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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, Guys... Sorry i haven't updated in a while...
just been real busy at work...

Sorry if i havn't replied to your comments... will reply tomorrow... as i have to finish this update and the write up two long updates for it must be love... and guys there will be a suprise for you... :) anyway in this there will be two new charcter's...

anyway away we goo.,..


(Sorry if my hindi is not correct'.)

Chapter12

Maan was sat with daadi, Radhe, Rahul, Vicky, Sameer, Ada, Pinky and Meera' they were in maan's house' Maan told daadi everything about Radhe's past' and Radhe told her everything too'. Now Geet and her friends were in danger and to keep them afe he needed Daadi's help''

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Geet was with Anjali and kajol.. the three girls decided to have a small girls night in'. Anjali aware of the situation told geet that since Radhe rahuil and Sameer are not her we need to keep the bodyguards with us'.

Geet had no choice but to agree' the whole house was covered with security and body guards'. Kajol was a bit confused with the whole situation'

Geet ' bhabhi mujhe pyaas lagi hai' meh kitchen meh ja rahi hoon'

Geet got up and took ramu and shaan with her to the kitchen'.

Anjali then used this to tell kajol whats been happening and why this much security was needed and who her brothers were'.

Kajol was shocked' she loved geet like her own sister but for her to be in danger made her scared'

Kajol ' don't worry bhabi' humara Geet ko kuch nahi hoga'

Anjali ' aur hum usse shaadi ki liye baj raha hai'

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Meanwhile''..

Maan ' daadi tho aap usse maanayige na??

Daadi - haan mein kar loon gi maan'

Daadi then turned to Radhe'. She admired him soo much'. Someone who could do something to protect his family, protect his sister was amazing'

Daadi ' Radhe' Tum tension mat lo '

Sameer ' kaise nahi len gi'.

Rahul ' haan daadi.. vo humari behen hai' usse ki liye tension lena tho ejk simple sa kaam haan humari liye' hum neh poor zindagi usi ki liye tension liya hai.. and now to stop getting tensed for her is hard'

Daadi ' hmmm' hum usi kal milna chahtha hai' she smiled and kissed their foreheads'.

She then excused herself '

Maan ' Radhe '.

Radhe ' kuch nahi hoga meri geet ko' kuch nahi'

Pinky ' Hum aap par pora borasa hai.. lekin hum apni mama or papa si kya bolange bhai'.

Radhe ' uski tension mat lo' hum sab sambhaal lengi'.

Meera ' teek hai bhai'

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Geet heard something in her bedroom.. she walked in without her guards' it was late and her brothers had come back home' seeing them in soo much tension and stress made her upset'. She went to her room' she heard things moving'. She looked around but saw no-one there' she slowly walked into her bathroom' still no-one was there'.

she slowly moved into the bedroom again... Geeting restless she went to the door and opened... it.. she ran downstairs to find no-one there... this freaked her out... she ran into the kitchen no-one was there.

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His Phone Rang...

he looked at the caller id...

Geet...

He was not sure whether to answer it... the plan had been put into action...

plan - to get Geet scared so she agrees to go to USA...

He wanted sooo much to answer it but he couldn't...

Geet getting fed up of waiting cut the call... She Ran through the whole house and no-one was there,... no security guards... no chefs no house keeping nothing...

freaking out she locked all the windows and all the doors... she ran upstairs and tried to switch on the light...

Crashhh...

She heaard a sound... suddenly Geet whipped her head around...

the lights came on and geet stood in one spot shaking...

Geet - Veerjiii she screeamed...

she got scared... her heartbeats beating frantically...

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Here in the outhouse... (yes they have an outhouse)

Everyone was sat in one big room...

They were sat watching Home CCTV...

The plan was to make Geet scared... leaving Geet all alone...

Seeing Geet scared was hard... she was not enjoyin this.. neither was Radhe, Rahul, Sameer, Vicky, Maan and the rest...

Half the time they would get up and go to her but then would stop at the door.

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Geet looked around again... trying to locate the area where the sound came from... she prayed to her babaji...

Geet – Please Babaji... Madat Karna... please hu...

She Walked around the house...

Geet – Veerji ko itna Bara ghar mein rehne ki kya faida... she walked into the dining area... then walked out and into the living room... Yaha Kuch milta nahi... Uff she said shaking her head... yeh veerji bhi na... she got annoyed and just started to say anything unki na ab shaadi ka time aagya hai... Envii Is umar mein koi alekha rehtha hai kya...

She started to feel comfortable again when she saw a shadow...

She stopped talking and Screamed...

Geet – Arggghhh...

She ran upstairs and saw the shadow again... she felt someone touch her shoulder.. she turned around and gasped...

It was no-one...

She Ran into her room locked the windows and door... she sat in the corner shaking... suddenly the lights came off and Geet sat in the corner shaking...

Geet – Maan... Maan... she kept mumbling...

Not knowing when she fell asleep...

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When they watched the CCTV.. Everyone Except Radhe Laughed At what Geet Said...

They looked at him and fell on the floor laughing...

Radhe mumbled – us Geet ko tho meh dekh loonga...

Rahul – Veerji aap serious mat loo...

Radhe – Haan... Serious aur Mein... Nahi... Vo tho Mazak Kar Rahi thi...

Maan – Haan Lekin Mazak Tho Bohat Acha Tha...

They stopped talking when they heard her Scream...

They looked at the Screen and saw a hand on Geet's Shoulder...

They Were Shocked...

Sameer- Bhaiya... Vo Haath... he said slowly...

Maan – Humne kisi Ko andar Nahi baja na ??

Rahul – Bhaii... he said...

Radhe – Nahi... Geet... Mujhe Geet Ki Paass jana Hai...

All Scared...

But Before he open the door Sameer Beat him too it and all the men and security guards ran...

Precap...

Geet Scared...

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Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update::
Love how concerned they are of geets safety
Waiting for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome loved it ...
thank you sooo much for the update it is awsome,,...loved it...aww they did wrong to make geet scared ...
now lets see wats the twist...
once again thanks alot...muahhh...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
loved hw concerned they are of geet
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Thanks for the PM. Waiting to see what happens next!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dat was a nice update and who was dat person everyone is over here so who is dat person do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, geet ne toh darr mein radhe ki shaadi bhi karadi!
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow!!! nice one

plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
she is sooo scared
loved geet mumbling about radhe's wedding
hope geet is okaiii
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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