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Posted: 14 years ago
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"I have gone mad."

Jay, who was silently appreciating the beauty of the wild flowers, turned around and stared at her with a confused expression.

"You figured that out now?" He half smiled as she sat beside Piya on the bench.

"Not funny." She replied with her trademark sarcastic smile which soon disappeared as she sighed deeply.

"Why do think so, that you've gone mad?" He spread his legs to sit in a more comfortable posture and stared at her who was looking at the grass with a vacant expression.

"I don't have the memory of one year of my life, I see things and people that don't exist, I hear a strange voice guiding me through the darkness. A strange face haunts me in my dreams. I just can't take this anymore." She shook her head at the end of the sentence and dejectedly put her head on his welcoming shoulder.

"Its nothing to worry about, just think of it as a very fantastical phase of your life." He smiled and gently touched her cheek. The crease on her forehead smoothed at his touch and she sighed contentedly.

"I am sick of this fantasy. I need something that is real." She said softly and looked at him. Jay smiled, held her hand and got up. She looked at him questioningly as he stood in front on her and crouched on the lush green grass. Because of his posture, Piya had to look down to see his face clearly.

He put her hand on his chest where his heart thumped. Piya closed her eyes as she her hand made contact with his warm skin.

"What do you hear?" He asked gently.

"The sound of my life."

"What do you feel?"

"I feel like I've been given wings."

"What do you want to do."

"Fly...fly somewhere far away.

"Where?"

"To a brand new undiscovered place..."

"And where will you find it?"

"Anywhere..." she whispered and opened her eyes. "Anywhere where you'll be by my side, holding my hand just like this."

"And will that be real or a magic?"

"It is the most magical reality of my life..."

Jay gave a small laugh and leaned in closer to her face. Piya closed her eyes. His eyes lingered on her face for a little while as his other hand caressed her cheek gently. Countless emotions shone in his eyes as his lips made contact with hers and kissed them.

The wind around them danced joyfully at this gentle union of the fated lovers. The birds sang a joyful song as they celebrated this long awaited happiness high above in the skies. The flowers blushed and giggled as they joined in the celebration started by the wind and spread their enchanting aroma in the air. The sun smiled at the couple and gave its blessing as the warm rays kissed their faces.

It was such a scene that if a artist saw it, he would immediately put it down on his canvas and term it as his masterpiece. Yet, he would not be able to do justice to it. Because it was scene created by the nature which happened only for the nature. It happened among the nature to increase the beauty of the nature. It was a silent celebration of the nature...not to be recreated or stolen. Only the people present there could fully understand the beauty of it but they could never explain. It was a nature's enigma...

When they broke the kiss, the silent magic of the scene also broke but the celebration lingered on.

"Silly girl, from now on whenever that fantasy of yours drives you mad just think of this heart which only beats to see this smile of yours. And you'll instantly find the most magical reality of your life." He said in a serious tone as she looked down shyly with a smile on her lips. He pinched her nose playfully.

She giggle at his action. Seeing her at peace, a burden was lifted off his shoulders and he joined in her laughter. He wondered, as she laughed carelessly, what would he do if that magical sound was to disappear?

Piya put her arms around him and he wrapped his own arms around her, protectively. He patted her head gently as she snuggled close to him.

"Thank you for making me hear the most beautiful melody of my eternity...your heartbeat." She whispered gently as if it was a secret meant only for him. He just smiled and enjoyed the most happy moment of his life.

Their hearts, beating together signed a silent pact that this moment was supposed to their secret. They told the wind and the wind understood. Everything that witnessed this scene didn't dare go away from this holy place.

The wind celebrated there...

The birds sung there...

The flowers danced there...

The rays of light lightened this place...

All of them never letting an intruder enter this place. After all...

"...its a secret."

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AISH! I am not too happy with it...the first version was better. But unfortunately due to my silliness, I cut the window of my first version. And of course all the data was lost 😭😭

Oh well! Another one of my attempts at writing...! It feels a drag at place...meh! Its not good! šŸ˜† But since I was saying almost everyday that I'll write something on JiYa, I HAD to write something on them. It so cheesy and a completely different from my first JiYa OS. But I wanted to write something light on them...I wrote a sad one of them but saved it on my PC instead. Can't believe I finished this while listening to a sad song 😲 I am good na? šŸ˜‰

Oh, look at me blabbering on and on and on and on and on and on...! Psssh! What's wrong with me? šŸ˜› Anyways! Likes are appreciated, comments are LOVED! Its not good but still comment and make my hard work pay off. But, at least I won't get comments to continue this one! I gave it a proper ending!

I think I should just go...already the OS was boring and I am boring you more with my talks šŸ˜›

Take cares,
Maisooma 😳

P.S - Nidhz, one spark starts the fire šŸ˜‰ Get it? šŸ˜›

P.P.S - Please ignore all spelling/grammatical mistakes and missing words. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg! That was so wow! šŸ˜ so romantic, so sweet, so cute! Was waiting since ever for a happy OS from you...finally got one :D yay and LOVED it like anything! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!! I lovvveeed it..seriously your an awesome writer..and it was just MAGICAL!!!
I'm going to read it again!šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

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Posted: 14 years ago
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res.. again. šŸ˜†

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all i can say is.. wow. this is one of the most beautiful, simplest, genuine and purest pieces of fiction i've ever read! the whole layout.. from pia's confusion to her hesitation, from the whole 'i wanna fly' to the whole leadup to the kiss, the gradual setup, the fairytail-like feel, the dreamy atmosphere, the vivid description.. everything had a trademark MASOOMA written on it; and i mean it as a compliment. 😳

the way you described the beauty of the kiss.. the whole outlook, brilliantly written! almost as if you could not only picturize the thing happening, which is a big compliment in itself, but you could feel the protagonists, you could feel where they're coming from, what it's leading to.. and you just let yourself drown in the whole thing.. you know what i mean? it was BEAUTIFUL!

and yay.. big comment! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow thats amazing Mais! šŸ¤—
I loved it, esp the canvas part. šŸ˜
Do write more <333
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OO How Romantic. (: I Want To Jay Treat Pia Like This In The Series. (: Which He Wont. Cause He Hates Her. ): Anyway Mais Sorry I Just Found This. (: Iam Very Not At Finding Things. ): Please Write More. and Conti Your Scary FF. (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: forbiddenlove

omg! That was so wow! šŸ˜ so romantic, so sweet, so cute! Was waiting since ever for a happy OS from you...finally got one :D yay and LOVED it like anything! <3



Awww...! Love you!! šŸ¤— I have another happy OS in my mind! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

OMG!! I lovvveeed it..seriously your an awesome writer..and it was just MAGICAL!!!
I'm going to read it again!šŸ˜†šŸ˜³



no, I love you! 😳 Thank you so much honey! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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šŸ˜›

Originally posted by: -Untamed-

Wow thats amazing Mais! šŸ¤—

I loved it, esp the canvas part. šŸ˜
Do write more <333



I wrote it for you y'know! Cuz you keep saying that I don't write šŸ˜†

šŸ¤—



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artemis678

OO How Romantic. (: I Want To Jay Treat Pia Like This In The Series. (: Which He Wont. Cause He Hates Her. ): Anyway Mais Sorry I Just Found This. (: Iam Very Not At Finding Things. ): Please Write More. and Conti Your Scary FF. (:



Areey! Its okay yaar! Why are you apologizing? I was just kidding at the AT šŸ˜† Yeah, me also want Jay to treat her like this but oh well! he'll treat her nice in my FFs 😳

Thank you!
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