WU Thu, 9th Jun 11- Adi Entry/Shanak betabi begins

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'm back :D
covering up for someone.

(and i'm renaming the post on request)


Episode starts with Gangubai beating up another tenant who hasnt paid for the past 2 months
Appears to be a sweettalker, he's again buttering her up.

Khanak is watching from behind a curtain

He's trying to fix gangubai up, she's not agreeing

Gangubai scolds him for making a mess out of his room..she has to clean up after him

Adi (the tenant) has seen khanak behind the curtain and is looking for him

Gangu bai catches him looking for something

khanak's phone falls on the floor
she picks it up
adi gets to see the whole face

he's smitten
khanak sees that he's watching
she gets up and hides behind the curtain again


Gangu bai pulls his ears..she's annoyed at girls calling for him
he's a loverboy types :/

gangubai asks him to go clean up and asks for payment next week..


adi goes to khanak says hi, offering his hand
khanak does namaste..

adi: dont believe what gangu bai was saying, she was kidding, i offered to pay 6 month rent but she didnt agree. i even threatened to leave, but she got emotional and i had to stop. If you need something here, call me.. gives his number.. "i forgot ur name"

khanak: i never told u
adi: tell now..
khanak: khanak

she shuts her door

adi likes the name..

Scene change:

Shaan by the window

duck brings in food
asks him to come have some
shan comes , sits..
shan wonders whether khanak has eaten
he says he doesnt feel like eating
gets up

duck also puts his fork away

awww


scene change:

Gangu asks khanak to take a plate and eat
khanak lost in thoughts.. she is sure shan hasnt eaten,
she tells gangu she's not hungry, and she's going to rest..


In the room:

Khanak with her rose...
thinking about their last few talks

shan again by the window..

RBO sad song plays :(

khanak's crying


shan: i cant live without her, i have to go meet her
khanak: i cant live like this anymore, i want to go meet him
khanak finds money in her wallet : (to herself) "Only 100 rupees, i need to reach shantanu but gangu bai?, watever happens, we'll see"

Khanak opens the door to her room to go out

hears gangu talking to someone on the fone about some girl who secretly kept talking on the fone and secretly went to meet some guy, and gangu bai kicked her away..

khanak gets scared..


gangu threatens on the fone saying "if the girl comes here again, i'll cut off her leg and give it in her hand"

khanak goes back to her room (hehe)


Shan enters gangu bai's house (through a window)

(shan music plays :D :D :D)


khanak comes out of her room, puppys coming to the living room, khanak hides behind the sofa..

puppy goes to his room, khanak is running out

puppy comes out again

wonders why he felt someone when tehre was noone there..


Gangu bai prepares to sleep, takes a blanket over her

shan enters her room (OMG)

sits on the bed, smiles watching her from behind

(OH GOD BURTHAL)


shan: cant sleep without me, still pretending to sleep? burthal

shan tries to put an arm around .

gangu bai shouts: whos it, chor chor chor (thief)

shan gets up, runs out

he decides to turn off the main switch (electricity)


gangu bai comes out with a jhadu, starts beating up puppy

puppy sees shan running away..

he says "there's the thief"

gangu: then who are u

puppy: i'm puppy

they run after shan

he escapes..


gangu: next time he comes, i'll murder him with my jhadu



Scene change:

Khanak, shan duck at duck's place

shan's hurt in the leg

he ouches

khanak: good , shout more, why did u come there so late

shan: i shud be asking u this, u dont know the ways, what if u'd gotten lost

khanak: i'm not that dumb

shan: yes ur very smart, no wonder u came here without calling me

khanak: i wanted to surprise u

shan melts

duck laughs

duck: your surprise turned out to be quite expensive for my friend (he points at the leg)

khanak whines: how would i have known he was also..(pushes his leg by mistake)

shan shouts again

khanak: sorry sorry

she nurses his wound

shan stare stare


realises duck is around

he gives duck a tissue to cover his ears, and a cushion to cover his eyes.. (duck turns away taking the hint)

:D :D :D

he plays some song on the cellphone

sung by KT

he asks whether she liked it

khanak says she isnt liking anything right now
khanak: no one knows how i spent all these hours without you.. it felt like if i didnt meet u...

shan: u'd die

he pulls khanak close and hugs..


(i got lost in the hug and forgot to update, so had to watch again)

:D

khanak asks shan to do something, she cannot live without him

shan asks her to go to his parents place, until he does something

khanak gets angry, saying she's telling him she cant live without him, and he's talking about living separate again..

khanak has an idea, that shan also come and live at gangu bai's place, since this adi guy hasnt paid for a while, gangu bai will agree.

shan likes the idea

duck was listening, he says its a bad idea, and gangu bai will never agree because duck introduced shan as duck's partner

shan gets angry saying you put me in a fix because of your own problems, what type of a friend are u , u shud be helping us, u know we cant live without each other

duck gets emotional and promises that he's going to help shan get to gangu bai's place


shan decides to go drop khanak at gangu's

he cannot get up

duck to khanak: dont worry, ur bro is alive, we'll go to gangus

khanak gives shan an encouraging smile

episode ends..


lovely lovely episode

Tomorrow:

gangu bai beats adi up for not paying rent..
she warns that she'll come again the next day

adi to himself: gangu bai i know until u find a replacement for me, u will never kick me out






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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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4months of yr missing n 2day i get to c u update...aasu aagaye sacchi!!🤗🤗🤗love u my barbie doll:)

so d epi.im already ranting abt it everywhere...it is such a phataka epi.loved everything abt it
everything ...its a fun sweet romantic painful a littl serious all in all pakka entertainer epi:)

karan yashu jaskaran karan godwan bhavnaji n saaransh .all were superb in their own ways

shanak ducks scene was d bestest ever...loved everything abt it:0
aadi is cool nfun n i love d way he was eyeing khana...lol

bhavnaji n karan were hilarious in d bedrooms cene...kt rocks in comic scenes
yasha looked super stunning n i love her new suit:)

10/10 epi..loved it to d core

teech.yr update is always a pleasure to read:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mwaaa teeech... thanku thanku... superb WU...
Aaahhh the missing and the milan... sigh yes beautiful... Am beginning to fall in love with RBO and ShaNak all over again... 😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i agree

totally beautiful

and so well portrayed

the yearning and then the scheming :D


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Posted: 14 years ago
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WB teech! 😊


btw, did karishma make that request? Rofl! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hahahahahahah zenny u know me so freaking well dammit...hahahahahah zenny i love u:)))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol

hahaahahahaha

bang on :D

i love u guys :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG mere ansuu taras gaye the!

Teech Welcome back!!! take my update on Mondays...i dont like fillers! lmfao

no kidding i love making fun of forum people! hahahahaha

BTW Vatsu follows ur foot-step...same updating style but she adds more of her own comments! lol

this epi was indeed good...

btw teech what r ur thoughts on the new entry? lmfao

i bet u hate the shirts already!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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karan looks sexy in pink n his eyes...omg d last look is a killer all d way
yashas pouty lips i want them.im ready fr a lip job...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'm not commenting on the new entry yet :P

ppl seem to be excited :P


give me anything but fillers :D



Edited by IFsKhanak - 14 years ago

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