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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
first part itself is intriguing and interesting .loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
oh wowww awesomeee
luved ittt
n reading d CS i thought vinod mayb geet's dad
but here it took a turn
awesome luved ittt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Congrats on new ff...
interesting concept...
loved the 1st part...
so geet is the gal sis of vinod handa...
so geet knows abt maan...
maan is going to meet geet for the 1st time...
eagerly waiting for the meeting...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Hi All,
Thank you so so much for your comments and encouragement.
I really feel so happy to read your comments.
--Anu
Part 2
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Geet is all ready for the award functions...all students getting award are seated in front 2 rows... Geet is in the 2nd row...she is getting 3 awards...best student award , constant performer award and outstanding performance award...

Geet:"sanya...aaj main itnee nervous kyun ko...maine kapde to dhang ke pehne hai na...award ke waqt main presentable to lagoongee na"

Sanya:"kapdo kee to bol mat...bola tha mera ek dress le le...lekin nahi maa ka diya hua dress hee award me pehena hai...bhenjee wala dress phen liya function me...khair chor...waise nervous nahi hoo...tu hai itnee pyaree ke yeh kapde wapde koi maine hee nahi rakhte tere liye..."

Geet:"accha abb chup kar...tere woh kate chate kapde nahi pehenne mujhe..."

Then the Dean announces that Mr. Maan singh Khurana the chief guest is arriving...

Then enters Maan...white shirt, black vest, black trouser and black formal shoes...the aura with which he came made all heads turn towards him...

Sanya:"OMG...Geet yeh Maan singh hai...wow kya baat hai yaar"

she turns and see's Geet's mouth opened wide in ashtonishment...she was just looking at Maan with mouth wide open...

Sanya:"hey Geet...apna muh to band ker...issi se award milne wala hai tujhe..."

Geet(looks at her dress):"nahi nahi nahi...main nahi jaoongee...kaisa impression banega..."

Sanya:"yeh koi best dress award function nahi hai...padai ke liye award mil raha hai...isliye nervous hona chor...waise bhi woh chief guest hai...is college ka trustee bhi...aur Maan singh Khurana hai... aur tu scholership pe perne wali ek student..."

Maan gives some speech...Geet is just lost with the way he is speaking... his voice...his body language and best is his speech...

she is completely impressed by the way he talks about bussiness

Then Maan starts announcing the name of students for award...

Maan:"Miss Geet Handa...best student of the year"

Maan(ST):"so this girl is Geet Handa...let me see, kaun hai yeh jisne sare offers thukra diye"

Geet nervous...gets up and start getting up the starirs to go on stage...Maan sees the girl comming...she is completely opposite of what he had thought...

This girl looks nothing more than a one who only can cook in the house...but as she comes near he can see the spark that she has in her eyes...her brilliant and beautiful face overshadows all her simplicity and dressing style...

he is a matured bussiness man who can very well differentiate between the real and face value...

Geet comes up and stand near Maan for award and he elegantly gives her the award and the certificate


Maan:"Congratulations Miss Geet Handa...well done and keep it up...best of luck for your future"

Geet(still nervous but keeps her cool):"thank you sir"

Geet starts leaving...Girl handles next award to Maan and while Geet is getting down the stairs

Maan:"Miss Geet Handa...It's again you for The Constant performer Award..."

Geet takes the award again thanks him again...she is cooled up now...

then again as she is going Maan calls her name again...

Maan:"I hope miss Geet...you should just keep standing here...Congratulations once again"

Maan:"Everyone...I will just request all of you to give big applause to Miss Geet for her achievements..."

Everyone in college claps for Geet...the college love her...

then the pricipal asks Geet to speak about her achievment...and once Geet handles the mike...she is in her full swing...no nervousness nothing...the way she speaks and the content of her speech is a complete surprise package for Maan...with her get up he culd never imagine that this girl culd speak so so well infront of everyone with so much confidence and such a nice speech...


The award ceremony gets over... principle takes Maan with him to his cabin Geet sees this...

Geet runs to her room to get the Book from Maan on Bussiness management and goes towards the principle office...she sees them chatting and waits outside the cabin for them to finish...

After meeting Maan comes out...Geet goes ahead

Geet:"Excuse me sir..."

Both principle and Maan turns...Geet was talking to Maan

Geet:"sir...I am a big fan of yours...yeh book apne likhee hai sir...I need your autograph on this sir..."

Maan looks to the book that Geet is holding...

Geet:"Sir I am also very impressed by your practical aaproach in Bussiness..."

Maan:"ohhh sure sure Miss Geet...come on in...i will love to have few words with you...(turns to principle)...Can we use your cabin for few minutes sir...only if you don't mind"

They go in and be seated...Maan takes the book from Geet...sign it and give it back to Geet

Maan:"So Geet...it's Ok if I call you Geet right????"

Geet:"Sure sir..."

Maan:"Geet I have heard you have refused to even consider any job offers...only if you don't mind... can you share the reason with me...as I feel this is a complete waste oftalent..."

Geet:"sir there is a very personal reason or you can say motive behind it...I am not interested to go in corporate world..."

Maan:"personal reason...haah...now don't tell me you are going to be marrying a guy and be stteled in life...as most of the girl from your kind of background will say...you seem a little different to me..."

Geet:"no sir...I have no plans of marraige in near future...but I need to be with my family...do smthg for them...actually main yeh kisi ko batatee nahi but I will tell you sir...I am planning to work for development of my village..."

Maan:"Now now now...hawa me Mahal banana chatee ho tum... do you really think you can do what you want with only numbers on this papers...no...you need money for what you want to do...anyways...social working is not in my dictionary...my granny does it...but she can do it because she has money...pehle paise kamaoo...make urself strong enough and then go ahead to help others...don't waste your talent and time...

You need to be in industry and espacially need money to even do social work...bina paise ke koi sunta bhi nahi...kaise karoogee yeh development work...do you think it's a child play...

And I will also confess industry also need talent like you..."

Geet:"sir i will try other ways to get money...corporate world mein ek baar phass jaoongee to uss jhamele se nikal hee nahi paoongee...but thanks for giving me so much time sir..."

Maan:"Geet i understand your feeling...but still I will say you need some practicle approach to do what you are planning to do...earn money 1st...join our group...you will have package more ahead of what industry is offering these days..."

Geet:"Sir...I am reaaly feeling so proud that you are yourself are offering me a job...but sorry sir...at present i am not ready to go in industry..."

Maan:"Ok one last offer...you say you are Fan of my working style...join us and you will be directly working with me...learn bussiness with me..."

Geet:"your last offer is really alluring sir...and i really feel so bad to say no...but sir I can't at this moment..."

Maan:"Ok...take this offer letter...I was talking about you with your principle...I have signed this offer letter for you...I will be gone today...My secretary will come to collect it from you tommorow...give it a thought...if your answer is yes...U r welcome...if no...you will be forever banned from working in Khurana Group of Companies...Have a nice day..."

Maan leaves and Geet is all confused and in deep thought...

She is sitting quitly...her friends arrive annd asks what's the matter...she says them her talk with Maan

1st frnd(Girl):"wow!!!!!Maan singh khurana ne tumse khud baat kee...job offer diya...insist bhi kiya...lucky you yaar..."

2nd frnd(Boy):"Geet isme sochne wali koi baat he nahi hai...this a life time kind of offer...direct Maan singh khurana ke saath kaam...his company is leading the bussiness in 3 sectors yaar...just sign the paper...aur kya salary hai...OMG...Geet sahi to hai...paisa nahi hoga to yeh Village development work karogee kaise..."

Geet silently goes to her room

Next to be continued

precap - Maan's secratery...Mr. Adi comes to collect the paper from Geet; Did she sign it or not?

Send me your guesses

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Edited by tellyme - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Incredible
I hope she does sign it
Really enjoyed this update
Continue soon
Can't wait to read the next part
Iqra xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sign nahi karegi ... toh story aage kaise badhegi ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
please another update i guess she signs it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Awesome update
she will sign then only story will go on 😉
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
aweosme update...
superb... hope she will sign the offer letter...
continue soon...:)



jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
too good part
maan offering job
life time oppurtunity
she should accept it

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