maaneet - FAIRY...TAIL??!!! THREAD #2 - Page 72

Thank u so much for this
plz post the next part soon

Never had any doubts on the plot ever! Was a regular reader! I deserved an update today! You've never updated regularly after Abhi's wedding greetings! Katti!  Edited by SiniHanda - 12 years ago

hey when r u going to update???? Plzzz cont soon

OK...so my doubt on MK's attitude is cleared now.Fine,let him concentrate on his game but I hope he would speak softly to sweetu rather than cutting the phone abruptly without giving her a chance to speak like the last time.

Hey dear read all the 19 parts together in one go,as without even a single break it took my so many hours of night as I couldn't  stop until a single part remaining couldn't resist.I tried my best to leave it at middle but just can't help myself as every time there was a urge to click on the link of next part and got myself so addicted to it that I slept near 4 30 am the time around to wake up again,but the best part was I didn't regretted even about a single moment I spend in reading it as it deserved my so much time completely.I was completely woolgathered in this Tail of yours!!!!!!!!!!
I started reading it which started with Pink Football making a castle of her dreams,lost in her own world least bothered about the surroundings as if anything mattered at all.To be true world could never let you live at peace it always have a problem with everyone around without no reason.They love so much to destroy others dreams and as they brought down her dream castle too,she couldn't do much but cry at her helplessness,at her broken dreams laying once again as a plain sand in front of her,but God is so loyal that for every helpless or innocent creature of His he has created a saviour...!!!!!!!!!
So her saviour too came for her rescue,and rescued from the evil world.Due to a strange bond he couldn't watch her weep anymore.He tried at his best he could do but failed,ooops!!!! lil Maan Singh Khurana can never fail,the last weapon he got to stop her was by his tempestuous and yeah he finally achieved.He tried to console her by his words to be soft yet sweet not to scare her further.The only thought by looking at her could strike him could be that she is Cute!Although her act of hanki wasn't so pleasant for him yet he found her cute and her chubbiness adding it to more.His comforting words to be true meant more than what he said indicating to be always at her side.He couldn't let those tears to come out again even it led to make a small promise to her!!!!!!!!!!!
He found her cute in every possible way and that led to keep a cute name "Shweetu" perfect in every manner her features, appearances, actions, expressions, emotions all was a blend of sweetness, truly she was sweet just like as a candy which can give you only a pleasant feeling could bring a smile of your face,so yes she was a Shweetu(pink football-the name ill use)! As the series of actions led his name to"Mishtel Khulana" what else could we expect to come from a lil MSK to show his ruling power, dominance, mastering, being an autocrat and to resemble his bossy attitude this could be the perfect name given to him Mishtel Khulana(charmer-the name ill use)!!!!!!!!!
The small encounter lead them to name the relations as Best Friends,both found the deal to be perfect in their own mean way,one got a friend in form of saviour and the other got to listen to his commandments, that too without any hesitation.The pink football was unaware of any rules regarding friendship, as she was pure and free from all the worldly customs,but when now she got him, she could not afford to loose him in any way, and she obeyed the rule to be a more confirmative!!!!!!!!!!!
So the journey begins with building a dream castle of her as if some dreams too were building with it,as they were done with it,his mind was engrossed in some of his thoughts, as a thought came to him to keep her with him as it was just a casual thought for him just as to do something for her and for her seemed like this was the only dream now she could think of after having him in life,the dream she lived with or will live forever and ever.The life seemed to be boring without him around ,all she could think was about his charmer.The trust over him she already had built in within her got much more stronger,as she had the faith on it so much that if anyone even think about troubling her, he won't spare him at any cost, what belief she had built wish won't break ever!!!!!!!!!
Listening to each other voices there day seems to brighten up more,as they were waiting for this opportunity.Their happiness knew no boundaries now,she got her best as much she could,,same situation at the other side he too was so much happy to have her here with him only him.But the luck wasn't in mood to go with their plans infact it had its own plan,the football was upset not because of she couldn't go and enjoy but couldn't keep to her words to his charmer,he would be upset hurted more and made the waterfall to flow more.At another side the situation wasn't different at all,as he was the charmer he couldn't believe she lied to him,but he too was deep hurt and upset,I wonder what bond in just matter of few days they have built up that in some manner their world turn around each other,they laughed, cried, upset,happy just because of each other!!!!!!!!!
As he was the dominating one ,this was his time to show some attitude to the football and if to her it actually mattered she could do everything possible just to make him happy,satisfy even if he would have asked about stars, she would have literally brought that to the earth today(plastic 1z😆) ,but what she did was more than bringing stars to the ground.Getting on it was somewhere equivalent to reach up the sky, might that would be possible for her at somewhere but this wasn't and he even in his frown mood could see her struggle wanted to help but his ego was bigger than the height of bed which she was trying to cross over and was failing miserably.Even in anger he tried to help her as being a Maan Singh Khurana couldn't go by his words as he said will always help her so how come not now,he added some height to help her to reach her destination but as she was a football can't go anywhere without a kick.At last eh had to help her as there was no way and yet mission accomplished!Phew!!that was hard,now ahead there were some more difficulties to be passed,but seemed that too wasn't difficult as she was a shweetu she had her cute and sweet ways that could anyone's heart easily.She attempted few but all in vain but finally the best trick worked and had its spell on him and created an enchanting magic all around.As the tender touch of her lips on his cheeks ,melted his ego ,molted it into a heart shape balloon to be burst out easily,seems like said it all in a form of unsaid words of not committing a sin like this ever again and he excepted the apology yet with ease with returning the soft tender gift again saying will always except this to let go away my anger and be at your side forever and ever!!!!!!!!!!
The savior yet again reached to save her or no to rescue her yet again from the afflict, but no matter how much he get angry on her and ask her not to attempt such things but being a football she couldn't help and the faith in her of always having him beside for helping her could make her do anything even The Impossible.The impact he had on others regarding the football was just commendable no one even had a right to laugh on her as he had such a hold.Finally succeeded in achieving the target and got a relief.Their bond was had some magical effect of its own which got them so much into each other,the innocence of their tender age added some more essence to its purity.He wasn't angry as if he had to do something to help her he was always ready with the pleasure all mine, but couldn't see her going through so much pain and embarrassment and she could never see him angry at any cost but that soft touch could get easy the tension between them.Awww! He didn't even let her complete the sentence he couldn't bear to listen it,how could he? He would never let happen anything to her especially when he is at her side no evil thing could even touch her or shall I say couldn't get to her way even as he is standing as a shield to protect her from all the consequences truly a Savior!!!!!!!!
Their life revolved around each other,nothing matters them other than themselves.Their laughter, their whimpering, their happiness, their adventures, their mysteries, their secrets, their conundrums, their joy, their fun all this they found in each others presence, only when they are encircled into each other deeply, profoundly knewing nothing at all about the external circumstances, conditions, and objects it doesn't affected their existence at all.They were just lost into each other from the depth of their soul, heart and mind, as if other literally didn't existed for them.Every innocuous act or thought of their was just pure from all the iniquity, they knew nothing about this world but there was some urge to know about it more and more.Being together they wanted to discover the whole world by holding each others hand in hand, every small tiny thing, affair and matter.Her act of making babies uttered a sweet yet simple gesture of how naive kids could be, in their bluntness they said it all and represented themselves as exonerated!!!!!!!!!
They were sweet or more than sweet , it was divine clear like a glass it didn't had any cracks in it perfect in every way or manner,narrating story to her at night was more than important to him than sleeping peacefully,and she at the other side to please him just to make him happy could sing that numerous times countless times as it was only for him and him!!!!!!!!
When you are in a relationship what ever it would be you always find a tint of jealousy in it or more of a anxious  of loosing your beloved and for her he was her world.He was always there for her as a friend but she wanted something more than a friend, they always said they will be always together but she wanted to be literally happen and he becomes her forever till eternity.He was a patrician for sure a prince and like every other girl she too dreamt of being a princess and waiting for her prince charming and her prince was there in front of her sight, all that she was unsure of that if she could be his princess but still it was her one of the wackiest dream to which she wish to come true sooner or later!!!!!!!!!!
She couldn't let anyone snatch her prince for her no not at all at any cost.It wasn't that she lost her faith in him or she didn't trusted him anymore but what she said was truth and she couldn't deny it.It hurted her so much that all her senses became numb she was way beyond far from thinking now, nothing made point to her at the moment.Her thinking was ceased to a limit that yes that could be true,poor football failed in understand her charmer.All her trust and faith became moribund, the day became the end for her life without him her meant nothing, nothing at all, she could have endured all the pains and sorrow with him but without him her world seems to fall apart!!!!!!!!!!!!
All this happened with his ignorance he wasn't aware about any cognitive content that happened in his absence,all after assuming he could conclude was something went wrong but his brain could get enough of what could go wrong, as everyone loved their life then who could dare to hurt her,who or what?The only question lingered in his mind at the moment was that,but still he too was deep hurt inside after so many years her attitude, her behavior was all seemed to so weird to him,but still he had a concern for it that what could wrong between them,she was upset from him doesn't mattered to him at all still her rights could not be taken up by anyone else,his mind or heart still wasn't in a state to accept that soft tender touch from anyone else, no matter if his football wasn't there with him, her place couldn't be taken by anyone else in any of his lifetime!!!!!!!!!!!
He was the Maan singh khurana how could he let her so easily Naaa, not  it wasn't that easy as it seemed to be at this age you can never fall for the external beauty but the internal one's, your mind is as innocent as you and love only pure things.Finally his mind got struck by her words his senses came back and now he will turn the tables for sure.As by your words he truly was a Man of words Ooops!boy and became a superMan Ooops!sorry again SuperBoy for her football!!!!!!!
He knew exactly how to play his tricks on her and get her trap into his cage,cage of Friendship!As he knew he  himself was her biggest weakness, going far from me was equivalent going far from life and near to death.As soon as he associated himself with her, she couldn't help herself but to fight back ans as possible to stop him to go any more near her.So true to clear all the misunderstandings all you have to do is to communicate with the other person you get the half solution right there to your problems same as happened here,just as the conversation started all the digs got filled and knots got open.Phew!!Finally the perplexed issue was resolved, that too with recompense of large number of light glancing touch by lips on cheeks!!!!!!!!!!!!
So the day has come to get the compensation already blushing with the thought as it was nothing new to her but still the shyness would run through her body and make her the pink Football!He could have distinguish her even in the crowd of thousands so here it was only among 7 not at all a difficult task to  achieve, it was his heart that could easily recognize her from anywhere,he was completely agnise by her.His support gave her a strength to fight back with anyone, as she did she answered her back with all her might she could and defeated her with her courage and faith of having all the rights over him!!!!!!!!!!!
The life was moving perfect as nothing could bad or evil happen to it, but destiny always have its own plans and trick to play on our lives.They could have never thought of what happened or was going to happen they were so use to each other as the breath taking without each other would seem difficult but they have to let go each other for some reason they couldn't fight back, whom to fight back?More of the pain of insularism  they had some insecurities of losing their best friend forever as what about the consequences which made them more worried and making the situation more to be dreadful, abominable and atrocious,but still they accepted the decision with all their might and thought of giving each other a good farewell and make it more memorable rather unforgettable!!!!!!!!!

The departure was quite sad,has to be it was like living the soul behind and taking this body ahead so how could a body survive without a soul,once your body would mane without the brain but it was near to impossible to survive without heart or the soul,yet the truth was painful but they did their best and let go off each others hand with the hope of getting it once again,nothing changed between them or about them in all these years ,that's what they will miss the more about each other!!!!!!!!!!!!
They gifted each other the best they could thought of, and it was special in every way they gifted what the other one would love to have it for all his life, the frame that would remind of him nothing by being her master in every way and he cuteness to follow all his orders with the sheer excitement to just bring a smile on his face and that tape of hers ofcourse that could be something best that she could ever present to him which he loved with all his heart and will always keep that dear to himself and would surely remind him of non other but his Football!!!!He too gifted her what she always loved music and nothing could be sweeter than that to her that too with a key that will always remain near to her heart just like him as he lives in heart and the key seems like a key to his heart and not to a musical box,which will be too endearing to her more than anything in this world and will remind her of non other but her Charmer!!!!!!
So the finally separation took place and led them to lead their life in another directions yet living with each other into their dreams and memories.They were just far physically but their heart never got separated as they mentally they were still with each other,nothing could separate them so easily.Their conversation will always keep them linked in one way or the other,as it was just the place that changed but they were still the same best of the buddies.They continues sharing their small problems and troubles and the other one always got the solution.Even though by the phone he still didn't stopped ruling her,which indirectly he always will rule her heart as it beats for him and only him.They still shared the daily routine of their life what they did,what not and it goes to never to end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As the life started moving ahead they too with forgetting of not being with each other, as they never felt in that way as they were always together.Your life doesn't stop if someone get out of it,it keeps on moving even with the person or without that person.The football and charmers life too started moving steadily they even found some new friends but still failed to find a best one as they couldn't because they will try finding each other in them which is just not possible so why to even attempt.They were just more than enough for others.As teaching on phone what more than that could be done,he filled all the void places in her life even in his physical absence he was always there to help her in her miseries, and she at the other end could go beyond any limit juts to fulfill his words than the word of difficulty won't exist in her dictionary.His determination got her success which mattered to both!!!!!!!!!!!!
The troubles didn't left her or she herself use to find them and he was full of solutions for her didn't failed ever in getting her out of them.As being the best friends they share everything even those private things which are not meant to say anyone she still told him bluntly about them and he being a typical maan khurana showered her with all his question too which she can't reply just more than to blush!!!!!!!!
As the time pass you start growing up and you somewhere even start changing without your realization.as shown from start he was mean at times but her innocence just took over it and never let that come out.But as now the situation started changing he is just concerned about sharing his achievements and accomplishments.It wasn't that he did it purposely what here the selfishness was at its peak,he just said what all he wanted to say without even hearing a word from her other than his praising,but being a girl she can't bring these things into notice as they meant to her near nothing at all, what if he didn't heard in that too she found a reason to call herself selfish than him, as she justified her blamed herself on that mere sadness that overcomed her heart,but the reason of his success was more than enough to overcome any grief!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Her life wasn't stopping anywhere seems like she don't have just one destination some more adventures on her way, as now she was moving ahead a lil more,as always she had to share this painful things to him also but this time it was differed for both.It was painful for her but not for him this time, as she was far away already what else could happen more going more far by, but it was different for her this time once again she was gonna separated from her friends, she was in pain and as being the best friends he should have understand her trauma but instead he didn't found that worth at all,for him it was so casual now,for him it was i'm there why to bother about others,that was very mean o him,but people do change with their growing lives,especially boys.They are not bathetic,  mawkish or get themselves attached to anyone or anything emotionally whereas the girls are always sentimental,they have this attribute of slushy kind of a thing in them.Boys take all the decision with their brains whereas a girl always listen and follow to her heart,boys are strong-headed but the girls are with strong heart.Boys may be strong physically but the girls are very much stronger than them emotionally,boys look life more practically as for him moving to japan would be more adventerous having new life, house, atmosphere and friends whereas for her, leaving a house once again, school, friends, her surroundings will change once again, to once again detach herself from here is difficult.So moving ahead in life is different for both as there views couldn't be same at any age or era,but still she is happy that atleast he is with him, one thing that she will not miss anywhere or anytime but that too for how long???She buried all her insecurities and fear in her just with the faith of him being being beside, just hopefully this faith of hers never break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey sweety just loved your ff it was just great to read it.I enjoyed thoroughly the whole story till now,every single part of it just drived me crazy.It was brilliantly written in all the ways.I just loved the friendship you showed in it.The way it started their childhood was awesome resembling complete innocence of them.How cute they are at that tender age far way from all the show off things just bothered about their lives free from all the tensions,truly that is the golden period of your age and relations made at that time are meant forever.I laughed at their funny scenes and stupid acts.I went in awe watching the sincerity they had for each other.I smiled at their sweet gestures they made to show what importance they keep in the other one's life.I cried and had tears at her departure you wrote it so beautifully that I too felt the pain of losing someone so close,could feel the pain to let go off your loved one's far way from you,how much its hurts but the time heal all your wounds.But the distance couldn't get them separated,as by your words,So far yet so close!!!!!!!!!!
Hopefully this journey won't end soon,as I'm waiting some more twist and turns to come in their life and take their relationship ahead at every step,how will they deal,will be great fun to read as can't deny your writing skills it was fantastic.As to be true I didn't expected that to come from you,but Sorry to even doubt,I made such a fool out of me,Ash you have become a Beguiler for me,for writing this beautiful story as I'm so much in love with the characters,pink football and the charmer and their friendship,loving this fairy-Tail!!!!!!!
Now I shall end your misery for reading this,I know I an such a fool but couldn't help myself from writing this,sorry if offended anywhere or anytime pardon me!!!!!!!
Thanks to others who talked to you about this and I get the chance to read it,and thanks to you fro the pm other it would be impossible for me to find it.
Do update the next part soon will be waiting eagerly.
Keep writing as it was just awesome.
Thanks for the pm.
God bless you.
 

Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago

loved the analysis by muskaan.coming to update , awesome update ash ,as i already said boys are very practical and girls are emotional .so,being a boy maan showing his practicallity

and geet is getting emotional becoz of maan .

loved the part ,where geet is pacifying herself that maan is correct .but somewhere she is deeply hurt . but kabhie kabhie "dard ko itna nahi sahna chahiye ki woh nasur ban jaye ".jab yeh nasur phootega to toofan aajayega, usme sab rishte isme bah jayenge .so, in any relation  ,transparency plays an imp role .so, plz geet tell him that you are hurt of his words .

 

 

👏GREAT GOING ASH 👏

 

 

Edited by acjanfeb1 - 12 years ago

awesome part 

Aww Geets Soo Sweet Nd Cute😆