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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

i got full shcolarship in harvard UNI

so they accept me some goes to
college some UNI straight
hima di



Wow Kate
so you are one of the exceptional lot.
You are great dear
you must be a genius then
I am feeling so privileged knowing you
🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey!

Simi and Q

guys I apologize for interuppting ur convo, but kindly PM or scrap each other. This can result in the fic being cllsed. I don't want to seem rude.

Jinszy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank yu thank yu sis 🤗🤗
just trying
would yu believe if tell yu
was home sch student because
of gymnastic academic
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

thank yu thank yu sis 🤗🤗

just trying
would yu believe if tell yu
was home sch student because
of gymnastic sports


Wow
Thats great to know
Anyways looks like we should not chat here
So me off to do some work
and will keep peeping in between
bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
okay me too bye
sis
muah
luv yuuu sis🤗❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you guys.

N muskan how much longer?
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Posted: 14 years ago
50

we can drive to a private beech house.
He didn't know anything but agreeing to her. It was not in him to ever deny her. He did once & lost her for 8yrs.. he couldn't do that not again..


Maan was really finding it impossible to hold back his emotions. It felt so difficult to breath.. if we held back unsurpassable feelings of atomistic love, there would be no purpose in this life to exist, he felt he was simply wasting every single breath..every single heart beat...his every breath felt held back, the body felt choked and suffocated,. He felt like he would inadvertently release the same held breath with exhilarated sighs and gasps...he may eventually outbursts the emotions violently that may strangulate their heart, leading to imprisoned feelings of savage vindication.

His fear was not hidden from her..but she was flying in a magical mystical world of love.. his love.. uske pawan zamin nahi tihk the.. she didn't know how to express.. the whole world seemed to under her feet. Mano ..puri jahan ki khusi mil gayii ho. She didn't know how happy she was... not that she was sad for all those years.. she was the most happiest person & blessed person she believed. She was gifted with all the love & happiness sad she really didn't know how to treasure it, understand it...

she booked a private beach house for the weekend. She dragged Maan & drove down to the beach. It was an hr drive. But all the while she was non stop making list & making calls arranging every thing. He was shocked to see her so excited. They parked the car & walked in holding hand in hand to the beach house. She looked around & asked him if this place was fine.
He nodded.. he never noticed anything.. she was lost in her excitement.
Hum bacho ke saat use walen guest house main rahen ge.
He looked out. .. it was like 1/2 a mile away. She held the long white curtains & opened it at once it to beautiful view. The warm breeze with the sunshine fell on her.. she chuckled..so did he...just looking at her..expressions change in delight to the scenery her eyes met with. It was like a horizon view from the living room. She opened the door & ran towards the beach... her one hand automatically searched for him all the while & held him.. making sure he was there right next to her. Genie this is perfect na
he kept looking at her..umm
aacha suno we can have the table set there
.. she pointed at place little away from the steps close to the water.

She went in & got the table out. He carried the chairs..
she kept checking the weather making sure there was no rain ruining the dinner plan. Candles are an inevitable part of a romantic dining table decoration right genie. Lets make with dim lights, candle flames look that will be very sensuous. She chuckled holding his hand as she looked at the arrangement.
Her fingers slowly slipped into his & entangled with his while the other hand went around his arm. She rested her head on his arm .. its looking so romantic na. Thats when he looked at the whole set up. It looked so beautiful the sun was just setting ..do it was still not complete dark.. the candle lights with the dim lights looked sensuous. He just wanted to go on his knees & ask her to be his.. his..ironically... she was his only his.. he knew it.. but didn't know how was he to claim her.
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He was drawn back to her definition of dinner in college days. He remembered it was their first valentines day together & she was super excited about giving gifts & expressing that ur special. She had worn a red dress & brought a red belt for ballu. Not to forget her red juthi. She had managed to pic that red t-shirt of him. He thanked god that not red shoes though she had all plans. She had cooked a complete spread of heavy punjabi khana & given strict instruction to him to be home by 6, even though he said he has to go for a dinner with his valentine.
Teehk hain na.. finish all that be home by 6pm
but he was genie.. he turned up at 11pm.. & she was sitting with ballo with a big frowning face without having dinner.

He had completely forgotten abt their plan..he got carried away in the party. The punishment was shocking she made him clean the vessels while she & ballo ate halwa & kheer after their 4 course meal. Then finally.. he tried to make it up to her by giving the gift he had brought for her.
a diamond necklace.
She was so excited when she learned he got her gift then when she opened it she was so disappointed.
He looked at her expression & the gift. He had spend a fortune on it but she was not pleased.
Mujhe nahi chahiya yeh gift
He thought may be worrying abt the price
but then this was dodo.. main ne kaha tha na mujhe red wala purse chahiya.. yeh kya hain..
dodo yah diamond necklace hain
she gave a very demeaning look to it.. almost disgusting types..
mujhe woh red wala purse hi chahiyen.. u r not my valentine.. she pushed him away & carried ballo & went to the living room
mera sirf yehi valentine hain .. bangalore main.. & then those big tears.. followed
agar main HP main hoti tho.. mera kitne valentine hoten
he was definitely getting confused ..he was sure she never had any valentine.. wat was she trying to say
irritatedly he asked kitne hoten..
she cutely counted on her fingers.. 8
he held her arm & turned it in anger.. wat?
Nahi ek min.. darji ko milke tho 9.. haan 9
wat r u saying
he roared.. 8 - 9 kaisen..tumhe pata bhi valentine kya hota hain
she started to count..mama, papaji, rajji, chintoo, thai, thau, Brij veerji, babhi, aur dar ji
he held his head & sat down wondering wat was he thinking this was dodo..after all.
She plunked her self next to him on the sofa.. mujhe pata hain .. valentine use bolten hain jisen hum pyar karthen hain.. aur main sab se pyar karthi hoon.. tumhari tarah nahi
don't u dare call me ur valentine
she twisted her lips
dodo plz.. na make me ur valentine..he can't believe he was actually pleading this way.. out there girls were fighting to be his valentine & she made him plead.. his plight was always this way in front of her.
Nahi nahi nahi.. mera valentine sirf ballo hain.. aur koi nahi.. she was so low.. missing her family. He hugged her & kissed her head.. I am sorry.. main bhi hoon na
nahi .. main HP main hoti tho veerji valentine would have got me the red wala purse.

He hit his head.. for that stupid 50/- road side red purse.. actually jhola of hers.. that she saw in commercial street ..she is creating so much of fuss.
Aacha baba kal hi la donga
koi zarorat nahi..
she would never say that.. he wondered why she said it.. she giggled.. main ne tumahre pasien se lale
he didn't know whether to get angry or laugh. Challo chalo mujhe jaldi se gift karo. Mainne tumhare table pe rahki hain.
He had to formally gift it to her.. kiss her & ballo happy valentines day. Well that was his dodo definition of valentines day...
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he shook his head not able to believe she could arrange something so romantic. Even the most unromantic couple left alone here would turn romantic. It was a perfect blend to tease ur love buds.
She held him closer as the wind blew.. tumhe kya lagtha hain.. baat ban jayegi
off course dodo.. this is so romantic.
She blushed when he said that.
He just wondered how could she be so excited about doing all this. After all rahul is her husband. She really is so strong he cant be like her. He just controlled himself & went to car.


Later in the evening Geet met with Nt.
Nt - aab time mila hain tumhe
Geet - sorry di
Nt - yeh sab kya hain aachanak
Geet - nahi di..just a weekend with kids
Nt - woh
Geet - nahi baba..its just us


mean while Maan went to speak to rahul. He hated every bit of it.
Maan - I planned a weekend with kids at the beach house
rahul scanned him top to bottom
Maan - dodo left with kids she wanted me to come with u
rahul thought this would be good chance to talk to him
but through out the drive Maan pretended to be on call or checking some official mail. Even rahul knew there could no reception at certain areas, but Maan preferred not to talk to him.


By the time they reached the place it was night. 9pm.
Maan left him in the house locked the door from outside. Rahul looked around & wondered where the kids were. He looked behind for Maan he was not there. He assumed may be picking something from the car. He just walked out of the door at the living room towards the beach..he noticed some arrangement thought Geet & kids may be there. As he reached the person who was standing facing her back.. closing her arms..he knew it was her. His heart beat raised ..as he inched closer.
She turned asking Geet bachen kanha hain...
expressions changed the moment she realized it was him
tum!!
jaanu ..meri baat suno.. plz.. yeh meri idea nahi tha
Nt - how could u rahul
she walked pass him in anger, not wanting to look into his face ever again.
He held her hand.. jaanu .. yeh Geet aur uski genie ka idea hain
she froze.. genie!!!
her face turned wild in anger wat the hell is he doing here.& why didn't any one tell me
jaanu wohi tho tumhe batane ki koshish kar raha hoon
though she was little disappointed it was not for her.. but then nothing was more impt to her than Geet. Not even her. She walked back silently & sat next to him.. dodo & genie.. hid behind the wall that separated the two beaches & watched them..she giggled..holding on to Maan.. its working.
She was leaning over him almost falling. Genie ka magic hain kaam karenga na.
Arrange tho main ne kiya tha na.. she snorted & walked away. They could hardly hear wat they spoke. But they were happy that Nt didn't leave.

Geet - shukar hain babaji ka.. she didn't leave. Tumhe pata nahi di ka gussa
Maan - mujhe tho sirf tumhara gussa pata hain
how could she not fall for that line. She gaped at him in awe, he was actually being romantic with her. Her cheeks turned red & she looked down.
He so much want to tell her how differently he felt for her. Her blushing, her coming so close to him..did give him a bid of courage but their relation had been so platonic that it was impossible for him to think otherwise or misinterpret her gestures other way.

Well their pvt little moment was not pvt any more... amy, ballu & rany came running to play in the water.
Maan - itni der main pani main khel na safe hog akya?
Geet - its ok
she made sure they wore their tubes. All three of them went into the water .. holding hands. Rany was throwing disc at Geet & amy was trying to help catch. Maan kept watching them from the shore. They ran around a lot. Amy.. came & sat next to Maan panting ..
Maan - itni jaldi taahk gaya..he teased
amy gave frowning look.

Nt & rahul sat quietly for some time. She hugged herself closer as it became chill.he got up & put his coat around her.

She chuckled. She got up & began to walk along the beach. He walked along side her silently.

NT - Why is her here? Wat does he want now?
Rahul - I think he loves her.
NT - Did he tell u that
Rahul - nahi usse dehkne se pata chalta hain
NT - dehkne main tum bhi sarif dihkten ho.. no one would have expected u to
Rahul - rahul inhaled sharply.. I was thinking if we could work on getting them together
NT - how do u say he is interested
Rahul - why would he come all the way looking for her
NT - woh property ke liyen aaya hoga
Rahul - mujhe nahi lagtha
Nt- r u sure
he looked at her reassuringly
something she can't deny herself.. believing him.. though she disagree on that very point because of which they are separated.
Meanwhile other beach...

Maan laughed yet again.. it was more of teasing laugh... abhi I will play with dodo..
Amy didn't like it he just got up & went to play with her. Not letting Maan come any where near his dodo. Maan continued to tease him throwing the Frisbee at all far away directions teaming up with rany. Amy got tired & sat down not able to reach the Frisbee.
Maan - ho gaya tumhara khelna.. bada aaya dodo ke saat khelna wala..
Geet - genie.. she warned..as she went in to get dinner for all of them. Maan immediately kept quiet

rany & Maan gave a high five as Geet left.
amy came back charging at Maan .. Maan just moved away from his way .. he tripped & fell. Maan didn't bother lifting him. Utto.. natak baaz.. utto..bhi javoo.. koi nahi tumhe utta ne wala
wave came & flushed him.. he still didn't move.. ballo started to bark
it was dark Maan could barely see .. anything on the ground.. he wondered why was ballu barking. He sighed & turned amy.. he was soaked in blood .. his face was pale. He was not breathing. Maan patted his face couple of times.. he screamed dodo dodo!!
there was blood every where.. nose, mouth ..
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Precap
Maan scared!! horrified.
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thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🥳woop woop woop🥳
🥳woop
woop🥳
wopyyy woop
oh yea i am first.. oh yea.. me first..
oh yea.. lol

omg hope amy is fine..
silly childish maan.. can't he do anything els except teasing hem..
urg.. look at him.. omg i hope nothing serious happens...
😔
no no no
no seriousness
otherwise... :(
& the other rahul & nanty thing was so romantiic yar.. (only the dinner pic)😍... i refuge to complement anyone els then my dodo & gini lol

I DEMAND MAAN & GEET hoty hoty date...
lol
i just hate rahul lol
specially with geet.. i think i hated him from the
DMG... lol what can we crazy manetin do.. can't see our geet with anyone els..
& his face.. urg..

lol
OH PLEASE update soon
me want amy to be alright😭
i hope geet does not say anything to our poor giny

xxx
LOVE YOU
FOR all 3 update

🤗
😍
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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😊 Great update muskan! 3 in a day, all better than the rest.Amy, mera bachha, hope all is well with him. Does he know who Maan is? You said she had a picture in her room of Maan so does he have any idea or does he think he is a college friend?
Loved the valentine's day 50 Rs. red jhola that she wanted. such a true dodo. loved it. Hope he doesn't hurt her too much anymore. I was worried when you said he was going to leave. How could he leave without all the facts being revealed, but if he was not such a dodo he should already know that she is only his.
I know paka rahi hu, par jaldi update karna. Thanks muskan.🤗
Edited by ucompleteme - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WONDERFUL UPDATE WITH MIXED UP FEELING SOME ROMANCE SOME OLD MEMORIES, SOME NAUGHTINESS AND SOME FEAR, the FIRST HALF WAS SO COOL BUT WORRIED ABOUT THE LAST BIT AND P RECAP HOPE AMY IS NOT FACING ANY PROBLEM WITH HIS HEALTH.

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