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Posted: 14 years ago
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I was inspired by my convo with aimin in another thread, about Ekta and her serials. So I thought I would get creative and write a scene Ekta ishtyle.😃

If this was a Kekta Maiyya serial.. 😉

Murli would have died in a car crash by now , and Bharti will have been kicked out by the family for being the manhoos responsible for his death!😡

Jhumka would be utterly evil and only married to Dhumroo to take revenge on BharLi. She would have been Murli's pehla pyar na?. She would be trying to separate BharLi by creating all kinds of mischief. Amongst some of her tricks one would be to suggest that Bharti is possessed, thus instigating the entire family to pin her down and perform an exorcism, whereby the evil spirit will leave her body through the third toe of her left foot 😕.

The pundit performing this will have bushy hair, black markings on his face and speak in a loud and booming voice. He will instruct them all in what to do, and will actually be doing really stupid, basic things but will make it sound as if he is about to invade some axis-of-evil country and is gearing up his UN troops!😆

We would have seen the culmination of her efforts on the day of Bharti's marriage to Amit, when a very-much alive and kicking, although somewhat facially altered😛, Murli would enter through a blacked out door (plastic surgery will have turned him into any number of Kekta's heroes!).

No one will believe him when he says he is Murli, except off course Bharti who will instinctively 'feel' its him and try to convince everyone that 'her' Murliji has come back. Despite all this bakwass, it will not occur to a single character to ask where the bloody hell he's been for the last year??!! and what happened to his face .😕😡🤢

Furthemore it would have transpired that Bharti is in fact the real daughter of Bhushan chacha who had a thing going on with Dhara all those years ago, when Rupesh was busy at the factory!😲

And that she and Bhushan's son are in fact brother and sister! 😲

Sudha would have run away with Bhushan's son😈 , who's nice personality was only a mask, to cover up his real character and intentions, which is to marry her for her father's wealth, and then treat her like trash afterwards .

Amit will turn out to be the son of Bansi's' long-time enemy, who;s business he took over once and this is his way of getting revenge.🤪 Incidentally, Sudhai will be pregnant when she runs away. Bhushan's son will have got her drunk at a party and vaghera, vaghera .

Murli will begin waging a war to win Bharti back, with his whole family against him. Bharti, mahan as ever, will struggle against this for as long as possible before eventually running into Murli's arms, but only after she has ran to the mandir in the middle of the night and fallen at the feet of bagwaan atleast 150 times. Only to be accosted by Bhushan's son, who's now realised that he loves Bharti after all and Sudha was a mistake.🤣

Murli and Bhushan' son struggle and a gun is produced by him . But in the ensuing struggle he drops it and Bharti picks it up. She tells them both to stop or she will shoot herself . Which they promptly do. She is given an ultimatum by both, to choose one of them. Just as she's deciding she turns to Bhushan's son to say something and is gesturing with her hand (in which she is still holding the gun). Suddenly a gun shot is fired. Everyone is shocked and thinks Bharti is the culprit . Obviously only we the viewers can see someone else standing behind a pillar who is the real culprit!🥱

Bharti is arrested . Murli begins the fight to clear her name and eventually after about a year in reel time , he succeeds. He and Bharti are going to get married. Again! 🤢

On the day of the wedding, a figure appears in the mandir. It is a very-much alive and kicking, although somewhat facially altered, Bhushan's son, who enters through a blacked out... 🥱

Oh well, you get the idea na? 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

Murli would have died in a car crash by now , and Bharti will have been kicked out by the family for being the manhoos responsible for his death!😡



i've stopped reading here, does that mean i'm too sensible for an Ekta show? HAHA
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bavdfan



i've stopped reading here, does that mean i'm too sensible for an Ekta show? HAHA

Everyone is too sensible for an Ekta show. But she does romance so well, and that's her hook!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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... LMAO!!This had me in splits, Rakhie!! If this was an Ekta serial, I'm pretty sure things would play out almost Exactly as you've put them. 🤣Such creativity to reproduce the same old tracks, lol!At this rate, you might just get a call from the K lady herself.😛

I wanted to quote my favourite parts but the whole story was just simply epic. No point in pasting the whole thing here. Though, I have to admit, the creme de la creme was
On the day of the wedding, a figure appears in the mandir. It is a very-much alive and kicking, although somewhat facially altered, Bhushan's son, who enters through a blacked out...🥱

🤣

P.S. Kekta's imagination capacity might be that of a teaspoon, but yeah her artistry with romance sure could make one swoon & salivate.😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome rakhie u r too good

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimin

... LMAO!!This had me in splits, Rakhie!! If this was an Ekta serial, I'm pretty sure things would play out almost Exactly as you've put them. 🤣Such creativity to reproduce the same old tracks, lol!At this rate, you might just get a call from the K lady herself.😛


I wanted to quote my favourite parts but the whole story was just simply epic. No point in pasting the whole thing here. Though, I have to admit, the creme de la creme was
On the day of the wedding, a figure appears in the mandir. It is a very-much alive and kicking, although somewhat facially altered, Bhushan's son, who enters through a blacked out...🥱

🤣

P.S. Kekta's imagination capacity might be that of a teaspoon, but yeah her artistry with romance sure could make one swoon & salivate.😆

Would much prefer getting a call from the CV's at BAVD! 😃 (hint hint!)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well, then, if you do, it'd be a relief for us. 😆I'm pretty sure you'd turn it into something MUCH better than it is right now.

Read your thread on telling CVs what we want. Was very interesting! Right now with the current state of the storyline and the direction in which it's proceeding, I'm afraid all we're going to end up with is wishful thinking. Why are BharLi acting like a modern day Romeo & Juliet? Rather, why are the CVs making them behave like that?? No offence, but even though I love Shakespeare, I've never liked R&J to this date. Maybe miscommunication might have led to a tragedy like that half a century ago but not anymore!

I have a feeling that the CVs think they are catering to a minor audience here and so, are producing shit*y storylines with this cavalier attitude. A great main concept and great actors simply don't do the job alone.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimin

Well, then, if you do, it'd be a relief for us. 😆I'm pretty sure you'd turn it into something MUCH better than it is right now.

Read your thread on telling CVs what we want. Was very interesting! Right now with the current state of the storyline and the direction in which it's proceeding, I'm afraid all we're going to end up with is wishful thinking. Why are BharLi acting like a modern day Romeo & Juliet? Rather, why are the CVs making them behave like that?? No offence, but even though I love Shakespeare, I've never liked R&J to this date. Maybe miscommunication might have led to a tragedy like that half a century ago but not anymore!

I have a feeling that the CVs think they are catering to a minor audience here and so, are producing shit*y storylines with this cavalier attitude. A great main concept and great actors simply don't do the job alone.

👏👏👏
Bang on!
You'd think I'd have learnt by now to lower my expectations
But what to do? I have always believed that there is no complacency in a marriage. But unfortunately this is what CV's excel at it seems! Bah!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ekta mata ki jai ho 🥳

You forgot the show would have had at least two leaps and Jhumka would have remarried Murli for revenge 🤣🤣🤣🤣
But actually he is still married to Bharti or she was hiding under ghunghat. Murli and Bharti child would have been raised by Gausala, who will raise him to be evil 🤣🤣🤣🤣

oh man I cld go on 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved it Rakhie 🤣🤣🤣

Ekta mata tusi great ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fuzzyface

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ekta mata ki jai ho 🥳

You forgot the show would have had at least two leaps and Jhumka would have remarried Murli for revenge 🤣🤣🤣🤣
But actually he is still married to Bharti or she was hiding under ghunghat. Murli and Bharti child would have been raised by Gausala, who will raise him to be evil 🤣🤣🤣🤣

oh man I cld go on 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved it Rakhie 🤣🤣🤣

Ekta mata tusi great ho

I swear that woman has some of the most convoluted plots in the history of convoluted plots! 🤣🤣🤣

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