Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#951

Read the last two updates in a go...actually glad I did! Or I would died waiting for the subsequent update.

Oooh! The "dropping pallu" makes an appearance here too. It's always a very promising event.

Love the way you are bringing to light those three days when Gauri was not conscious. I will not say unconscious, coz her sub-conscious seems to be awake all through.

It feels so good to be back here again!!

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#952

If I say that you are amazing,I might sound like a stuck record,but can't help it.... You are indeed the best!!!!

Her innocent questions are arousing him more than her beautiful body...wow!!! brilliantly conceived !!! very very amusing!!

You surpass yourself everytime Devi...a total contradiction to the statement - 'You can't improve PERFECTION!!!'

You make me eat my words every time. While reading 'love and despair', I thought the Khuranas were the most passionate and virile..

but I 'pooh poohed' that thought, when you introduced Shiv!!!

and now I'm slowly but steadily warming up to Gaurav☺️ But let me confess...Maan would always remain my first love😍

Gosh!! Too many men in my life!!! It's all your fault😉😆

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Niks

@NiksAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#953

are yaar...kya baath hai...update par update...!!!

tere pyaare pyaare updates ko ...kisi ki nazar na kage...!!!

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Binge

@Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

#954

Loved the update!!! Superb, Devi!! 👍🏼 Loved the convo between them which has always been special in this ff! ⭐️

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#955

Fab updates
My internet wasn't working so read d last 3 updates together.

Devi ur words can make even d most mundane actions sensous. Ur ffs have changed my views abt saris.

GV can manage to hold conversations in such situations also. I hope 'Intoxication' will b continued. It is high time they act on their desires before one of them goes insane or develops permanent insomnia.

Gaurav's thots abt contaminating Vidya were a bit depressing. Though they're an unusual couple but such things could pose problem in future.

P.S. When it comes down to writing sensous scenes u r d queen.

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priya..

@priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#956

In all the super awesome updates..i forgot to ask..how did gaurav get hurt? Who did he go to meet? How did the fight happen?

Update soon devi! Desperate to know what happened after the kiss...

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#957

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I'm in the office ... I SHOULD NOT be peeking in here !!!

But your G&V are making me do things I dont usually do ...

I will ... TRY... to put my thots into words once I'm home ... till then ...

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

PS: Hope you're still in the ..."I am updating today like it's going out of style ;)" ... mood !!!! 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#958

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priya..

@priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#959

Where did Gaurav go? What was SSP talking about? Why did he leave her alone? He feels guilty that she remembers what he said to her in her sleep and she pitied him? May be revealed more than required? He is a private person..Does he feel guilty that she is going to know that it was salome who kidnapped her..and his failed love was what gave her that torture?

May be he will not stop vidya from going to her house..but instead reconcile with her there..without his monstrous family interfering..