Originally posted by: preety_219
wow Daya,this was indeed a very very long part.👏Pooja!!! 🤗haha thank you thank you that was an update in the making for like weeks LOL did it while laptop was gone and finished it last night 😆 But,it was fantastic thruout & i didn't even felt the need to read it in part,the flow in the story was kind of magnet.once i started reading ,couldn't stop inbetween.👍🏼 thats good to know...lol i guess the fact that i had written it by hand and then typed it out after ...got it edited by missy after lol really helped this update..lotz of re-reading and yet there are still typos 😆 hmmm but at least I got it to flow 😛
The much awaited Dutta & nakku convo. was amazing.I was kind of surprised at Nakku's thoughts.I mean when she was in the kitchen,her mind was totally around Dutta & without her knowing ,she already noticed so many things about his overall personality.Also the way she was mumbling ,those are all symptoms of typical wife.😆 haha yes yes she is ranting like typical wife 😆 glad you liked it ...this was the one scene i re wrote like a million times i just could not get it right...trust me ...my friend who was sitting with me was like why are u crumpling up the paper for...😆 not satisfied...and then finally it just kinda started flowing ...hmmm memories of writing this part lol i think honestly of all my ff and updates this one was quite something to write 😆
The actual convo. was funny yet interesting & kind of eye-opener for Dutta.Dutta was quite amused that she can talk so much & that she noticed all those things which so far he thought are well hidden.Nakku's bhashan giving is her birth-right.Ek baar shuru hui toh rukti hi nahi😆At some point i felt Dutta was in complete awe of her talks😉.I also liked how u used those SHOW wala lines & in such beautiful way.But,have to say i love this bossing Nakku & she did tamed the lion Dutta😆I wonder abhi ye haal hai,then what will happen when he will actually fell in love with her.😉Her dressing karna,khana khilana -every act of her was reflecting something more is under the surface. lol am glad u found the humor in it ...i did try to keep the situation light...haha omg yup Naku and her inability to stop talking once she starts 😆 oh yes show wala line lol funny thing is i was watching those scenes and thinking about FF so the ended up coming into FF 😳 lmao you will see na wat will happen when they actually fall in love...might have to wait ...altho it is slowly slowly coming...but the actual realization wont happen for a while 😛ok me gonna stop talking now before i say things that i shouldnt
I have always believed that ur life-partner should be ur friend 1st .so i was damn happy that they finally decided to name their unknown relation as -FRIENDSHIP.I also noticed that post their friendship,there was lot of ease in both of them,their comfort level incresed which is good.you me too friendship needs to be there b4 in a relationship...because u understand that way better ...i feel wen u become friends then u feel more open to things... i dunno i agree with u thats it 😛
Absolutely enjoyed the morning scene with Baaji pulling their legs & both of them emberessed.Whether they like it or not,Baaji & his cupid acts are going to be part of their life till they themselves don't realise their love for each other.😉 lol haha u noe i thought of Baaji's part b4 i thought of D-N kurta button scene then thought of the buttons in order to give Baaji his chance...and then the breakfast...yeah that was random thoughts ...just kinda came out 😆 but am glad you enjoyed it...
Loved how Nakku tricked him into taking to the Dr.She is real smart & prankster,something which Dutta started realising.I was laughing when nakku was pulling Baaji's leg,but he did return the favour.😆 lol haha yup she is intelligent ..law student remember...her mind is good at playing games 😆😆 esp wen it comes to getting her chance to pull Baaji's leg
Sethji & Baaji are doing everything to bring these two close & its working.👍🏼 yup sethji will be more used coming parts...kinda just needed to throw him a intro so snuck him in 😆
The party idea was real cool,Baaji leaving no stones unturned.But,i was kind of surprised how accurately he guessed that Dutta & Nakku are just friends & they don't have that special bond so far. LOL yes this party is the reason I did not update sooner...I stopped writing at the party because I just could not seem to initiate the whol scene and dance sequence and i was watching one of my vms and i used that MR shot where he smiles watching his sisters dance in that same party scene haha and thought eureka i will do the same...passing the parcel game haha ...that scene came to me yesterday...and went on to write it 😳
Dutta was actually staring Nakku😉,lagta hai ye hi pehle pyaar me doob ne wala hai😆
The song -SAIBO is now a days my fav. & suits these 2 who in reality don't know how they feel for each other.The entire dance was 😍😍 aww glad you liked it...actually i am making vm on them for that song and missy had also suggested to use the song and i also LOVE the song so i used...
Just like TASHA were lost inot each other,i am still also lost in this update😍
aww thats good to hear...am glad u liked the update a lot 😊
Beautiful summation of this part by one more of my fav. song - ISHQ HUA😉
missy put that part there lol
Before i forget & get lost in tasha world,those lines at the start of this part were amazing.U wrote them? umm lmao my hindi is not at a level to be writing in the language 😆 missy found it on internet i believe...she is the one in charge of putting those in to all the updates ...she is good at it u see lol...yup i actually really liked that one at the beginning..went so well ...
Fantastic part👏 & waiting to see who will 1st realise the lovewala feeling.😳
Thank you for commenting...loved reading it 😳
Lots of love🤗🤗🤗
Pooja😊