Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 36

it is BeauTiFul Kinza. ..

aww... kinza...
wt an beautiful piece of writing!!!👏
how i wishd dey wud hav shown sumthng lyk dis in d serial
luvd it 2 d bits!
waiting 4 more!
luv ya!🤗

Beautiful OS kinza...
Loved it very much...

amazing os...loved every bit of it..i so wish those useless creatives would hv come up with sumthing like this...

Silent talking.

I loved how you developed the characterizations as the narrative progressed. I loved how we understand him and her through her. Most of all, I loved your elucidating of those things spoken and yet unsaid. Skillfully done.

Third Perspective.

The best thing about being love by another, is how we look through their eyes. It is not their eyes but their heart that frames our character and paints our portrait. The thing about Shilpa Sharma, she is both kind and perspective, so not only do we want to believe her opinion of us BUT we can trust it. I loved the manner you weaved those glimpses of Mayank and Nupur through her narrative. Finely done!

Made in heaven.

I read this during the contest. At the time, I did not know you well enough to recognize this as a Kinza original. I will just paste my comment from then,

The dialogues flowed wonderfully and wittily, through the excerpt too, rather than around it. Things were surely changing, and most alarmingly, without my consent.⭐️ Sharp characterizations, though not entirely Mayank and Nupur of MJHT but still MayUr, if you follow my drift.

Deep Affection.

I think most of us filled in those missing chapters in MN story BUT mine of course would not have that Kinza touch of charm, so I was really excited to read how you re wrote or rather wrote this chapter. 😳

everyone else was speaking so much that somewhere his voice was getting subdued.Beautiful line.

My favourite part was the whole, "tumhain dar nahi laga Nupur?" segment. Just inspired and in tune with both their characters, playing along to the melody forever in their hearts, as you say, as a simple yet deep gesture of his affection and love.

With much love, Sabah

simply amazing os!!!
beautifully written!!
loved it..
do write more😊

both the os r such a beautiful piece of writing...!!!

this is so beautiful😍 there were so many tracks in mjht especially MayUr ones that were left incomplete in a nonsense type of way which is exactly why all my liking for the show is only because of ArTi no other reason👎🏼again one of the most serious and brutal tracks in the show was left hanging with absolutely no proper end or confrontation between the two you're part of the audience when you can think of such a nice end why cant the so called creatives🤢. it was brilliant as usual👏 the simplicity spoke volumes and this simple scene would've been a great end to such a horrible track👍🏼 the convo was really beautiful😃 had a lot of depth and showed a lot about their relationship. The only person she can never lie to is mayank that was shown brilliant in the contrasting behaviour between her with her friends and mayank👏 the ending is beautiful😃 so mayur like😆.

hello sweets!! .. thank u so much for making my birthday so special .. and in return to all of your affection .. i decided to write a small treat for you all .. hope u all enjoy ..

this is a simple OS, nothing except for romance .. 😳 .. i decided to keep things simple and romantic .. 😳 .. an ordinary yet special moment in a couple's life ..

"nupuuur!!",

Mayank shouted for almost the 10th time, and every time he increased his pitch by one decibel but Nupur was not paying attention.

"a rahi hon mayank, kia hai?", she replied irritated, blocking the mouth piece of the phone from her hand and then got back to phone, "haan tu bol gunjan"

"di tumhain jiju bula rahe hain?", gunjan asked

"arey haan , pata nahi kiya ho gaya hai!, abhi tu kitabon k beech main chor k ayi thi .. khair tu chor , tu bata , samrat ne kia kaha?", she asked ecstatically.

"wo sab subha di, abhi tum jiju k pass jao", she said sweetly and Nupur huffed, "oh ho gunjan, kaha na kuch nahi hai, tu bol na", she was really excited to hear about gunjan's latest date with samrat.

"gi nahi, subha," , gunjan replied blushing, "goodnight di", and she disconnected the phone, Nupur started at the phone for some moments and then huffed again.

"kiya hai mayank?, kyun bula rahe they?", she asked entering the room and mayank's face lit up seeing Nupur return.

"bus aisye hi", he got up from the bed and hugged Nupur from back , who was standing in front of the mirror, "arey wah!, tum ne kab se mujhe aisey hi bulana shori kar diya hai?", she asked turning in his arms and mayank pulled her close.

"not fair Nupur!, I always want you to stay near me", he inhaled the fragrance of her hair and bended on the crook of her neck while Nupur blushed deeply, "kia baat hai, romantic ho rahe ho?", she asked controlling the shake in her voice which was coming due to his lips gently pressing on her neck.

"hmm" , he barely said, moving his lips further on her neck and Nupur crawled her hand up to his collar, tightly gripping it.

"mayank ..", she said with a displaced breath and mayank increased his grip over her waist, 'I think you should go to sleep, tumhain 8 baje presentation deni hai kal", she said naughtily although her intentions were true, while mayank looked in her eyes, who were saying the complete opposite to what her lips said,

"it is prepared", he said , now exploring the other side of her neck while she chuckled, "aur revision nahi karni?", she said and mayank glared at her,

"aj ziyada parhai fikr nai ho rahi?", he glared and nupur lowered her eyes smiling, "nahi wo..

"kiya nahi?", he asked again , still cross and Nupur raised her eyes, and kissed him.

For a moment he was shocked but then both of them surrendered to the moent, deepening the gesture with every passing second.

Running out of air, Nupur slowly pulled back and rested her forehead against his while mayank leaned on her ear, "Nupur", he whispered sensuously and Nupur hid her face in his neck, "main soch raha hon ik baar aur revision kar hi lon", he said and Nupur raised her head, looking dumbfounded at him , "WHAT?", she said with her eyes opened and mayank suppressed his smile,

"ofcourse! you were really worried na!", he said pulling her close and reading the naughty twinkle in his eyes, Nupur smiled and hugged him and next she was picked up in his arms - for another blissful night of the celebration of their love.

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