Lost Love will be baCk sOon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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After watChin' todays episode , I made up my mind to write these enigmatiC Lines fo' Abhay and Piya's Perpetual Love .. [ DediCatin' these Lines to the Forest seQuenCe when Piya is wanderin' zealously in woods of Forest to seek out her inner distress ]

I'm surrounded by empty walls.
I want to scream and shout.
My heart bleeds.
The snow becomes red.
How life has mocked you.
Were you ever here? memories gone, dead.
Loneliness freezes my heart
Snowflakes falling silently
Like tears when we're apart
In my distorted, broken dreams.
So empty, yet real.
I'm floating through air.
I touch your face, hoping to feel.
This frozen silence belongs to you.
Now my Road gently turns to you
In this Calm moment i'm only awaitin' for you



ReGards,
SaDaf

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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww this is really cute =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's so touching. ur poetries are too good. i just love how they are short, sweet, and crisp.Also, within few lines the magnitude of emotions they bring to the table.truly, it proves ur a writer who writes from heart, and soul.i love this part

Loneliness freezes my heart
Snowflakes falling silently
Like tears when we're apart
In my distorted, broken dreams.
So empty, yet real.
I'm floating through air.
I touch your face, hoping to feel.
This frozen silence belongs to you.
Now my Road gently turns to you
In this Calm moment i'm only awaitin' for you



Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Lovely. Keep Writing More Dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Sadaf ...👏👏👏

U r a good writer ...👍🏼
it was so nice... if somethin like this happens soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww..my poetic genius..🤗 it was lovely! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was sooo lovely yaa
u r really a good writer
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome line sadaf.U r grt poet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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U write good poetry 👏 for u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

Awww..my poetic genius..🤗 it was lovely! 😊




Thanku Mum ! that means loads to me .. 🤗

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