My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) # 2 - Page 43

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Posted: 14 years ago
every update was nice...

promo is also interesting...
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interesting promo...
cont soon...

ale Jyoti ne kyu daanta?
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this is jst nt fair... u hvn't updated till now... so u hv to gv us atleast two ,,,,,,,, no no no atleast three updates in a row... tht too long ones...
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great updates and promo dear!!!

Continue sooon!!!!
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wer r u????its been like a month since u updated!!!!!!!!!!
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nice promo...waiting for the update
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This is one of my favorite ffs written by u. I had such a hard time digging for it. U haven't updated this in a long time. I so wanna c maan n geets' relation blossom. Plzz update this and don't ignore this creation. It's really very well written.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum ff
hope maan changes his decision abt marrying geet soon
i feel geet should disown her family
maan has more than enough money
hope dev n nt rot in jail for life

update soon
waiting eagerly

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where r u dear???
its been more than a month since u updated...
waiting eagerly...
do update soon...
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humble request pls always read the accompanying note with the ff it may answer many of your questions
and also that pls pls pls I want bigh comments
Part 30

NT has lost it she was restless she wanted to meet Dev she wanted to take the case back all she could see was the property Geet would have on her 21st birth day; but it was not that easy; many woman were involved in it; even if she takes the case back other cases were there; and Arjun being her guardian will not allow her to take the case back.

NT was stuck in her own game plan to screw Dev, and she knew very well that if she tried to go past the case Arjun will make her rot in hell for ruining her father's daughter's life. She should be grateful that Geet did not tell him about what she did to her.

Next morning NT faked a stomach ache but Arjun paid no attention and asked her to have breakfast quickly, no one paid any attention to her, Geet served the breakfast, it had now became her habit and DM also liked it,

A: Maan, call the advocate and tell be will be 15 mins late, this NT is taking so long

M: ok, Arjun, I'll just call him

NT: veer ji I am really feeling very down
A: good, this ways we can show that Dev hit you so hard that you are still in pain, Maan can be not fake some internal stomach injury, she looks quite convincing

What NT did not know was that by now Arjun had known all her tantrums.

After break fast they left, Geet went to get ready for her college and DM called Pari for some documentation

However hard NT tried she was not able to succeed, even her attempt to talk to Dev failed
NT: Dev, please listen to me once
D: you bitch, are you not satisfied with all this, you S*** from where
did you get all these women
NT: Dev I have something important to tell you about Geet please
listen
D: you W***** let me for once come out of jail, the first thing I will
do is sell you to a S***house and sell you every night to at least 10 men to recover the damages you did to me, K**** K***** K**** H***********
NT: Dev, only for once listen
D: S**** K****** you are feeling happy that you will get 10 men at one time R***** what you are not getting it is that those will make your C***** swell with their D*** S**** H***********

On listening all these abuses and threats NT was terrified, she gave up the idea of taking her charges back, the advocate recorded the conversation and was happy that he got one more tape against Dev

All the evidences witnesses the video tape and now this recording all made Dev's case more weak and NT's strong, the next date was given after 2 months and Arjun asked the judge

A: my lord, my sister is very terrified, she used to live in Canada before marriage, if you permit can we take her back
Judge: but she has to be here during the next hearing
A: yes, my lord she will be here
J: ok you can take her; it will make her feel less scared.

They returned to the KM in the evening

Arjun thanked Maan and blessed Geet for her bright future and left with NT taking DM's blessings. He also invited Geet to visit his place once she is settled.

NT was now gone to Canada till the next hearing that Arjun assured will not happen till at least 6 months; he will not let it happen; as Dowry was a non baillable offense Dev will rot in jail till the next hearing and even will have to wait for another next one; what DM planned was that Dev should at least be in Jail for a year without hearing; and that was not difficult owing to the slow crawling speed and pending cases.

As the time passed things became more regular, there was no traces of NT and Dev in the house, no body talked about them, DM took Geet for her regular check ups and made sure Maan accompanied them, as Maan was very happy with the prospect of a child in the house he always went with them

On the 3rd month visit to the doctor

DM: Maan take the car to the ultra sonographers

M: why? Is everything ok, Geet why sonography?
DM: Maan, its normal after the end of first trimester doctor calls for
a sonography to ensure everything is fine
M: is it? (He looked at Geet)
G nodded and smiled: um

When they reached the sonographers they were given a number and the receptionist called Maan

R: sir, your number will come after 40 mins, until then ask your wife to drink a lot of water her bag should be full
M nodded and went to get mineral water bottle for her: hey Geet drink this
G: why? I am not feeling thirsty
M: that lady said that your bag should be full and you have 40 mins so drink this 2 lit come on have it
DM smiled and urged Geet to follow what Maan said

Geet shrugged and drank

After 30 mins DM said she was feeling very hot
DM: Maan beta I am feeling very hot here, will you please go with her
M: but DM how can I?
DM: ok, beta here I am feeling so hot and you are not co-operating, I was thinking to go and sit in the AC in the car, but as you will not go with her I will have to wait, I will not let her go in alone
M: ok DM I did not mean that, you go take the keys I will accompany her
DM went to the car

Later Geet's name was called and Maan went in with her

Doctor: ok Mrs. Geet loosen your salwar and lie down here and Mr. Khurana you can sit here and see the screen, here you will see your child
Maan was like a little uncomfortable but at the same time he wanted to see the baby's development so he sat
The doc applied a gel on her lower abdomen and explained the procedure, as he moved the instrument he said: look here is your baby and he explained the development of the fetus, ok Mr. Khurana do you want to know the sex of the child, though it is illegal but you to seem you don't mind having any sex,
G interrupted: can I know sir
M: what's the use I know it is a girl
G: how can you say this, it can be a boy
M: no I am sure it's a girl
G: no, sir it is a boy? Isn't it?
M: no it's a girl? Isn't it doc
Just then DM entered panicking what was taking so long
Doc: yes Madam
M & G: DM you decide
DM: what happened?
The doctor smiled: nothing Madam your Beta and Bahu are fighting about is it a he or she (DM giggled) I think I should t\let them fight for the next 6 months it's nice to see them like this, you are lucky madam
Both turned pink

It was here 16th week when she came searching DM after the college

G: Nakul Bhaiya, where is DM?
N: she has gone to the club
G: when will she come?
N: she will be late; the activities are followed by dinner
G (disappointed): ok
N: MK sir, called for tea, shall I tell him you will join
G: yes I'll be there in 10 mins

Later Geet joined Maan for tea

M: what happened Geet yu are looking lost, any problem
G: nothing
M: hey, you can share if you want
G (she came close to him): Maan, he kicked
M: pardon
G: that's why I was not telling you? You are so stupid
M: say again
G: you are stupid
M: not this one what you said before
G (whispered): he kicked for the first time
M (pointing to her tummy): you mean she kicked
G: he kicked
M: Geet bachche she, normally girls kick so early boys are lazy
they kick much later
G: whatever, but he kicked
She turned and as she was leaving: ouch
M: what happened?
G: he kicked
M: she
G: he
M: she
G: he
And both laughed
So what do you feel about this update
it's being long 😆
hope you all remeber the story
😆
what do you think about Dev and NT?
Dev used such bad language still she wanted to talk
and only his threats stopped her
what do you feel about Maaneet new found hopes
Did DM porposely left complainhg about the heat?
did you like the Maaneet convo about the baby?
hope I am up to your expectations
if not feel free to tell
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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