ff-mg-pyaar ya shaadi!!!#1-pt 63- see new thread - Page 9

awesome ... part 7 n 8 are superb ...

thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: tonyahk

hi teja,

sorry for not commenting before yaar.

like dia, today my mood was also off. donno...what happened to me. i wrote Part 24 and 25 of MMM in the morning. i am not at all satisfied and then rewrote part 24. that bad was my mood. so i started to watch the movie "Peepli Live"...and my mood has gone still worse. this is the first time i am watching the film. OMG!!! why on earth i chose to watch that movie today?. i was so upset by the plight of natha and his family and the village people...and the political game being played by the politicians from local level to cm to union agriculture minister on the lives of the poor farmers...moreover the media...see dear, i was so affected by that movie...that is why this much senti bak bak. sorry for that.

now coming to Pyarr ya Shaadi...

you have written two parts and i missed the opportunity to give my immediate comment on each part individually...

geet is really such an evil...😡. and her evil brain works like anything😡

after listening to her plans, my brain had also stopped working like that of maan😕😕

bechara ye maan ko kya hogaya? ...he is saying a full paragraph lengthy dialogue for describing her beauty and says only two lines to describe her evilness. i tell you teja, this MSK definitely deserves an evil person like Geet. so let him marry her soon🤣

thanks for these nice updates dear

143 buddy

Tonya

tonya dear
really this peepli live film made a great damage to ur mood yaar...😆
u r speaking about the movie this much...ohhh sooo senti that too...😆...not our types yaar...😆😉
hmm...MMM...24 and 25 wriiten and 24 rewritten...hmmm how sad...😉..but u know wat wew got a great update 24 is a wonderful part i must admit it...actually i am not MSK na so i know how to give a compliment...😉

see yaar here maan even geet is thinking soo evil he liked her...hmmm...he lost his mind really😆😆
i thought to write ishq hai yeh next part yaar...but time hi nahi mila...
my parents made me soo busy yesturday 😡and my bro's exams...i m helping him...this is not fair yaar...he is making me to write his records..😡
i am trying now to write but god knows what happens ...hope my mama papa doesnt call me or give any other work or my bro...before he comes from clg i should write it warna...i m dead...🤢😆
ok dear...
143
ur teja😊

Originally posted by: teju2292

tonya dear
really this peepli live film made a great damage to ur mood yaar...😆
u r speaking about the movie this much...ohhh sooo senti that too...😆...not our types yaar...😆😉
hmm...MMM...24 and 25 wriiten and 24 rewritten...hmmm how sad...😉..but u know wat wew got a great update 24 is a wonderful part i must admit it...actually i am not MSK na so i know how to give a compliment...😉

see yaar here maan even geet is thinking soo evil he liked her...hmmm...he lost his mind really😆😆
i thought to write ishq hai yeh next part yaar...but time hi nahi mila...
my parents made me soo busy yesturday 😡and my bro's exams...i m helping him...this is not fair yaar...he is making me to write his records..😡
i am trying now to write but god knows what happens ...hope my mama papa doesnt call me or give any other work or my bro...before he comes from clg i should write it warna...i m dead...🤢😆
ok dear...
143
ur teja😊

Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi teja,

i am happy to know that your bro is making you to write his records. it is really a cute thing yaar. it brings us a different experience and a sense of happiness. though you complain about it... i know...deep from your heart you will be enjoying writing the records for your bro. hena? this is the majic of love between siblings.

see dear, my mood is fine today. so i am all set to torture you with my bak bak

143 buddy

Tonya

Originally posted by: -dia-

Hey Tonya & Teja ...🤗

Tonya Glad to hear ur mood is fine now ...& well said about siblings love & I'm Flatten.

143 Buddies

haan tonya...i love to write for him...u r right about siblings love
dia even i m flatten for her words...
love ur bak bak tonya...

Part 9

Geet:oye hello...r u alive!!!...hellooo...maan...MAAANNN.

Maan:huh?

Geet: r u deaf or what. I am speaking here from last few mins but u r not at all listening to me.

Maan gives her an angry glare and starts his car and rides without listening to geet.

Geet: hmm..thats like a good boy.

He gives another angry glare at her.

Maan: don't even think that I m afraid of u and ur stupid plan…..i m just helping a poor lonely girl who doesn't even have a brain. Nothing else.

Geet:hmmm…when did I say something else is there…..maan..is there anything else.

Maan: huh?...now will u stop ur bak-bak I m fed up listening to it.

Maan and geet drove some time silently, maan stares atr geet now and then from corner of his eye but geet doesn't notice his stares. Maan sees that geet is twisting in her seat feeling uncomfortable.

Maan: geet what happen?

Geet: as if u care.

Maan: teekai don't say.

Geet: ah…hmm…

Maan: what geet?

Part 8

wow nice part