes it and put it on her lip. She looks up to him. Maan? It's hurting. Please help me. It's hurting. She mumbled holding him tight and hiding her face in his chest. It's ok. It's going to be fine. Just take this. After a lot of consoling he manage to give her medicine. She keeps her head on his chest. Her eyes caught Vicky but she was unable to recognize him. He passes a slight smile to which she closed her eyes turning her face to Maan chest. He looks up at Maan.

Do you think we should go to doctor? Vicky whispered sitting on his knees near geet who was in Maan lap. Maan brush his finger on her hair. She dozed off but her hold on him was still as tight. I don't know Vicky. But before that sameera really have to pay for it. Maan whispered. Vicky looks at him and can guess he will not leave sameera. It was not her mistake but yes she was the one who told her word which made her sad. And due to only that tension she was so week that was unable to hold her attack.

Maan changed in his night suit and came out. Both of them go out slowly closing the door. Coming out he saw all sitting. One look at sameera his bleed boiled. Sameera. All turn to him. I don't think you are a small kid that things can be slipped from your hand so easily.

It was an accident Maan.

I don't need such kind of accident in my house. He yelled loudly. Mom looked at Vicky for calming Maan. He looks down. He didn't want to. It's important for sameera to have a little talk with him. I don't find a reason for being angry. Geet is not a kid who can get scared of little sounds. She too yelled angrily.Enough. Not a single word against geet. Get it in your mind. Vicky put his hand on Maan shoulder. He look down and then to her.Listen carefully sameera. If geet little worried because of you. I'm not going to tolerate it. Sameera passed an angry look and went from there knowing she would be in danger if stayed any longer. Vicky comes to him.

Bro, you should be with bhabhi. Maan turn to leave but again turn to mom. I don't want her near geet. He gave a threatening look at all and went to his room.

Geet was restlessly turning on bed. He smile, she must be missing him. Going to her he laid besides her bringing her in his arm. She sighed in her sleep moving her arm around him keeping her face on his neck. He kisses her cheek brushing her hair. But sleep was not in his eyes. He has to be careful now. It's good that he wouldn't see sameera face again. He look at geet face, her face color have turned to yellow. He gently kisses her cheek massaging her scalp. She moaned in her sleep holding him tight. He stayed awake whole night. There are already many things he is worried about. The project is going on worst state, he tried giving his best but nothing was working. No one was interested in such an old project. He is not getting any proposals or his proposals are always rejecting. Brij case is also not in good place. He is nowhere to be found. He was scared. What if they reached to geet? She is not well. Doctor has told not to give any tension to her, she should be happy. High blood pressure is not good for her. And now this. He sighed a long breath keeping his lips on her cheek, he can handle everything but not this. He can't see her like this, so week and scared. He will not be able to live without her.

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Precap: a relaxing day.

PRE PART 47 & NEXT PART 49
PLEASE DO LIKME AND COMMENT..

PLEASE, I FEEL BAD SEEING SO LESS COMMENT..

Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first me first
see i told u i m waiting😉
loved it like always 😉😊😳
hey by the way i sandwiched ur update
hehe 😆😆
Edited by mons_bhatia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
loved geet- vicky, meera teasing session.

Sameera 😡
send her away from maaneet.
feel sad geet.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update... sameera got it right from maan... feeling bad for geet... update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

vry nice update...

gud one...

maan should through sameera out of his home nd he should take geet with him 2 office daily.. sound cool


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