Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 91

How many times has Vidya lost consciousness?

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

How many times has Vidya lost consciousness?

Confrontation between her and Uttara masi's husband, she almost fainted.

The kidnap.

By the way, how old is G? V is 24. G's OP of 13 years has to have known G from his teenage years, right?

When the chains came off, she fainted.

She fell to the floor when she went to G's study after waking up from her 3 day sleep.

And the last update where she was so tired that she almost lost consciousness.

Well that was less than I thought...

By the way, I left a comment on TOS Thread 3. 😊

Waiting for G and V going back to their room!

The way you end your ever chapter with a twist, a sentiment explored yet left to the imagination of the reader and with a promise of what is yet to come is awesome. It drives me insane as I wait for the next instalment but nonetheless its awesome.

Did you by any chance go through a mans head because the way you write from Vidya and then Gauravs perspective, its so different if you know what I mean.

And thanks for the PMs...
I had to leave IF for a while and I thought good riddance but when I read this FF I realised that I was missing something, that there was a reason I had been addicted to IF in the first place.

Update soon...as eastwood said go ahead make my day!

Originally posted by: crazilycrazy

The way you end your ever chapter with a twist, a sentiment explored yet left to the imagination of the reader and with a promise of what is yet to come is awesome. It drives me insane as I wait for the next instalment but nonetheless its awesome.

Did you by any chance go through a mans head because the way you write from Vidya and then Gauravs perspective, its so different if you know what I mean.

And thanks for the PMs...
I had to leave IF for a while and I thought good riddance but when I read this FF I realised that I was missing something, that there was a reason I had been addicted to IF in the first place.

Update soon...as eastwood said go ahead make my day!

A great story, and a great story writer. I have never watched this show and not planning to watch but I am reading this story because I know that you are a good story teller. The way you have created the story, the way you have added mysterious characters, each character has its own unique personality and has its own unique way of dealing with situations. Plus the addition of philosophy, math and physics made me wonder which field you belong to. It is really great to see that math could be also use for romance. And specially the way you portray emotions, you are out of the world. I seriously like the relation of the lead couple here. It is unique and interesting. each has its own limitations and complexity. You have done a good job at creating complexity and resolving it.

Beautiful! Just beautiful no other word comes to my mind :D

You know this FF is so intense, that it doesn't leave me with much opportunity to make my smart comments!😉 You are stretching this just like when Shiv-Gauri needed to talk...When are they going to talk? Fab update as usual.

Great update! But what exactly happened after SSP left? Did they just go back to the room and then did he just go to work? What happened when he came home that same evening/night and the next morning... 😆

Res. I can't believe you updated, not that I mind! Off to read...