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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is may second ff on maaneet if u guys like the story line plz tell me so I will start it.

Story starts from a family marriage where geet & maan meet frist time in their life both lost their heart on seeing each other . but they don't confess it .but both in their deep heart know that they love each other . they never forget each other & time went on . maan goes to America for his further studies for 12 long years & geet lived in Mumbai as she helped her father in his business . at the age of 25 her father asked her for marriage but she refused it after 2 year her father died because of heart attack .she lived with her daimaa & her daughter pinky . both geet & pinky handle their business very well .some how in one business meeting she met surya khurana maan's father who inform her now maan take over his business & he make himself retire .but on asking geet where is maan he inform her he is in London to finalize a deal.

Character sketch-

Maan singh khurana ' 29yr old guy very well settled with his family business Khurana Construction.
Lives with his daadi, anvesha, dev, parents & NT. Really doesn't speak much. He keeps himself confined to office & work. His family means a lot to him

Geet handa- 29 yr old girl she also well settled in her family business handa works Ltd. Lives with daimaa & pinky beside them she has no family.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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like it...
ad me to ur pm list x
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congrats !!!!!!!! on ur new ff ...

awesome ... interesting concept ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
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Nice concept
Add me to pm list plz thanks
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its an interestin concept
pm me as well
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nice concept...add me 2 pm list...cont soon...
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Part 1-

Maan was sitting in the plane . he was returning from U.S after successfully completing most important project of his life .as he was very tired he closed his eyes & remember geet ,his geet. He jerk opened his eyes why geet suddenly came into my mind. He thought. But unconsciously her smiling face leaves her smile on his face . Maan Singh Khurana smiles .adi saw this miracle he surprised. & maan thinking is diverted to geet his lovely geet. How can he forget her. Although he he never speak to her but he remember her eyes speaks very clearly to his as she always knew what he likes or what he didn't. she is the only human who knows what maan singh khurana really is .

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As Vikram singh khurana reached home he straight went to his mother's room .savitri singh khurana

Vikram ' mom do you know with whom I meet today

Sd- how do I know vikram

Vikram- mom do u remember geet handa mohinder's daughter

Sd- ya the one maan likes very much with twinkle in her eyes

Vikram- I met her in chopra's party do u know she is partner in this very project

Sd- let's do one thing don't tell anything about it to maan .give him that project to handle

Vikram- but this project has to be done by dev

Sd- give him another project as he is only tranee now it's not the big deal.

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When the plane lands maan came out still smiling . dev came to airport to receive his big bro & first time in his life he found maan smiling he ran towards him . he hugged him & to his surprise maan returned his hug .

Dev- kya baat hai bro US mein koi gori mam pasand aa gayi kya

As maan was thinking of geet he answered ' nahi yaar desimam ki yaad aa gayi

& cursed himself what he did turned his back towards dev & adi , he ran his hand in his hair . both adi & dev laughing at his answer . he turned in attitude & asked adi to go to the office immediately & inform him what happened in handa's & chopra's project .

Maan-u want to stand there & laugh dev or u come here to receive me (in attitude)

Dev- sorry bro .let's go

The whole driving silently passed they reached Khurana mansion .maan entered in the house & greeted his dad & daadi & straight went to his room .he locked himself in his room & thought why is he so restless today because he think about geet no, no way he always think about geet there is nothing new about it . it is now his routine he always thinks bout her before sleeping & then he sleep soundly.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..superb update.

love it.
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for new FF!!
nice start!!!
continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great part..
Continue soon and do pm me.

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