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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rainurubal

you really thought about me during the song ,,,,,,,me on cloud 9

yipeee
thank you...
love you dii...



yeah cuz i was working on that VM just in the morning (btw did not get far with that😳) and then i wrote that scene and lol i was thinking u would probably like it 😆...dont thank me...😛 love you too...now me gotta back to work...am cleaning my garage today ...i dont think i will finish cleaning in even a month ...thats how bad it is 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628



yeah cuz i was working on that VM just in the morning (btw did not get far with that😳) and then i wrote that scene and lol i was thinking u would probably like it 😆...dont thank me...😛 love you too...now me gotta back to work...am cleaning my garage today ...i dont think i will finish cleaning in even a month ...thats how bad it is 😆

thank god ,garage is my bro's duty😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Daya,this was indeed a very very long part.👏 But,it was fantastic thruout & i didn't even felt the need to read it in part,the flow in the story was kind of magnet.once i started reading ,couldn't stop inbetween.👍🏼
The much awaited Dutta & nakku convo. was amazing.I was kind of surprised at Nakku's thoughts.I mean when she was in the kitchen,her mind was totally around Dutta & without her knowing ,she already noticed so many things about his overall personality.Also the way she was mumbling ,those are all symptoms of typical wife.😆
The actual convo. was funny yet interesting & kind of eye-opener for Dutta.Dutta was quite amused that she can talk so much & that she noticed all those things which so far he thought are well hidden.Nakku's bhashan giving is her birth-right.Ek baar shuru hui toh rukti hi nahi😆At some point i felt Dutta was in complete awe of her talks😉.I also liked how u used those SHOW wala lines & in such beautiful way.But,have to say i love this bossing Nakku & she did tamed the lion Dutta😆I wonder abhi ye haal hai,then what will happen when he will actually fell in love with her.😉Her dressing karna,khana khilana -every act of her was reflecting something more is under the surface.
I have always believed that ur life-partner should be ur friend 1st .so i was damn happy that they finally decided to name their unknown relation as -FRIENDSHIP.I also noticed that post their friendship,there was lot of ease in both of them,their comfort level incresed which is good.
Absolutely enjoyed the morning scene with Baaji pulling their legs & both of them emberessed.Whether they like it or not,Baaji & his cupid acts are going to be part of their life till they themselves don't realise their love for each other.😉
Loved how Nakku tricked him into taking to the Dr.She is real smart & prankster,something which Dutta started realising.I was laughing when nakku was pulling Baaji's leg,but he did return the favour.😆
Sethji & Baaji are doing everything to bring these two close & its working.👍🏼
The party idea was real cool,Baaji leaving no stones unturned.But,i was kind of surprised how accurately he guessed that Dutta & Nakku are just friends & they don't have that special bond so far.
Dutta was actually staring Nakku😉,lagta hai ye hi pehle pyaar me doob ne wala hai😆
The song -SAIBO is now a days my fav. & suits these 2 who in reality don't know how they feel for each other.The entire dance was 😍😍
Just like TASHA were lost inot each other,i am still also lost in this update😍
Beautiful summation of this part by one more of my fav. song - ISHQ HUA😉
Before i forget & get lost in tasha world,those lines at the start of this part were amazing.U wrote them?
Fantastic part👏 & waiting to see who will 1st realise the lovewala feeling.😳
Lots of love🤗🤗🤗
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

liked the update ,plz be quick with the next edition ,liked it alot

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety_219

wow Daya,this was indeed a very very long part.👏Pooja!!! 🤗haha thank you thank you that was an update in the making for like weeks LOL did it while laptop was gone and finished it last night 😆 But,it was fantastic thruout & i didn't even felt the need to read it in part,the flow in the story was kind of magnet.once i started reading ,couldn't stop inbetween.👍🏼 thats good to know...lol i guess the fact that i had written it by hand and then typed it out after ...got it edited by missy after lol really helped this update..lotz of re-reading and yet there are still typos 😆 hmmm but at least I got it to flow 😛

The much awaited Dutta & nakku convo. was amazing.I was kind of surprised at Nakku's thoughts.I mean when she was in the kitchen,her mind was totally around Dutta & without her knowing ,she already noticed so many things about his overall personality.Also the way she was mumbling ,those are all symptoms of typical wife.😆 haha yes yes she is ranting like typical wife 😆 glad you liked it ...this was the one scene i re wrote like a million times i just could not get it right...trust me ...my friend who was sitting with me was like why are u crumpling up the paper for...😆 not satisfied...and then finally it just kinda started flowing ...hmmm memories of writing this part lol i think honestly of all my ff and updates this one was quite something to write 😆
The actual convo. was funny yet interesting & kind of eye-opener for Dutta.Dutta was quite amused that she can talk so much & that she noticed all those things which so far he thought are well hidden.Nakku's bhashan giving is her birth-right.Ek baar shuru hui toh rukti hi nahi😆At some point i felt Dutta was in complete awe of her talks😉.I also liked how u used those SHOW wala lines & in such beautiful way.But,have to say i love this bossing Nakku & she did tamed the lion Dutta😆I wonder abhi ye haal hai,then what will happen when he will actually fell in love with her.😉Her dressing karna,khana khilana -every act of her was reflecting something more is under the surface. lol am glad u found the humor in it ...i did try to keep the situation light...haha omg yup Naku and her inability to stop talking once she starts 😆 oh yes show wala line lol funny thing is i was watching those scenes and thinking about FF so the ended up coming into FF 😳 lmao you will see na wat will happen when they actually fall in love...might have to wait ...altho it is slowly slowly coming...but the actual realization wont happen for a while 😛ok me gonna stop talking now before i say things that i shouldnt
I have always believed that ur life-partner should be ur friend 1st .so i was damn happy that they finally decided to name their unknown relation as -FRIENDSHIP.I also noticed that post their friendship,there was lot of ease in both of them,their comfort level incresed which is good.you me too friendship needs to be there b4 in a relationship...because u understand that way better ...i feel wen u become friends then u feel more open to things... i dunno i agree with u thats it 😛
Absolutely enjoyed the morning scene with Baaji pulling their legs & both of them emberessed.Whether they like it or not,Baaji & his cupid acts are going to be part of their life till they themselves don't realise their love for each other.😉 lol haha u noe i thought of Baaji's part b4 i thought of D-N kurta button scene then thought of the buttons in order to give Baaji his chance...and then the breakfast...yeah that was random thoughts ...just kinda came out 😆 but am glad you enjoyed it...
Loved how Nakku tricked him into taking to the Dr.She is real smart & prankster,something which Dutta started realising.I was laughing when nakku was pulling Baaji's leg,but he did return the favour.😆 lol haha yup she is intelligent ..law student remember...her mind is good at playing games 😆😆 esp wen it comes to getting her chance to pull Baaji's leg
Sethji & Baaji are doing everything to bring these two close & its working.👍🏼 yup sethji will be more used coming parts...kinda just needed to throw him a intro so snuck him in 😆
The party idea was real cool,Baaji leaving no stones unturned.But,i was kind of surprised how accurately he guessed that Dutta & Nakku are just friends & they don't have that special bond so far. LOL yes this party is the reason I did not update sooner...I stopped writing at the party because I just could not seem to initiate the whol scene and dance sequence and i was watching one of my vms and i used that MR shot where he smiles watching his sisters dance in that same party scene haha and thought eureka i will do the same...passing the parcel game haha ...that scene came to me yesterday...and went on to write it 😳
Dutta was actually staring Nakku😉,lagta hai ye hi pehle pyaar me doob ne wala hai😆
The song -SAIBO is now a days my fav. & suits these 2 who in reality don't know how they feel for each other.The entire dance was 😍😍 aww glad you liked it...actually i am making vm on them for that song and missy had also suggested to use the song and i also LOVE the song so i used...
Just like TASHA were lost inot each other,i am still also lost in this update😍
aww thats good to hear...am glad u liked the update a lot 😊
Beautiful summation of this part by one more of my fav. song - ISHQ HUA😉
missy put that part there lol
Before i forget & get lost in tasha world,those lines at the start of this part were amazing.U wrote them? umm lmao my hindi is not at a level to be writing in the language 😆 missy found it on internet i believe...she is the one in charge of putting those in to all the updates ...she is good at it u see lol...yup i actually really liked that one at the beginning..went so well ...
Fantastic part👏 & waiting to see who will 1st realise the lovewala feeling.😳
Thank you for commenting...loved reading it 😳
Lots of love🤗🤗🤗
Pooja😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

liked the update ,plz be quick with the next edition ,liked it alot


thanks hun😳...
lol well missy's turn to update so only she can tell u how long she will take 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

I should thank Missy for finding such beautiful lines for such an amazing part👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety_219

I should thank Missy for finding such beautiful lines for such an amazing part

thnku soo much pooja...so glad u enjoyed it😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628


thanks hun😳...
lol well missy's turn to update so only she can tell u how long she will take 😛

Missy ... U r being timed ... Tick Tock Tick Tock ...Here goes the Patil wadi clock ... Tick Tock Tick
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ mishez..thanks for the reply ok my comments on

part 1 the text in first person creates a informal personalized angle ,certainly from Nakku's point of veiw.. her send off scene for me spelt ,obvious sudden as is traditional,but it was evident through hr musings that she was unhappy at the liasion..there was certainly an abject helplessness about her and the send off!
part 3: promo very appropriate selection of viual ,their mariage ,their unacceptance of each other..brought back memories of the rel story LTL1! the captions said it all----will some one save this relationship! or will this non named bond remain unnamed!!!!
part 3: nice and lengthy!! that's what an avid reader looks for! her waking up in an alien/dutta's bed was sad,real, and yet lightly humorous ,only because she choose to get on with her life.
the scene when he comes to collect her for breakfast ,and her stealing glances at him was quite romantic .you deribed him well through nakku's eyes..haiii❤️
baji and his antics and dialouges as the love guru were very amusing contrasted with dutta's angry reactions and Nakku's blushes!🤣
what was interesting to learn that he is aware that nakku does't fancy him... who would after all the truths he told her on the SR gadha kehan ka..mahaan bunay chala tha !1
dutta's arriving home fter site injury was so typical of him to look out for others🤗
sooo loved the read😊 ..please pm me when you do your updates iam used to your style via my feedbacks though missy the text was not poiple!!! xxx hammie 👍🏼

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