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Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Wooww amazing FF 👏👏😳

Thanks a lot for pming me, otherwise i would have miss such a great FF😃😳
Love ur writing style 😊

Part 1 :
Started so romantically 😃😳
Yet while reading i was like what is it, is it a dream ? 😆
But it turned out better than what i expected 😳👏
Geet isnt loving Maan ... Lets' say YET at least 😉

Part 2 :
I like the way u unfold the story..
So Geet wants to set her career before anything else hmmm
And i guess Maan hit her car 😆😉

Part 3 :
Hehe stupid Prem dekh khar chala na car ko 😆
Wow Maan is a real Gentleman yaar
Love the way u portrayed his character 👏😳
Like the way he took himself for her chauffeur hehe shoo cute of him 😳
Yaar u are killing me slowly but surely with those close lovely moments 😳👏
Maan is totally fida over her 😳

Part 4 :

Yaar ur updates are amazing, they are getting more and more hot and romantic, mast hai re, lage raho... 👏
Maan is just too cute, healing her wounds 😳👏
He brought her car, oye Maan control, he's going to get beaten 😆

Part 5 :
Hayee Im loving ur FF yaar.
Maan bara fast nikla, he pestered her mom for fixing the wedding 😳😆
Hehe Geet is all set to bhagao his dhulla 😆
But on the other side our cuty is dreaming of Maan 😳😆
Hehe Geet is shocked to see Maan there😃

Part6:
Whoa what a part
So i guessed right, its Geet who is closing her heart's doors close..
Still she cant stop herself falling for Maan 😳
Maan is such a darling, willing to wait for his lady love 👏
Absolutely Hot and romantic part.
Very well written.

Love your story.
Keep up the great work.
Cant wait for the next part 😳😃
Will send u a buddy request, do pm me please 😃

Love,
Humera 🤗

Originally posted by: itsreallyreal

Awww, you're very sweet, thanks for all the comments on each part😃, glad you're enjoying the story.

-love,

Marvee

Untold Emotions

Part 7

Next Part: Part 8