SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 85 Page 133 - Page 84

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi DJ,
Atlast i have commented on yr FF.
You r a brilliant, Awesome and Fabulous Writer...Great work DJ.
The update which expressed the ridz life with Armaan , It was brilliantly written DJ...Being a Man i felt you have captured the emotions so well and expressed it so welll, But ...As u have mentioned it was bit distrubing cos none will want to see someone suffer like that and moreover i feel its the fate ridz has decided on her own and she has been punished for her deeds...You know how much i hate Ridz...But still that update made me to feel bad for her and wish her a bit happiness or peace in her life...wonderfully written and well expressed. The best part of yr FF are the yr conversations yr dialogues and the way you write it in a flow that we can go throu the thoughts, hear their convo's and envisage the scenes so well.
Loved the SR scene and wished that night would have not ended.
Siddhant Modi...What a Man he is...Inspite all the pain and torture he faced in his life and the women who betrayed him and made his life miserable and made him not to believe in Love/Life again yet this man worries for her and wishes for her well being and happiness...Only Sid can be like this...The most adorable character.
Loved the Juhi-Sid convo, Loved how Juhi understands him and felt happy that Sid has Juhi in his life...Shilpa is back in his life in the form of Juhi...Loved it.
Really a wonderful update...But wish longer onesšŸ˜†
And i feel that someone is that Sitaraman...why u have brought that sitaraman😔.šŸ˜†
Thanks DJ for writing this wonderful FF.
Keep Going!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww...lovely post..loved to see all this concern sid has for rids. he truly is a great man..n sid still cares abt rids being with eww face...i was hoping juhi wld tell him abt armaan's full truth...looking forward to ur next part..plz continue soon n thanks for the pm!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
man!
yo DJ! what is this?!?!
HE IS BACK?!?!
whyyy things were going so good! and like she was about to- well idk but something was happeneing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
fab job as always
love juhi sid cnvo
n SID usse abhi b riddhima ki itni fikar hai oh GOD,,,,,,,,,love him a lottt
n riddhima dunno wat to say abt her condition...
GOD cliffhanger,,,,,,,,,,,,n i think its ar,,,,,,,man😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Lovely update Dj as allwaysšŸ‘šŸ‘

OMG how a can do all this for other's when he himself has so much tensions in his life😲bt no wonder only Sid can do that😳He loves his frnds more then himself & can do any thing to make them happy no metter in how much pain is there in his life😳
love u DJ for porttraying Sid's character so beautifulyšŸ¤—
man I lm in love with Sid šŸ˜šŸ˜
Edited by Neha_Luvs_JeRan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

DJšŸ¤—

Awesome update as always





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Posted: 15 years ago
Dj it ws as usual awesome update šŸ‘ i wonder how can a person b so selfless bt ya aft all he is sid so he 1st keeps others happiness b4 his im so in love wit him 😳 juhis part ws also good...happy to kn tat now she understands sid more than wat she knew...and y te hell tat hormaan is back 😔 im eagerly waiting to read te next plz continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww DJ wat a beautiful and amazing update. GOD DO I LOV OUR SIDDHANT MODI. šŸ¤— DJ the parts i cud understand made my heart melt. STill even after all the hurt that Ridz has put Sid thru he is still thinking of her.!!!!!!!!!!!!Unbelievable.
Please update soon DJ. CAnt wait to see wat happens next. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 81


All her enthusiasm washed away in a matter of a second when she realized that Sid had left. She did not feel like doing anything. For a long time she sat in the living room staring into blank air. The day was moving painfully slow for Riddhima.


Her escapist tendency got better of her and she finally charged her phone and informed Juhi that she was taking her day off.

Just to keep her occupied, she decided to set straight her house. Her knee was hurting bad but she kept working her way from the living room to the kitchen finally reaching her bedroom. She looked around the room. It hardly needed any work and there was throbbing pain in her knee. The excess work had done the needful to aggravate it. As if purposefully wanting to aggravate it she pulled out her entire wardrobe and dumped it on her bed and started re-arranging it. She was going to start rearranging it when her eyes feel on the side table and she noticed the photo frame missing. She had removed it after she had gotten up but placed it amongst the clothes in one of the drawers. But now with the entire wardrobe out she could not find it. Panic struck her and she frantically started searching for it.

She worked through the various piles of clothes she had brought out until she found the most precious thing to her amongst all her belonging.

She held it in her hand and kept looking at it as tears of joy steamed down her cheek.

Padma: Tum kya kar rahi hoo

Riddhima: kuch nahi mumma aise hi cupboard arrange kar rahi hoon Kuch purane kapde hai woh nikal ne ki soch rahi hoon

Padma: Tum se ek baaj poochu

Riddhima: hmmm

Padma: Tumhara aur armaan ka kitne dino tak aise chalne wala hai

Riddhima: Pata nahi Mumma usse samaj na chahiye Papa abhi abhi surgery se recover ho rahe hai aur meri yaha jyaada zaroorat hai aur Mujhe uske saath ki zaroorat hai lekin woh hai ki ...

Padma: lekin uska kehna bhi galat nahi hai ... Woh bhi waha akela hoga

Riddhima: Toh kya sab kuch chod ke uske saath chali jaon main ? Main ek mahine ke liye gayi thi maa jab di yaha thi par ab aap ke pass kaun hai Kaun dekh bhal karega aap ki aur billy uncle bhi toh hai unhe Kaun dekhega

Padma: Tumhari baat bhi saahi hai lekin ... Theek hai jaisa tum theek samjho ...

Riddhima: hmmm

Padma: Main sham ke khana ka dekhti hoon

Riddhima: hmmm

She kept arranging the clothes. One by one giving into the demands of everyone and everything had taken the toll on her and she had started retaliating This lead to arguments and now Slowly and steadily she had grown tired of all this She desperately needed the support of a friend Just then the phone rang

Riddhima: Dr Riddhima

Caller : Dr Riddhima all the arrangements are done for tomorrows conference . If you would like I can come down to your place to run you through them

Riddhima: Alright but only if it not too much of a trouble

Riddhima found she had difficulty trusting anyone quickly but somehow she had taken an immediate liking to Juhi

Juhi: Oh my god looks like you have brought out your whole cupboard

Riddhima: just some spring cleaning anyways you wanted to run me through some things for tomorrow

That evening after discussing work Riddhima found herself opening up to Juhi for the first time.

Juhi: You seem to have a hectic vacation

Riddhima: hmmm

Juhi: If you don't mind me asking you something Dr Riddhima

Riddhima: Riddhima ... You can call me just Riddhima You are no more on duty Dr Juhi

Juhi: Well then its just Juhi ... My friends just call me Juhi ...flashing her vibrant smile

Riddhima: Friends?

Juhi: That is if you wish to ...waise I know you are very ...

Riddhima: Unapproachable !!!


Juhi: Reserved would be the right word ... Or if I take take the liberty ...


Riddhima: hmmm


Juhi: scared to let anyone close


Riddhima: Nothing of that sort ...


Juhi: Hope I am wrong ... Anyways so friends


Hmmm affirmed Riddhima as a faint smile flashed across her face as she worked her way through the pile of old clothes and files on her bed.


Juhi: you seemed have smiled after a long time par tum haste hua bahoot achi lagti ho


Riddhima absentmindedly nodded as she jerked a kameez to straighten out the creases. Something flew off from there but she did not realise. She continued with her work of folding it as Juhi continued to chatter away.

Juhi: didn't anyone ever say that to you?


Riddhima suddenly looked up at Juhi bewildered. Yes someone did say that to her.How did she know?


She quickly looked away not wanting to confront those memories after so many years. She had buried them deep in the recesses of her heart when she walked into the new relationship with her current husband.


She shook her head and continued with her work. They chatted while both got down to straightening out the mess.


She felt relieved after talking to Juhi. But later that night when Riddhima returned to her room after dinner and dodging another round of questions the depressed feeling returned. As she stood in front of the mirror trying to understand her life, the corner of her eye caught something that lay on the floor. As she picked it up a sense of serenity enveloped her and a small smile played on lips. Unable to understand the sudden turn of emotions in her she looked back at the mirror. 'Friends!!! Tum haste huye bahoot achi lagti hoon'. She looked down at that piece of paper and turned it over and a tear escaped her eye looking at the photograph of her yesteryear. She looked different in it. Petite with anxious eyes looking at the man standing with her.


7 years back while rearranging the cupboard friendship compassion and the support to fight the vagaries of life had found its way back into her life.


She held onto the photo frame and smiled back at it. Whenever hope was dwindling these two were always there.

Sid had indeed left in the morning but his note proved he was still concerned. Hope of meeting him again started building up. She felt he would definitely come back that evening to check up on her and this time it would be different not like last night. A sly smile crept up on her face. She quickly arranged the mess she had purposely created to keep herself occupied and set down to do something that she really wanted to do. She would not let him eat pre-made food. She would cook for him something anything even thought she did not know what he liked because she knew he would still like it cause they always appreciated each other's efforts regardless their likes or dislikes. She worked her way trying to whip up something interesting completing forgetting that her knee was throbbing with pain some time back.



Link to the next part


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42952815

Edited by DJ.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update buddy😊
but its too short yaaršŸ˜›
please continue soon😃
Edited by NaGeSwArI - 15 years ago

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