JiYa OS ll Secret - Page 2

hey mais...this was really lovely n happy

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hey mais...this was really lovely n happy

n jiya were romantic...specially jay..lol

he treated her like his princess...=)

omg their convo was amazing

i can imagine a scene like this

n the lines wich i loved r

The wind around them danced joyfully at this gentle union of the fated lovers. The birds sang a joyful song as they celebrated this long awaited happiness high above in the skies. The flowers blushed and giggled as they joined in the celebration started by the wind and spread their enchanting aroma in the air. The sun smiled at the couple and gave its blessing as the warm rays kissed their faces.

really amazing written by u

loved it loved it loved it =D

i feel 2 hug u...lol

n u finished this while listening a song

wow u r tooo goood ...lol

n i appreciate ur hard work...awesome work

see u soon

love yaaa

mmmuuuaaahh

Awww...!! 🤗 Thank you sooo much! 🤗

Mais this was a very soft romantic piece😍 Something that is completely opposite of JiYa😆 For some reason I find it hard to imagine this taking place between them. Jay can NEVER be that soft with her😆 He is too intense to be soft. He would have roughly kissed her to shut her up from her "I can't remember anything" talks🤣

Anyway to be honest I am a tad bit confused with this piece😳 Its just so soft!🤣🤣 But it was still a beautiful nonetheless :)

Originally posted by: Angelic_J

Mais this was a very soft romantic piece😍 Something that is completely opposite of JiYa😆 For some reason I find it hard to imagine this taking place between them. Jay can NEVER be that soft with her😆 He is too intense to be soft. He would have roughly kissed her to shut her up from her "I can't remember anything" talks🤣

Anyway to be honest I am a tad bit confused with this piece😳 Its just so soft!🤣🤣 But it was still a beautiful nonetheless :)

Hahaha, its good to be honest! Well, I wanted to write something soft and light. Else I will be known as a girl who ONLY writes dark stuff. Plus I was in the mood to write something fluffy. I know JiYa aren't like that but someday they might become. There's more the Jay y'know...he is hard but some of his layers are soft. Just a representation of those soft layers 😳

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

Hahaha, its good to be honest! Well, I wanted to write something soft and light. Else I will be known as a girl who ONLY writes dark stuff. Plus I was in the mood to write something fluffy. I know JiYa aren't like that but someday they might become. There's more the Jay y'know...he is hard but some of his layers are soft. Just a representation of those soft layers 😳

But I LOVE your dark writing☺️ It seems as if you have a natural affinity for it😛 You are the best at it like Poco is best at writing inspirational stories😆 I always make different authors as my favourites for different genres😆

edited on page 1! =]

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

res.. again. 😆

-edited-

all i can say is.. wow. this is one of the most beautiful, simplest, genuine and purest pieces of fiction i've ever read! the whole layout.. from pia's confusion to her hesitation, from the whole 'i wanna fly' to the whole leadup to the kiss, the gradual setup, the fairytail-like feel, the dreamy atmosphere, the vivid description.. everything had a trademark MASOOMA written on it; and i mean it as a compliment. 😳

the way you described the beauty of the kiss.. the whole outlook, brilliantly written! almost as if you could not only picturize the thing happening, which is a big compliment in itself, but you could feel the protagonists, you could feel where they're coming from, what it's leading to.. and you just let yourself drown in the whole thing.. you know what i mean? it was BEAUTIFUL!

and yay.. big comment! 😆

YAAAY! Big Comment! And a lovely one as well! 😳 Thank you Jaaan!