Maaneet FF-Till Death Do us Part-Thread 1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: ajenn

Omelet with orange sauce.!!!!
Fully prepared to leave to Delhi.
Where will maan's family be staying?
With geet's family o somewhere else...

me waiting for ur lovely update

I am really sad today. I got even less likes than last chapter. 😭😭😭😭

Please friends let me know if you do not like anything about the story. Your feedback is quite valuable to me.

Thanks for all those who liked and gave comments. I have replied to some of them in posts before this update.

Chapter 18 – Another Surprise

Saturday Morning 10:30 AM

Geet is on the call. "Mr. Rathod, I do not like excuses, I want results. You have time till today 4:00 PM and I want the file in my hands. If not, there are many other agencies who will be more than happy to be associated with Khurana's and take up this job"

Mr. Rathod quickly tried to convince "I am sorry madam for the delay. I will definitely have a prelim file for you by evening 4:00 PM. You can than shortlist and I will have all the required details by tomorrow 10:00 AM"

Geet – "hmmm"

Geet cuts the phone and waits eagerly and excitingly for the evening.

Saturday Evening 4:00 PM

Geet looks at the blue manila folder in her hand. She takes a deep breath and scrutinizes the pages. She smiled wryly – "hmmm...Mr. Rathod has done a good job. I definitely see the possibilities." After studying the file for 2 hrs, she shortlisted two options and called Mr. Rathod to get further background details by 10:00 tomorrow.

She knew she was again hiding stuff from her family but she wanted this to be a big surprise. She was so excited that she could not sleep whole night waiting restlessly for it to be morning. It was like her sleep had got wings of anxiety and expectations. In the wee hours of the morning she finally drifted a fitful sleep full of dreams; as usual all of Maan.

Sunday 8:00 AM

Whole families on both the sides were huddled around the phone. They updated each other on the progress of movement related activities. Nisha had got three guest rooms ready and also asked servants to convert the studio into a study for Annie. Things were moving at fast pace and almost everything was sorted. Only 4 weeks were remaining now before the shifting. It was decided that Rishab and family will stay in the same house for some time and then decision will be taken as to new place.

Geet was awfully quite during these discussions and this made Maan very restless. After the call ended, Maan tried to shrug off the feeling and went to clinic. But whole day he missed her laughter, her giggle. It seemed like day was drab as a desert. He sighed. He knew the truth. He can not get peace unless he hears that tinkle in his jaan's voice. He called Geet on her mobile

Geet looked at the number and for no reason felt the heat running to her cheeks. Why the hell am I blushing? Babaji!!!

"Hello Maan, kaise phone kiya…kuch kam tha"

"Kyun, can't I call you just like that…I was bored so I called you"

"Kyun, Main kya entertainment channel hoon?"

Ab kya bataaon tumhe...kash ki I could really use u for entertainment. You can keep me busy for hours starting with those lips.

"Hello…any body home"

"Haan…Us se koi kam bhi nahin ho…"

"Haaaw…mere paas fizul time nahin hai"

"Acha ab hum fizul hain…koi nahin madam...wahan aake batata hoon tumhein"

Geet blushed even more with the thought of Maan living under the same roof. Jhalli…pagalon wale sapne mat dekh…aise behave kar rahi hai jaise pehle koi handsome dude nahin dekha ya phir you are a teenager

"Hmmm"

"Kya hmmm…aaj bahut chup ho…sab thik hai na" Maan asked gently

"Haan sab thik hai…aise kyun bol rahe ho"

"Nahin tum subah bhi thodi chup lag rahi thi….waise tum bahut bakar bakar karti ho lekin it feels really quiet when u don't"

Geet was silent. How did Maan know? But somewhere she loved the concern and attention Maan was lavishing on her. She didn't know why but she didn't have a heart to lie to Maan

"Main bakar bakar nahin kart...waise aisi koi baat nahin hai. Actually I am planning a surprise for you all especially Bauji. I hope he likes it"

"Kya Hai"

"Kaha na surprise hai….thoda bada hai…isiliye tension mein hoon"

"Thik hai…but don't take stress…tumne plan kiya hai to I am sure everybody will love it…we are all so excited…it is becoming difficult to wait…see you soon."

"I am also waiting" Geet bit her tongue. "Mera matlab….yeah see you soon."

Both cut the call with new yearnings.

Sunday 10:00 AM

Geet flips thru the information and decides on option 2. She quickly dresses wearing a nice kurta with pajama. She kept her hair open and applied kajal and a light gloss. She looked at the mirror. She wanted to look like a modern woman with her traditional roots intact and was happy to see her image.

Geet rings the bell and waits patiently at the door. An old woman of 64 years (Geet had memorized every detail in the file) opened the door.

Geet - "Namaste Aunty. Mera naam Geet Khurana hai and I stay in the first house on the block next to yours. Can I please talk to you and uncle about a proposition? It will only take few minutes"

Aunty eyed the young girl standing in front of her. She was affected by her innocent eyes and did not have a heart to turn her away. How will few minutes hurt?

"Aao…aa jao… yeh mere husband hain…will you like some tea"

"Nahin Aunty…thanks for asking…Namaste Uncle"

Mr. and Mrs. Narang looked at the flushed girl with twinkle in her eyes. They looked at her not knowing what was to come.

Geet "Uncle…Aunty…I will be quite straight forward with you. My only request is to please listen to me fully before passing a judgment."

"Dekhiye, my extended family is shifting from Mumbai to Delhi very soon. As you know this is one of the good neighborhoods in Delhi and hardly any house comes on sale. Neither there is a land big enough. You house is 1500 sq yards but you have only developed 500 yards as I understand only you two live here. This house is only 5 minutes walk from my existing house and I have a proposition for you, which will be beneficial to both"

Mr. Narang - "But we are not interested in selling this house at all"

Geet took a big breath – "I know uncle but I also know that this is not your ancestral house or anything like that. You shifted here 12 years ago and both your sons are settled in USA"

Mr. and Mrs. Narang were clearly surprised at the amount of information Geet possessed

"How do you know all this? I must say that you have done your homework very well"

Geet - "Aisi baat nahin hai uncle lekin meri puri baat sun leejiye. Dekhiye mere bauji ne ek sapna dekha tha and I just want to make it a reality. It is very difficult for you to stay and maintain this house on your own. You are also not able to go for extended vacations to your son's house due to security issues. Three years back, when you had gone to US for 2 months, some hooligans had started squatting here and you had to take help of police right…"

"Look this property is valued at 4.75 crores. I am ready to pay 4.75 crores cash and also buy you a 3 bedroom flat in Gurgaon. Flat will be on golf road and is by DLF. I will also pay the maintenance of your flat for next 10 years. As premium luxury apartments, you will have club facilities and complete security. You will also get chance to revive your social life and peace of mind. I will also get you lifetime membership of DLF golf club on the same road."

"Please think about my deal with cool mind. I am being very candid here. It is my requirement and I am ready to go extra mile here. You are not the only option I have but I have come to you first for a simple reason. If I have to I will rather do something more for the people who deserve it then for somebody who are simply greedy"

"I will take your leave. Please think about my proposal. This is my card. Please call me by 11:00 AM tomorrow and let me know your decision."

Geet left stunned Mr. and Mrs. Narang and walked towards her home.

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Precap - Homecoming

Hi there actually i have been reading your FF for sometime. I just luv this please do add me to PM

OMG thts wowww

a super duper update...
ofcourse we love ur update dear...
they r mindblowing and i am loving the flow of the story
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva

loved it...😃

omg...geet is sooo nice lovely at the same time sooo professional...
i felt like i m seeing the great MAAN SINGH KHURANA bussiness tycoon of ghsp...
here GEET KHURANA is bussiness women...wow...she is awesome.
i m stunned by wat she spoke...

Awesome update...Geet is soo straight forward business woman...just like Maan in GHSP...she loves Maan so much and she is doing everything in her hand to help them in shifting.

Thanx for PM...and Ritzy u are a wonderful writer so don't be sad dear. Waiting for next part and when Maaneet meet...and we demand some hot-hot scenes.Maaneet should confess love.
😉 😉