Poem~:A New Beginning!:~

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok friends!!
I think that this Maha episode is worth a poem..though I'm not so sure that my Poem is worth their extraordinary performances!!😕
A NEW BEGINNING!
There comes a time in life
When one has to question oneself
Who am I, what is my purpose
And their time is now
( Better late than never!)
It's a time not to shed tears
But to rejoice, for the old skin is discarded
The blinkers are off
And a new person is born
No, I don't say that its wrong
To be a social animal
To be interdependent
It is part of being Human
But something cries from deep inside
In everyone sometimes, to be free
It cried in me to make me what I am
And I'm glad it cried in Shanak finally
~~~
Please comment😊
PS: I knw its a pretty sorry piece..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei simi,
i wont accept that it is a sorry piece..
i could easily relate it to shaan..
his words in ur poem..
👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RB81

hei simi,

i wont accept that it is a sorry piece..
i could easily relate it to shaan..
his words in ur poem..
👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you sweetheart!! Muaahhh!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simi! 🤗
I'm expressing my love for the episode by writing an essay (literally! lol) in the CC, and you come along with your unique style and sum it up in a poem! ⭐️
Loved the episode and love your poem! ❤️
Especially like the bit about discarding old skin and a new person is born... if that doesn't sum-up Shantanu Khandelwal's actions in today's episode, i don't know what does! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mesmerised-

Simi! 🤗

I'm expressing my love for the episode by writing an essay (literally! lol) in the CC, and you come along with your unique style and sum it up in a poem! ⭐️
Loved the episode and love your poem! ❤️
Especially like the bit about discarding old skin and a new person is born... if that doesn't sum-up Shantanu Khandelwal's actions in today's episode, i don't know what does! 😊

My sweets..I bow to you!! Thankyou!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi,

Its actually very nice and apt Simi!!!

And am very happy for Shaan, and Khanak ...

Finally our Shaan will stop being vella and make his Khanak also proud of him ... Looking forward to the next episodes!

And what acting has been done by Shaan ... and 2nd comes Sunil ... baki sab ko kha liya ... no one came remotely close !

~Cheers.
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
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speechless simi🤗🤗🤗🤗 I have no words to describe ur poems.. speechless.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow simi its beautiful 👏... it actually potrays what shaan feels
i could actually visualize shaan saying dis

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks!!
@ Dish: Wow!! You got emotional there maam! Nice to see that!!:D
@Bona: Thankyou dear...Hugggss!!
@ Rida: You cud visualise him say that? I'll treasure that always!!:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simi awesome poem
New born of Shan loving that

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