FF on AA- I m back- Note pg 9 New PROMO pg 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I m new here and this is my first ff

I AM BACK


LOVE
?what is love ?a reall meaning knows every one but could not understand it or should i say dont want to. . they try to follow but will they success.

14nth february the most beautiful day for the lovers who tried hard to impress thier loved .In the city of mahattan many people are busy to make his date the best one to make this day beautiful.But who knows what future have stored for them .Will they going to stand by each other side in thier whole life or its just matter of few moment who know?

In calavary hostpital in new york doctors were running here and there instead of celebrate this day they r tried to save the life .which is on her last stage .

she is lying there in hospital bed of mahattan .motionless no hope for life , not wanted to see the criule world otside which covered her face to hide the scariest truth.she have no strenght to face it .

Inside the OT Dr. Sid was busy in trying to save arohi her head quite severe and her face in sever danger andgoing to take a lot of work but he knew what he was doing. However, when he had cleaned her face the blood and seen her face he felt something inside. As if he knew this girl but it was impossible as this was the first time she was looking at him. In order for him to concentrate he needed to forget about her and only think of her as his patient.

Outside the Ot He is sitting there praying for her mercy to god.He is crying but did not want to sho to other people his weakness.

but today he want to cry bcz he could not be able to believe the truth thats his friend is fighting for her life .HE pray silently for her life.Why god always does this to her? What she has her fault in this ?Why god always play cruil game with her?


In her whole life she never wanted to harm even a fly and peole are long way to think.He want nothing but her happiness from his childhood, afterall he is her childhood friend. he knew she loved Someone who meant the world to her and for someone who no longer existed in her life.

He just came here to meet her but left shocked to see her condition.he is not going to leave the person who had done this to her.

He promised o himself: I am not going to leave u ARJUN SINGHANIA u have to take back all the pain u have caused her.



tell me whether i should continue or not




Chapter 1 - pg1

Chapter 2 - pg2

Chapter 3 - pg 4

Chapter 4 - pg 6

Chapter 5

Chapter 6


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please do continue...
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awsome strt
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Hey this is great, pleas update soon and add me to ur pm list! Thanks 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So here is 2nd chapter
ENJOY it

CHAPTER-2


He came out of his thought when doctor tapped his shoulder .
Doc : hmm sir aap ka naam
HE : i am armaan mallik arohi ka best friend from childhood
Doc: ohh
Armaan : doctor what happend is she alright ? i want to meet her right now .plz tell me how is she? " He become worried now
Doc: actually wo ... sir..
Armaan: aap bol kyu nahi rahe doctor iam asking u something tell me how is she? .Can i meet her?" now he is hell worrid now why the hell is doctor is not speaking anything.
Doc" Sir we have saved her but...
armaan waited for the explanation.
doc: come in my cabin we need to talk there."he said with a concern in his voice which scared armaan more.

armaan silently followed him .they both entered in doc cabin. when they both settled down the doc exhaled. and begans.

doc: listen when arohi admitted here, that we even did not know that if we can save her or not but may be some of ur prays saved her...her face and brain got severe damage in which thay take so much time ..we did our best in every thing her body too got some deep wounds but thats dont matter they take some time to get well...but the we did her brain well and we too sucsessful on that but...

Armaan : but what doctor ?plz tell me what exact happend ..i cant take silen any more now.

Doc:Ok... armaan she is in comma

"ShOCK"

Armaan: WWWAATTT?

Doc: she is in comma

Doc noticed a fat tear came out from armaan eyes , he got up and put his hand on his shoulder to give him some courage.

Doc: armaan sambhalo apne apko ye waqt aise toot ke bikharne ka nahi hai tumhe hosla rakhna hai ..arohi ka khayal rakhna hai

Armaan stood up and leave the cabin he goes towards the arohi room he stood in front of her room he goes near the door and raise his hand to touch the shiny glass in a purpous to touch her face which is opposit to the door .her eyes where closed and she was laying on bed.
Tears started coming from armaan's eyes.
Armaan: Arohi you must come out from comma. We have to take our revenge from the person because of whom u are here. Arjun must pay for his deeds.


So guys it's this
comment nd tell me where I should improve
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was nice
what has arjun done to arohi?
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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for arjun u have to wait for next chapters
Edited by ...riya... - 14 years ago

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