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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve
Great!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: SuJaTa790
great os. update soon.

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
he actually went n talked to her...😲...wow...😆

both were so nervous...jaise ki words were not coming out of their mouths...

continue soon...

Originally posted by: JayaR
finally Maan showed some courage to talk to her...

I loved Geet's self talk...

Thanks so much guys!

both still have long ways to go lol

will update soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: maanujaanu
amazing update
do continue soon

Originally posted by: spvd
part 2
OMG both Maan and Geet are totally hopeless...
the part was so funny...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: mandymore
Seriously dey bth r hopeless,inki luvstory kaise age badegi,only adi n god knws,nice prt.

Originally posted by: sakadafi
Loved teh update!!! It was hilarious...both of them are truly hopeless 😆

Thanks so much guys!

will update soon!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
gr8 n wonderful update

Originally posted by: change12
wating for the update ...

Originally posted by: mysticangel
simply awesome

Thanks so much guys!

will update soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: LadyArwen
exquisite...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi there...read the update for part 1 n 2 on my blackberry n could not post comment. Nywats love the updates...so different n awesome. Please pm wen u update n ass me to ur pm list! Will send u a buddy request

Thanx so much guys!

@khwaishfan...thanx so much ..I will accpet ur request and pm u when i next update :)

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

loved it...

gawd this 2 are really impossible...😆😆

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

hey guys I will update soon!😳

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Hey guys!

Here is part 3 of the OS...now many of you guys said why not turn it into SS the thing is it really depends where the story goes...cuz I don't plan what I am going to write tomorrow..I just write whatever comes to my mind lol...so yeah it just depends where my last minute ideas take me lol..until then enjoy!

Part III

As Geet was getting off the bus she noticed Maan also getting up..."hey babaji..why is he getting off here? Does he live near by as well? if so, why haven't I seen him before...help me Babaji..." Geet started walking fast toward her car...Maan got off the bus and watched Geet's every move...he saw her going toward a car..."who came to pick her up..it better be not some guy or else...or else what Maan? you can't even speak to her properly and you are planning on hitting a guy?.." He saw a guy getting out of the car as Geet approached the car...his blood boiled with jealousy and anger..."who is he?..no way I am going to let him take her away from me..." Geet started smiling as she saw the person...he felt like punching the guy as Geet hugged him..."who is he?...why is she hugging him while smiling? Maan do something before you lose her.." he quickly turned around and pretended to walk somewhere as their car passed by him...

Adi pulled up besides him and got out of the car..."Maan what were you thinking...I told you to just talk to her not get in the bus and follow her...now she must think you are a stalker or something..what was the need to that? huh tell me?" (after getting no response Adi snaps his fingers in front of him..Maan comes out of his thoughts and looks at Adi) "Maan I am asking you something...why did you follow her?"

Maan; ohh i don't know...I just wanted to spend some time with her...

Adi: ok well did you get her name?

Maan: No..(Adi turns around in frustration and raises his hands in the air)

Adi: Seriously I don't know what to do with you...what were you doing in the bus for past half hour?

Maan: I couldn't speak..so umm I was just staring at her whenever she was looking outside of the window

Adi: I can't believe this...you know it is understandable if she doesn't speak due to shyness but you..come on you are Maan Singh Khurana..ruthless young business man who isn't afraid to get whatever he wants...who makes people bend down and beg until you achieve your goal and YOU out of all the people are afraid to talk to ONE girl? Are you even the same Maan Singh Khurana?

Maan: I know its just that I forget everything and everyone when I see her..it is like I am whole new person whenever she is around...it is not my fault

Adi: Of course its not..you two are just hopelessly in love...and I am stuck in the middle to help you both or else you two will spend the rest of your life just stealing glances at one another

Maan: forget that...first I want to find out who was that person that picked her up...and I want to get all the information about this bus...where does it stop when does it come in the morning., etc...

Adi: And what are you going to do then? Its not like you are going to talk to her

Maan (puts his hands on Adi's shoulder): I know you think I will do nothing but this time its different...I won't let her get taken away from me...seeing that guy picking her up woke up the real Maan Singh Khurana in me and this Maan Singh Khurana won't let ANYONE come in between his love...aab uska baap bhi mujhe rok nahi sakta (he smirks at Adi)

Adi: Now that's Maan Singh Khurana I know...but anyway enough of these dialogs and let's go..we have a lot of things to do...(both laugh and get into the car)
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"how am I going to face him today..everything seemed like a dream to me...was he really sitting next to me? and oh my god did he really talk to me?" (she smiled..as she walked to her bus in the morning for work) "he looked so hot from up close...he is so perfect...his eyes speak thousands words...they are so expressive and warm...they can make anyone crazy with just one look...and his voice its like music to my ears...I could listen to his talk everyday...and his body...I could touch"..(she stopped) "Geet what are you thinking...you don't even know his name...and you don't know his status either...what if he really is married?" (she frowned) "damn I should've looked at his left hand to see if he has a wedding ring...bu no you had to be stupid and stare at him all the time...maybe if I see him today I will look and see if he has a ring on his left hand..." (her bus came...Geet got into the bus and her heart stopped when she saw him again..sitting next to the window...he looked at her and smiled...she looked down embarrassed of being caught staring at him...) "What should I do? ignore him?" (she frowned when she saw a guy sitting next to him...) "just walk past and grab your seat...yeah don't look at him...and DON'T embarrass yourself...ok take a deep breath and slowly start walking..." (she started walking toward Maan to sit in the back...she kept her head low so that she doesn't look at him...she was about to go past Maan's seat when the guy that was sitting next to Maan got up..."

Guy: Excuse me you could sit here..my stop is coming anyway... (Geet having no other option sat next to Maan..."Babaji help me...should I talk to him? would he speak to me?" (then suddenly she remembered something) "Geet forget talking first see if he has any ring on his left hand...if he is married or engaged then forget about talking..." (she slowly "nonchalantly" looked at his left hand...she was happy when she found no ring on his left hand...she did bhangra in her head) "yippie he is not married or engaged..that means i might have a chance..." (she smiled to herself)

"I saw her walk into the bus...she looked like an angle in her white dress..she is so beautiful and so simply dressed...i was so happy when she looked my way and I couldn't' help but return the same gesture to her...I saw her blush when I smiled at her...she looked really nice...I imagined myself of going there and kissing her on her lips...it look a lot of me to control myself..whenever she is around I always forget my mission why I am even here...but no not this time...I won't let anyone take her away...I will make her mine no matter what...and also because Adi was sitting next to me...to make sure I don't mess up...I could always count on Adi and I know if I don't do something soon he will surely kill me...my heart started beating fast when I saw her starting to walk toward me...I pinched Adi's hand when I saw her almost walking past my seat...Adi looked at me with a frown I smiled as I knew he wouldn't be able to scream...I pinched him again until he stood up before Geet and gave her my seat..." Maan looked at Geet from the corner of his eyes...he saw her looking down at his left hand..at first he was confused at too why but then understood why? he smiled inwardly "I am not married nor engaged mystery girl but soon I will be..."

Maan: Nice weather today isn't it? ("ok I know that was stupid way to start but I had to start somewhere")

Geet (looked at Maan coming out of her thoughts) umm yeah it is nice...I like summer...("aah he is talking to me again...play it smooth...")

Maan: You are the same girl right? the one from yesterday?

Geet (frowned.."he doesn't remember me? why would he right..I bet he has a lot of girls hitting on him so why would he pay attention to silly old me") she shakes her head yes

Maan (smiled when Geet frowned...he didn't want Geet to think he was a stalker or something following her in the bus out of no where): I thought you looked familiar...sometimes I see you taking this same bus in the afternoon...(Geet "so he looks at me too? oh my god..." she tried hard not to show her smile but failed..Maan noticed that) did I say something funny? (he looks at her amused..knowing why she was smiling)

Geet (looks at him embarrassed of being caught smiling for no reason..) ji no...and yeah I always take this bus back home...(she hesitated to ask him something else but she needed to know) I haven't seen you take this bus before?

Maan (looked at her shocked...he wasn't expecting this question..."what do I say now? think Maan think? You don't want her to think you are a stalker...") well...I...usually my...umm..friend..comes to pick me up...but umm now..my friend got into an accident..so..he won't..be able to pick me up for a while...that is why..I am taking a bus...("I hope she buys this..." he looks at her worried...)

Geet: ohh..I hope your friend is alright...

Maan: yeah he will be ok..he is a strong guy...(Maan looked over to Adi who gave him a murderous look...) by the way my name is Maan...if you don't mind can I ask your name?

Geet (sighs "Maan...what a beautiful name for a beautiful guy...Geet think about this later..you have all day at work..for now answer him") Ji mera naam Geet hai

Maan: you have a beautiful name Geet... ("wow what a nice name...Geet...I could say that name all day...Geet...Geet...Geet...its so musical...")

Geet: Thanks...(she blushed) you too

Maan (laughs): Thanks...so Ms. Gee what do you do? You don't have to answer that if you don't want to

Geet: I am a financial consultant at XXX company...I started working there couple of months ago...

Maan: wow that's good...do you like it there?

Geet: Yeah...everyone is so nice and caring...it doesn't feel like I just started working there...what do you do? besides being a valet person...(Maan looks at her) I mean I see you after work parking cars that's why I asked...(she looks down in nervousness... "what if he takes this wrong")

Maan: So you have been noticing me? (he smiles at Geet as he teases her.who blushes...) that is my part time job...I work full-time at Khurana Constructions...

Geet: wow I heard of that company...I actually had applied there for a position before but because I had no experience I never got the job...I have a friend that works here as a receptionist Pinky...

Maan ("how come I haven't seen her resume before...or else she would'v been in front of me everyday...") Pinky? yeah I know her..I see her everyday...what position did you apply for?

Geet: umm I don't remember the position but it was in finance department...but ohh well...I will apply again once I gain some experience...what do you do at KC? I mean what department?

Maan ("ohh damn what should I tell her..I can't say I am the MD of KC …") I work in the finance department...I am an accountant

Geet: that's nice...so hopefully I will work with you in future if I see get a job there

Maan: yeah maybe you will (the bus came to a halt...both got off the bus...once outside both looked at one another not knowing how to say bye...)

Geet: well umm...I will see you around...

Maan: yeah...see you later...

Both smiled at each other and started walking in the opposite direction...both stopped half way and looked back at one another...both smiled and waved goodbye...as walked away smiling to themselves remembering there talk...

Geet: Maan...

Maan: Geet...

Both sighed and waited for the day to be over...so they could see each other again...

Hope you guys liked it!

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

lovely update simi

awww that was so sweet

loved ther cute little blushes

and yess now maans going to fight for his love😆

lol geet is happy that he'z not engaged,,,he'z only single and he'z ready for you😉

luvd how they got off the stop and sed each others name to themselves,,,how cute

cont soon Xx...

thx 4 the PM

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Awesome update
Loved maanz diolgue lolz
Update snx

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Thats a sweet part...
Loved the way they carried their conversation ahead...
Hope to see them meet again soon...
So please update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Love
Sakshi

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