Hey Vini 😊
good to see another creations of urs 😛 ... sorry 4 d late reply yaar😔... i completly 4gt to comment 😔
actually FB pe ek mail aa gaya tha 😃?.. so I gt lost in tht😍😍 ?? n yahan comment karna hi bhool gyi 😉
but I just loved ur poem ??. Really awesome yaar👏👏
do write more
n I really loved these lines 😊
Naksh feels anger, they hurt each other, and then they contemplate,
They realize they were wrong, they regret, repent n den ask 4 forgiveness ...
Says the things they don't intend to,
And then feeling sorry about it, causing discomfort to me and you...
Edited by divi4u - 14 years ago
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