Maaneet FF-Hand in Hand-Part 26 Update!

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teju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

wow nice yaar
thanks for pm
loved the part
bus naam abhi abhi pata chala...aur pyaar bhi hogaya...
nice...

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Shimmerr
where have you been all this time?!? you are an awesomme autor. i loooved the ff. jaldi update karo. im waiting😃

awan thankyou so much...well i've been a silent ff reader was always scared to try na write im so glad u liked it and yes i will update soon maybe tomorrow but if i cant wait then in a few hrs:)

ty:)

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: cue1
Hey cool FF
Add me to your PM list and update soon :-)

ty:)

i will and sure:)

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Awsome prt,poor maan got2 slaps for marrying geet,wow geet convince his family as she felt bad for him.thnxs 4 pm

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: teju2292
wow nice yaar
thanks for pm
loved the part
bus naam abhi abhi pata chala...aur pyaar bhi hogaya...
nice...

ur welcum

im glad:)

..haha lol haan can u believe it naam se pyaar hogaye?:P

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: mandymore
Awsome prt,poor maan got2 slaps for marrying geet,wow geet convince his family as she felt bad for him.thnxs 4 pm

ur welcum:)

haha lol yes g:)

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sweety

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

nice concept...add me 2 ur pm list...send me pm 4m next update...thanks...

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ninavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 6:

Geet hugged her best friend tightly...and her best friend hugged her tightly dadi and anwesha had gone shopping for geet...so it was only maan and geet at home...Maan saw who geet was hugging it was this guy...a guy who was extremely hot...good looking...had amazing pearl blue eyes..who was this guy?Maan's blood was boiling at the sight of geet in a another man's arms...how dare that guy touch his wife?...suddenly maan heard what he thought 'wife' he said..Maan are u crazy geet is a free women u forcefully married her not like she loves you or you love her..then why is this effecting you?..its her life..Geet broke out of the hug and bought her best friend in...the duo got closer to maan close enough for maan to hear their convo...Geet was saying:'I missed you my hero...and that guy replied:'I missed you my muskaan...'Maan knew they were not in love coz geet loved rahul but then what was going on between them...they went and sat on the sofa and were chatting non-stop..maan was getting jealous..he went close so he could hear what they were talking about and that guy was saying:'Dont worry mein hoon na meri muskaan ke chehra se muskaan kabi nahi jaygi' and hearing this geet smiled and maan's head started spinning he was cursing this guy how dare he... only maan had the right to bring back geets smile...no one else...(guys muskaan is just a nick-name k)...and then geet started crying in the guy's arms...sobbing loudly maan got worried but when he saw her in that guy's arms anger flooded him but he controlled it and she kept sobbing and after sometime when she relaxed she said:'Armaan,im so dum i dint even offer you a drink,what would u like to drink?'..He replied:'Aapke chehra ka noor..milenga'?..Geet mockingly hit him on the arm and whined:'Armaan,im serious'..armaan replied:'Toh who said im joking?'...Maan with eyes full of fury murmured:'Acha to iss cockroach ko meri geet ke chehra ke noor peena hai...sabar kare ..i will kill this kamina..with my bare hands he'll suffer like a fish without water...urghh...'..and armaan suddenly looked up and saw maan and asked:'Oye,muskaan ye laal tamater kaun hai?'..she stammered..'Umm..armaan koi na leave it...'..Maan felt hurt so infront of this cockroach she didnt even want to admit he was her husband...and his heart ached in pain...and in anger he said:'Her husband'...Armaan looked at him..then at geet and said:'Toh,ye laal tamater tera husband hai..arey pehle bolna tha na ...apni muskaan ko uska tamater milgaye...' and sayed in mocking sadness:'Nahii...muskaan how can you do this ...apne dil ke armaan ko chor ker,apne chand se chehra ke noor chor ker tume yeh tamater mila tha,yaar use better to mein hoon hot and smexy...'..geet mockingly hits his arm and armaan yelped in pain and geet got concerned and seeing this our maan feels like fainting he looks like he's going to burst... and while geet is looking at armaan's arm...he looks at maan and points to geet checking her arm and points at himself and smiles and then winks at maan...

Maan is in full mood to beat armaan to death but is holding back because of geet:)

Okay guys baas last update of the day:)

thankyou so much will update later:)

do comment:)

Hope ur liking it:)

ily ppl...keep commenting

srry 4 any spelling and grammatical errors as i havent gone through it:)

ty;) sorry for the small part i was tired:)

srry the precap i said didnt come will definitely come in the next part:)

so precap-will you marry me?

Edited by Danina - 14 years ago