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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
awesome update dear
really liked ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
just love this ff...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
THNX FOR THE PM ...

GREAT PART ...


👏👏

:):)

LOOKING FORWARD TO READ MORE ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
omg..geet kasamkas me h!!!!
Hope ki wo shi decision le...
Plz update soon
Wanna knw her decision
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
i hope she signs it!!!
"paise nahi honge toh village development kaise hoga???" ye baat uske dimaag me baith jaani chahiye...toh wo pakka sign kar degi!!!


love ur ff...do pm me...

love
~karee
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
loved the update...
wow very alluring offer geet...
i doubt she wud sign it...
she may not is my guess...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Anu...sorry I haven't commented in the last 2 updates. I like the story...its a different approach!! I know Geet's past is a mystery...and as such...she has some responsibilities to her parivaar...and the gaon that gave her shelter, a home and lots of love to live and prosper.

With that said, and in looking at the strength of her character...I don't think she is going to sign the papers...not now anyway. I have a theory on what may happen...will PM you!!! Looking forward to the next part to see if any of my suspicions are true!!😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
simply brilliant
both part
love it
can yu pm me next one
i hope geet sign its good opportunity
waiting eagerly
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Hi All,
Thank you all for your support in this new FF of mine...I am here with next part...
Hope you like it.
--Anu
Part 3
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Maan went to the airport and found out that his flight has been cancelled

Maan(st):"abb yeh flight cancel ho gayee to kyun na Mumbai ja ker ek din Bhai sahab(Vinod Handa) se mill looon...woh to abhi Mumbai me hee hain..."

He calles his dadi in Delhi and Vinod in Mumbai to let them know their new program...Vinod is very happy to hear that maan is visiting him...

Vinod welcome Maan with open heart...Manyata and Rishab were also very happy...Vinod and Manyata takes a break from days work and decide to spend some healthy time with Maan...everyone is happy

But in the night when Maan is talking with Vinod he realises that Vinod is somewhat disturbed...

Maan:"Bhai sahab...kya baat hai...aapp kuch pareshan lag rahe hain...koi khas baat hai kya..."

Vinod:"nahi Maan...baat koi nayee nahi hai...kayee saal puranee hai...per main tumhe nahi bata sakta...isme tum meri koi madad nahi ker sakte..."

Maan:"aapp bata ker to dekhiye...main jamin asman ek kerdoonga...aapp boliye mujhe bass"

Vinod:"Maan...agar kuch kerne layak hota to kya maine abhi tak kuch nahi kiya hota...ek madad ker sakte ho tum meri...savitri dadi ji se kenha...shayad mujhe unkee madad kee jarorat hai..."

Maan:"Dadima kee jaroorat!!!!...aisee kya baat hai..."

Vinod just asked him to ask no more questions...Maan left the matter there...he tried to divert Vinod with other talks...


Next morning Mr. Adi comes to collect the paper from Geet. Geet enncloses it in the envelop and gives it to Adi

Geet:"Mr. Adi...I hope yeh letter direct Maan singh ji ko hee jayega" Adi says sure and leaves.

Adi calls Maan and says he has the letter from Geet and she has asked that only you read it.

Maan who was busy having fun with Rishab and was having a family time

Maan:"Adi...yeh office ke baat hai...main jab 1 week ke baad office join karoonga to dekh loonga...just keep it safe..."

Maan next day left for Delhi...It was refreshing to meet Vinod after such a long time but he was worried about the issue that made vinod upset...

Maan reached Delhi...he had fun with his Kid brother and sister...they were spending quality time together after a long time as Maan would always be busy with his Office or sometimes with his friends...

When he found dadima alone he decided to talk to her about Vinod

Maan:"dadima...bhai sahab kuch pareshan the...kaha koi unkee madad nahi ker sakta...siwaye aapke...aisee kya baat hai..."

Dadi kept thinking for a long time...

dadima:"Maan...apne jo kaam kerna tha ker diya...abb app pareshan na hoon...yeh kaam aapka nahi hai"

Maan:"Dadima app mujhe bataiye kya baat hai...tabhi to pata chalega kee main kuch ker sakta hoon kee nahi...kyun koi kuch bata nahi raha mujhe..."

Dadima:"samay ane pe hame aapkee jaroorat paregee...tab piche nahi hatenge iska wada kijiye...kisi baat ko lekar aapse ek khasee umeed hai hamaree..."

Maan:"yeh kya paheliya bujha rahe hain app log mujhe...saaf saaf bataiye..."

Dadima:"Nahi bata sakte...ek paheli se pareshan hain aapp...kisi kee puree zindagee he paheli hai...kya aap wada ker rahe hai humse"

Maan:"Wada hai dadima...main piche nahi hatoonga..." he leaves the matter there

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In the Hoshiyaarpur village - Geet reaches her village and everyone is waiting for her...their princess has arrieved...she is the one who knows about the world outside the village... most of them either know it by Tv or when they have to go out to buy some stuff for khait...

She meets her parents and her brother and sister...tejji, lucky and nandini...she shows them her award and talk about her life in college and how the girls and boys in big cities talk...she tells them how things are different...good and Bad...her point of view...they give various expressions...chiii chii chii...then sometime...achcha aisa hota hai...

next day after meeting her friends and family she is ready with her mission...she goes to the local elementary school...as she reaches the school all the kids run and gives her a tight hug ...teachers come and meet her...most kids are in messy dusty dressup...Geet loves hugging them...this is how she has grown up...

Geet(ST):"Maine bilkul sahi faisla liya...I need them they need me...this is where I belong..."

Geet is everyday on her work...first she is visiting place to place to get the idea of where to start...water, electricity, hospital, school, college etc...

Geet in Hoshiyaarpur Busy starting her work or making strategies...


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In KM in Delhi

Savitri Devi(ST):"Vinod hum aapkee pareshanee samajhte hain...pata nahi hum aapkee kitnee madad ker payenge...per aabb samay aa gaya hai uss bachchee ko uska rutba aur shano shauwkat wapas dilane ka...aabb woh badi ho gayee hogee...

kitnee samajhdar pata nahi...hum yeh to nahi keh sakte kee hum use aapke ghar kee betee bana payenge ya nahi per hum jaroor koshish karenge kee woh iss ghar ke bahu bane...ek beti nahi raaj ker payee per ek bahu keregee...wahi shano shawkat jo uska haq hai...main use dilaoongee...jo uss 6 mahenee ke chotee bachchee se chin liya gaya tha..."


Savitri Devi call someone:"Munsi ji...main savitri...kaise hai aap...main bilkul theek hoon...mujhe aapse ek khaas kaam tha...kisis ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...Chawdhary Brij Singh...Hoshiyarur wale...jinke gaaon ko humne apnee saree jameen de di thi...unka pata kijiye...unke baare me sabkuch janna hai hume..."

Khurana office
Maan joins office after his break...in his office he check all the parers and letters pending...he sees a letter in envelope
Maan(ST):"Geet Handa...hmmm...achcha woh RNJ college wali..."
He opens the letter
Maan(ST):"Geet Handa...this was your last chance...now you can never work with our group of companies or our allies and partners...anyways...wish you best for your career"
Next to be continued:

Precap:Savitri Devi Meets Geet at Hoshiyaarpur

Please press like button if you like the update and plsase please post the comment and your ideas
Edited by tellyme - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
so geet declined his offer let's see what happens next

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