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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the ff!
Poor maan.Lol!
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

thx for the beautiful an jelous and funny update honey!! loved it!! waiting for yiur updates!! tc dear😉

ur welcum im glad u enjoyed d part ty:)
u 2 tc:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amita5

nice story...please pm me


ty:)
ofcourse i will:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice ff...


loving the story...

continue soon..

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ty:)
im glad u liked it:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveee the ff!

Poor maan.Lol!
Continue soonnn.
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Fatima


im so glad u liked it:)
haha yes:)
i will:)
ofcourse i will:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely parts!!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7:
Maan was going to lose all his self-control if this chichunder said one more word..he
was going to lose all his patience and at that same moment armaan asked geet:
'Muskaan chal na lets go out for dinner..come on we'll have fun chalo,now go get ready'.
And without even giving maan a second glance she went upstairs to get ready when
she came down she was wearing this beautiful saree(her lugguage had been dropped
off by her parents)it was light blue with navy blue borders and it was transperant
from the front and backless...but she looked mesmerizing maan couldnt stop staring at her..she was looking like an angel..she hadnt applied even a tinge of makeup only slight kohl...her hair left open flying as if teasing everyone else...maan smiled but that
smile vanished the minute armaan said to geet:'Beautiful'..maan turned his attention
towards armaan and anger flooded in him again..he thought how dare he compliment
his geet and him staring at geet like that..and murmered to himelf'Aaj toh tu gaye
chichunder kahi ka'..and stepped forward to give him a punch when geet spoke up:
'Ji,woh khana meina kitchen mein rakh diya haan dadima aur anwesha to kehdena,and
aap bhi kalena,we're going to be late'and with that she left..maan felt hurt but also
happy that atleast she cared enough to say all that but that happiness vanished the
minute he saw that chichunder keep his hand on geet's bare waist and lead geet out
and when he heard geet's laugh at armaan's joke he felt he could just kill armaan..
he was flirting with his wife..how dare he?..and he followed them...he saw them
entering the most romantic restuarant in Delhi..he was furious...he followed them
inside and sat behind their table and covered half his face with the menu card like a detctive(lol...maan ka new business..Detective agency;P)..and watched the two..
they were laughing and chatting...when armaan asked geet:'Yaar muskaan y did u
marry that tamater i mean duniye mein larko ki kami thi?...i mean he's so kadoos
and sado from his face only yaar how will u live with him?..i mean tum kaho(pointing to the sky)
woh kaha(pointing to d ground)..she said:'armaan choro na..,tum sunao..i've missed you my hero
tumhe pata hai after that night...Maan over here was burning in anger and jealously
how dare that cockroah insult Maan Singh Khurana that too infront of his wife..
but he was hurt to geet didnt say anything to him..but then maan thought why would
she it isnt like she's in lve with you is she and why are u so worried about it...u dont love
her its just humanity..it was like he was assuaring himself of his feelings...
and then all of a sudden armaan went on his knees
and proposed to geet saying:'Muskaan tum meri jaan ho...meri dil ke har dhakdan ho
meri haar saans ho..plz will u marry me...plus u'll get rid of that lal tamater too;)
Geet stood up and hugged armaan and said:'Haan armaan i will...thankyou armaan
for doing this...i will marry you..yes i will:)
Armaan jumped in joy and carried geet with him and asked:'May,i have the honour
to take the prettiest lady on earth to have a dance with me?'
Geet nodded her reply...they both went to the dance floor..his hands on her bare waist
and one of her hands on his shoulders and the other in his hand..and they danced
Everyone started whispering'sexy couple yaar'..they're dance was so darn hot..and
maan listening to all this anger broke out of him he said:'this chichunder has
broken all his limits how dare he propose to my wife and then dance with her like this?
And he went took geet's hand in his pulled her away from armaan and slapped armaan
saying:'How dare you?,i kept quite for long..she is my wife do you get that?..dont
ever do that again?'..Geet and armaan both were shocked and in anger he bought geet
to the dance floor..unwillingly and he made her dance(guys imagine them dancing
like in the kurbaan hua dance sequence)...after the dance ended geet ran away
and maan closed his eyes in regret what had in done?..she will never forgive him now..
he went behind her..they both stood in the parking lot..she stood with tears..he said:
'Geet..geet plz look at me ...i..m..im seriously very sorry i didnt mean to do it
like this i mean i didnt mean to do this...all the people started speaking about
the way u and armaan were dancing i got angry...geet...plz im sorry'..Geet furiosly
replied:'So thats what you do...marry someone,dance with them what is with you
maan i have known armaan longer then you..he has more rights then you..her words
pierced his heart..he screamed back in agony:'No,you tell me being married you
go around accepting other guy's proposals haan?..you go on a romantic date with
them and dance like that with them on the second night of your marriage..and you
expect ur husband to be okay with that tell me geet tell me?'..Geet replied:'Did i
force you to marry me ur the one from day one forcing me to do everything marriage,
dance...i didnt want to marry you...marrying you was my biggest mistake i regret it
..i hate..y..before she could complete her sentence maan pulled her by her shoulders
and bought her close to him and bent his head down bought his lips close to hers and...kissed her urgently and first then passionetly and she responded to him...
they were kissing as if it was they're last time when bang..a door opened and suddenly...geet looked with her eyes wide open and maan well he came out of dream world and saw he was standing miles away from her..he had been imagining the kiss...
but the person they saw who was coming towards them was none other then our chichunder armaan..who came and said:'Mr.Lal tamater..plz keep ur hands away from my muskaan understand inside i didnt want to create a scene okay?..am i clear...muskaan lets go...'he went close to her and wiped her tears held her hand and took her towards his car..maan's heart ached he wanted to be the one wiping her tears not giving her tears...he was the one she should be dancing willingly not unwillingly
he was the one she was suppose to call her's and her words rang in his mind..'armaan has more rights over me'..in anger he took off in his car and reached home but when he reached home what did he find there?
precap-geet...im leaving forever:)
Guys guess what i updated again...and i'll send the pm plz do comment and all silent readers plz comment as well:)
sorry for any spelling or grammatical mistakes next update will be after a short period since im going out tomorrow thats y i updated now as i wont be here tomorrow:)
tc:)
ily<3

Edited by Danina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Man! I was hoping that wasn't a dream. Ok, I'm over it. lol thanks for the update! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting FF..plz add me to yr pm list...

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