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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful!...
glad to see that everyone liked geet's surprise especially bauji!
loved the last part!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

sweet daughter ... lovely update... nicely written

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar...so so so awsome !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey...just read parts 18 to 20 now. Was superb n marvelous updates! Geet is a swetheart. Hmmm...the end of part 20 was spectacular. Update soon n thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww sweet...
waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for a bigone please sweety
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Chapter 21 –Outing

Next Day

Everybody was lost in the thoughts of Geet's surprise yesterday. All were still in some sort of shock. Though they knew about Geet and her ability to do these out of the way things for her family but this time she went beyond anyone's imagination. Rahul and Raj were little perturbed because she didn't even share this with them.

Rahul finally said pouting "Guddan...tune mujhe bhi nahin bataya…upar se I feel like a monkey who doesn't know what's going in his own company"

Geet – "Please Rahul aisa mat bol…I really had to try hard so that you don't come to know. I just wanted everyone to be surprised"

Raj – "Surprise…it was more like a shock…btw how did you manage it all"

Geet briefly told about her visit to Narang's and her deal. She mentiond how she drove KC architects and laborers to get the work done in time"

Maan spoke loudly – "How"

Geet – "How matlab?"

Maan – "How did you drive the laborers?"

Geet swallowed hard. She spoke softly making a cute baby face – "I went in the nights after everybody slept to meet the contractors as they were working 24/7"

Maan – "Aur tabiyat…I asked you take it easy"

Geet – "Pura din rest hi to kar rahi thi…look I am fit and fine" she said standing up and twirling once.

Maan simply walked away from there. He was really mad. He closed his eyes in frustration.

Geet followed him quickly inside– "Sorry…please ab tum naraz mat ho…sabko kitna acha laga na"

Maan opened his eyes. They were red with anger. He held her shoulders and shook her hard "Tum samjhti kyon nahin ho. Is your health a child's play? Agar tumhein kuch ho gaya to…"

Maan could not complete the sentence. Geet felt his restlessness. She involuntarily moved towards him and kept her hand on his cheek."Please maan jao na…tum naraz hote ho to kuch bhi acha nahin lagta…sab waste ho jayega"

Tears welled in her eyes. Tears which were a torture for Maan to watch.

"Chup…bilkul…chup. Bahut pain mein dekha hai tumhein…ab aur nahin dekha jaata…please no tears"

He hugged her with that. Geet again felt calmness spread over her. She broke the silence "Aaj movie ke liye chalien"

Maan knew he was trying again to change the topic He smiled but still kept her in his embrace "hmmm"

Geet jumped with excitement and grabbed Maan's hand. She pulled him towards the door to garden where everybody was sitting "chalo phir…sabse poochte hain"

Maan smiled looking at her excitement. He murmured "Jhalli…kitni pyaari hai"

Rahul and Pari had a business party to attend. Annie also wasn't interested much. Maan called Adi and he agreed to join. Geet also asked Pinky and she agreed too as it had been a long time due to Geet's sickness.

Evening 6:00 PM

Geet self thought - "Geet…jaldi kar"

Just then Annie entered her room "Di…yeh sab kya hai" Geet turned to see that her bed was in mess.

"Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha main kya pehnoon" Geet pouted

"Kya…aap bhai ke saath movie ke liye hi to ja rahe ho…kuch bhi pehn lo"

"Hmmm…tu thik kah rahi hai…main bhi pagal hoon" (ab ise kaise bataoon jab mujhe hi nahin pata mujhe kyon farak padta hai ki main kya pehn rahi hoon)

Geet picked a simple white t-shirt and jeans. She added a flowery scarf and at the last impulse wore channel no5. She skipped downstairs where Maan was waiting with Adi for her.

Maan looked up when he felt her presence. He could not remove his gaze from the beautiful form descending the stairs. "God this girl looks sexy even in simplest of clothes. That white shirt is making her look so fresh and desirable."

Adi – "stop it…aise dekhega to kabhi nahin pategi…despo lag raha hai"

Maan sighed – "Despo hoon to lagoonga hi"

Geet finally reached and shook hands with Adi. They went to pick Pinky from her place. Pinky came out wearing a nice floral summer dress with a chocolate in her hand.

Four of them reached movie theatre and decided to watch a horror movie. Adi and Pinky had instantaneously hit off together. Both Man and Adi were happy with the movie choice. Horror movie after all means girls getting scared and holding onto them.

Before entering the theatre they went to washroom where Adi motioned to Maan that he wanted to sit next to Pinky. "Are yaar just to get her distracted and give you enough time"

"Haan Haan…kamine…jaise main tujhe jaanta nahin…kya pak raha hai?"

"Achi ladki hai yaar…just want to know her more"

Same time Pinky also pretty much said the same thing to Geet.

They entered the theatre and sat in the order – Maan, Geet, Pinky and Adi.

As the movie started it got really scary. Pinky grabbed Adi's hand and digged her nails into his skin. Adi rolled over his arm on her shoulder and patted her hand with the other hand to comfort her. By the time movie finished and lights were switched on she was nestled very nicely into Adi's arms and they were whispering in to each other's ears.

Geet and Maan looked at both of them with an incredulous expression making Pinky blush profusely.

Adi – "woh…woh…Pinky ko dar lag raha tha…hai na"

Pinky just nodded. Maan and Geet burst out with a loud laugh.

Maan whispered to Adi – "Chalo kisiki to kahani to aage bad rahi hai…I never knew you could be so fast"

Adi stuttered – "I really like her…waise how was your movie"

(Guys I am sure you are wondering the same)

"Agar tujhe nahin pata do bata doon kyon ki mujhe confirmation mil gaya hai aaj"

"Kya?"

"Mujhe ek sherni se pyaar ho gaya hai…who kya daregi…woh to achon achon ko dara de"

"Best of luck next time….agli baar romance try karna…shayad zayda successful rahe"

Pinky elbowed Geet. Geet cleared her throat to get boy's attention – "what's the plan for dinner guys"

Adi - "how about a disc or a lounge?"

Pinky - "That's cool…chalo let's go to blue ice"

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Precap – Dinner

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome yaar...maan thought something and some other thing happened
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Posted: 14 years ago
bechara maan horror film mein geet ko daarkar hug karne ki tayaari mein tha
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice... poor Maan expect geet to hold his hand... bad luck he fell in love with one strong lady...

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