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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the part...her friends forgave her for lieing to them, so good
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Posted: 14 years ago
so finally everything sorted out bw friends...
hopefully now we will get to see more maaneet moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzz update... dear plzzz me waiting...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys..
sorry for the late update..
went to watch Ready on friday so im a little late with updates...


Chapter 10

Meera and pinky were sat in the living room' it was sooo beautiful they thought.. Geet was sat opposite them on the other sofa' Sat with her was Maan, Rahul, Sameer, Vicky while Radhe, Ada and Anjali were stood up behind them.'. Geet was confused' she didn't know what to think' she wanted to say something but didn't'. she didn't know if it was the right thing' she looked at maan who gave her a nod' she understood what the nod meant' taking a deep breath she got up slowly' she walked upto meera and pinky'

Dekh pinky' she started saying' Mujhe maaf karde' yeh sab isiliye kiya tha kyun ki main apni bhai ki liye kiya' isiliye kyun ki main apni bhai ko dukhi nahi dekh sakthi' unse door nahi ja sakthi' she turned back and looks at her brothers'

Meera mera bhai mera bina mar jayenga' isilye yeh sab kiya' she starts crying'

Seeing her break down like this maan gets up to go to geet, but is beaten to it by her own brothers. Who hug her and wipe her tears'

Radhe ' nahi aisa mat kahena'

Rahul ' dekha' vo hum se kitna pyaar karti hai'

Radhe ' humme kush dekh kar vo khud ki liye kitne gham saya hai'

Meera and pinky get tears in their eyes' unable to carry on with their faade they get up and go to geet and hug her tight'.

Meera & Pinky ' we forgive you geet'

Geet smiles hearing their words'.

Geet - thankyouu'

She pulls out of the hug and smiles'.

Geet turns to maan and nods her head as a thank youu'

He smiles back to her and geet blushes'

Maan smirks at her blush and shakes his head'.

Geet show meera and pinky the whole house'

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Maan was sat in the cinema room' Geet walked in after all the girls had gone home.. she saw maan sat down on his own' she walked upto him and sat right next to him'

For a while not one of them spoke'.

Then Geet broke the silence'

Geet ' thanks'

Maan knew what she was saying thanks but decided to tease her a little bit'.

Maan ' kyun??

Geet ' vo jo sab kuch hua isiliya'.

Maan smirks' Kyun Kya hua..??

Geet started getting irritated ' Maaannn she said' gritting her teeth together'

Maan enjoying every minute of it'

Maan ' kya.. mujhe mera naam pata hai' tumko batana ki koi zaroot nahi'

Geet ' maaa.. ab bas bhi karooo'

Maan ' kya geet'.

Geet ' Maan' Bas' Meh chalthi hoon.. tumhara saath baath karni bhi acha nahi hai' hmmmphh'

She got and was about to walk away when she felt a hand on her wrist' she turned around' Geet saw maan holding her wrist'

Geet ' Ab kya hua maan'

Maan ' Arre main tho mazak kar raha tha'

Geet ' Acha' Aise tho nahi laga'.

Maan ' seriously Geet' Sach main' mein mazak kar raha tha'

Geet ' acha maan lethi hoon' ab mera haath chora na'

Maan looks down and realises his hand is still on her wrist'

Maan ' sorry' he fumbled'

Geet ' its okay'.

He let go of her hand and smiled'

She was about to walk away when she turned and smiled''

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Somewhere in the middle of Delhi'. There was a gang' A Gang Out For Revenge' A Gang who hated one person' the gang leader was a evil person' he wanted something that everyone had got and had got it as well but there was one thing he wanted and he couldn't get it. The reason being this one thing was sooo perfectly hidden that even a fly couldn't get it'. It was something he had wanted.. he needed this so he could hurt his enemy' hurt his enemy for killing his brother' he needed this but this was not possible' he needed to find the weakest point of his enemy and he had found out what it was'. Now all he had to do was find this weakest link'

Person ' bhai' Mil Gaya'.

Bhai ' kya??

Person ' Weakest link'.

Bhai ' kya? Sach'

Person- haan bhai' Lekin?? He paused'

Bhai jumped up'

Bhai ' Lekin?? Lekin kya??

Person ' Teen Larkiyon si Humme Pata nahi ki unki weakest link kaunsi hai'

Person ' agar nahi pata tho teeno ko uta lo'

Person ' lekin bhai' unke aage bodyguards hotha hai..

Bhai ' tho wait karna' Jab Bodyguards nahi hai tho phir uta lena'..

Person ' teek hai bhai'

Bhai ' ek minute...

The person stopped...

Bhai ' tumhe kaha mile vo...

Person ' Bhai ek college mein... vo college ki students kisi larki ki bari mein baat kar raha thi ki vo apka dushman kisi larki si milne gaya tha... mujhe tho lagtha hai ki vo behen he hogi...

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Geet was sat in her room. She was thinking about someone... well she was thinking about Maan... she wondered why she felt different when he held her wrist... she felt a warm sense of passion... although she didn't show it, she felt her heart beating real fast... she felt a familiar touch... not knowing why she started thinking more... but the more she thought about it the more confused she got... she needed answers... fast..

She got her phone and dailed a number...

Once it rang she heard a voice..

Hello... came the voice...

Geet 'kajol... tho jaldi mera ghar ajoa.. please baat karni hai..

She gave her the address...

Half an hour later

There was a knock on the door..

Geet ran to open it...

There she saw Kajol... she screamed and both girls hug...

Geet led Kajol to her room

Kajol sat on Geet's bed... Geet told Kajol everyting and made her swear that

She didn't tell anyone...

Kajol sowre she wont tell anyone...

Geet ' vo sab chor... meri ek problem hai... she told Kajol her little and problem...

Kajol just started laughing...

Geet ' meh koi problem mein pasi hoon aur thu haas rahi hai,...

Kajol stopped laughing...

Kajol ' sorry yaar... lekin yeh koi problem thori haiii

Geet ' kyun nahi hai...

Kajol ' mujhe lagtha hai kit um usse chana lagi ho...

Geet ' KYA!!! Yeh thori ho saktha hai... meh tho ladoo si pyar karthi hoon...

Kajol ' ladoo???..

Geet ' haan .. vo bachpan mein ladoo tha patha nahi ab kaisa hoga... she said dreamily... she had her head rested on her arms as she started dreaming about her ladoo... but flashes of Maan kept interrupting her...

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There in the Khurana mansion...

Maan was sat with Daadima with his head on her lap...

Daadi had her hand in Maan's hair... slowly playing with his hair she asked him what's up...

Daadi ' kya hua Maan ...

Maan who was dreaming about Geet smiled...

Maan ' Daadi mujhe meri mishti mil gayiii...

Daadi was confused...

Daadi ' mishti???

Maan ' haan Daadi... meri mishti... meri bachpan ki mishti...

Daadi ' acha... Daadi said... understanding who her grandson was talking about... vo mishti...

Maan ' haan Daadi... he had the fullest smile ever... he smiled as Geet invaded his mind... knowing fully that Geet is his mishti... he wanted to hug her today when he held her wrist.. instantly he knew this was is mishti... only his mishti could make him feel sooo complete.. so full of passion...

Precap...

Maaneet scenes...


HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT...

THANKYOU..

there is going to be a little twist coming up... so i have started to get you ready for it in this update... hope you guys are not mad lol..

no jutthi's and chappels please...

*runs for cover*

to stop you from getting mad i have added a special bit straight after the little unknown bit...

hope you like it...


loveyouuu <3

Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Glad dat her geet and her friends have made up
Luv maaneet moments
Awww both of them wer dreaming about each other
Maans mishti & geets laddoo
Oh no trouble is on the way
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update::
Glad dat her geet and her friends have made up
Luv maaneet moments
Awww both of them wer dreaming about each other
Maans mishti & geets laddoo
Oh no trouble is on the way
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM



was confused on how to get maan n geet parts in...
and didn't know if you liked the twist x
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thanks x 😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Yesss! you made my day by updatingg😆😳

It was great Nazma!! I absolutely loved the update and haye... Bachpan ki mishti.. how sweeet😊 I have a liking for Geet's older brother Radhe noww 😳 I loved the way you characterized him and Maan!!😊 And again.. thankyou for the update!! Please please please please... update soon and and.. I promise I'll update my two FF's on the same day in exchange😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirl144


Yesss! you made my day by updatingg😆😳

It was great Nazma!! I absolutely loved the update and haye... Bachpan ki mishti.. how sweeet😊 I have a liking for Geet's older brother Radhe noww 😳 I loved the way you characterized him and Maan!!😊 And again.. thankyou for the update!! Please please please please... update soon and and.. I promise I'll update my two FF's on the same day in exchange😆



haha in that case i'll update again tomorrow .
lol 🤣
thanks i also have a liking for Radhe

Soo Handsome.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
so geet's ladoo is maan.
cant wait for the nxt update.
thx

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