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till part 27
awesome story dear...
liked it very much...
Geet has fallen in love with Maan and Maan still hasnt realized his feelings...
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~Chap 28~

Maan leisurely opened his eyes when the unsullied rays of sun collided on his face..he looked at his wrist watch..it was 9: 12 am..he got up to get ready..but felt as if he was drained..he thought not to go to the office today..anyway he was late..he again dropped himself in his soft bed..cuddling wid his pillow and blanket..and closed his eyes..

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On the other hand..Geet woke up rite at 8:59 am..though she slept very late at nite..she was in no mood to sleep more..she quickly got up and went to the bathroom to get ready..after taking a quick shower..she was combing her hair..when she looked at the clock..it was 9:58..

Geet: oh God!..itna time hogaya..Maan office k liye nikal na jaye..she quickly did a braid..fixed her dupatta..and made her way downstairs..she calmly was going down the stairs..looking toward the dining table area if Maan was there..but he wasn't there..she sighed and came downstairs..she quietly looked into the kitchen..but he wasn't present..

Geet: oh no!..kahin woh office tou nahi chala gaya!..she was saddened

She went out and saw his car was in the garage..She smiled wid a sigh of relief..
Geet: phew!..iska matlab janaab abhi tak ghar main hain..lekin abhi tou office ka time hogaya hai..abhi tak nahi gaya?..she thought confusingly coming to the kitchen..she sat on the dining table and started waiting for him..thinking about wat wud happen when he wud cum downstairs..

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he woke up again and noticed it was 11:01..this was really late for him to wake up..he never got up so late..but maybe..he needed sum extra sleep to relax after last nite's heart throbbing argument..he lazily got up and went to the bathroom

Geet who was waiting since an hour while sitting in the kitchen's dining counter..stood up to make herself a cup of tea..but then the idea of having breakfast wid Maan..made her cancel her tea plan and wait for Maan.

After taking a quick shower..Maan was now brushing his teeth..but kept thinking about wat happened last nite.. remembering each and every word that Geet sed
"Maana usko aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha..lekin ghalti meri bhi thi..he accepted that he was at fault too..
lekin woh ghussay main aakar itna kuch bolday gee..mujhe nahi pata tha..aur waise bhi maine jaan boojh kar tou yeh sab nahi kiya..usne mera reason sunay baghair mujhe kya kuch nahi kaha"..there was battle going on inside Maan..he washed his mouth and angrily came out..he wiped his face wid the towel which was resting on his bare shoulders..and went toward his dressing table and started brushing his hair..but didn't knw for what reason he remembered Geet's..jolly and striking smile..he stopped..wondering y it happened..

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"Ch..yeh Maan kahan reh gaya..shud I go and check?"..she thought..and quickly came up wid the initiative of going into his room and check wat was wrong!..

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"May be I missed her seeing smiling..presentation k chakkar main main itna busy hogaya..k usay time he nahi diya"..he thought staring in the air..

"shayad isi liye woh bohot hurt hogayee hai..aunty bhi yahan nahi hain..isi liye usko aisa lagta hai k main uski parwah nahi karta..aur waise bhi woh bilkul bachon ki tarhaan react karti hai..lekin mujhe tou samajh daari se kaam lena chahiye..bas thori si narazgi dikha kar..baat karloon ga..itna haq tou mera bhi hai..he thought while brushing his hair..and finally made a decision wid a smile on his face..he went to his closet took out his shirt..and was about to wear it.. when he heard a knock on the door..he quickly looked at the door which wasn't locked..he hurrily put on the shirt wid out doing his buttons and ran toward his bed..layed down and pretended to be asleep..the door was opened because last nite he forgot to lock it..he knew it must be Geet as he was late for the breakfast..she must be worrying..the consideration pleased him..he was pretending that he was sleeping just to see what wud Geet do..the idea excited him..he smiled..closing his eyes..and burying his face in the blanket so if Geet cums she don't see him laughing..

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After a few knocks..Geet moved the door knob of the door..it was opened..she decided to go in..for a second a thought..in reality a wish blossomed in her heart..she desired when wud that day will arrive when she wud have the right to go in his room as his companion..where formalities wud never exist between them..there wud be only Love..the thought of being Maan's partner relished Geet..she smiled thinking y she was having these thoughts now!! When she had to pacify Maan and apologize to him about her last nite's behavior..throwing these thoughts back of her head for later..she entered.

The room was sort of dark because the lights were switched off..but the sunlight was showering into the room.. sieving through the long off white magnificently antique curtains..her eyes moved towards the bed where Maan was laying down..lost in his dream world..her heart melted seeing him in that situation..he looked adorable though she cudnt see his face because he was laying upside down..but seeing him like that was very swaying..she looked away for a moment..
"Maan"..she called erratically..
"ahehemm!..Maan utho..itni der hogayee hai tum..abhi tak so rahay ho!"..this time her voice was pretty firm
Maan smiled..he had an idea..Geet was nervous..but didn't knw y..may be she didn't cum to his room that much..and the fact that they both were alone..but y wud she be nervous of us being alone..he thought..
"Maan!"..Geet's voice brought him back from his thoughts..
Maan moved and now was facing the ceiling..his eyes were closed..Geet looked at him..
"Maan tum jaag rahay ho?"..she sed curiously squeezing her eyes..trying to look at his face
Maan tried not to smile..but kind of failed
"Hey..tum jag rahay ho?!..she quickly moved toward his bed before his smile would fade away..but something on the floor made her stumble..and..she falls on the bed..over Maan!!..
"Aaa" a little scream emerged from Geet's mouth

"Ouch"..Maan who was not ready for sudden fall of geet almost shouted..for sum moments both cudnt figure out wat had happened..

"Geeet!" he sed irritabily..
"Maaan!" she was also annoyed..
getting herself together..she looked at him..who was underneath her..
"tumko chalna nahi aata kya?.." he sed irritably
"haan!..tumharay jaise messy room main nahi aata..jahan.." she paused and looked at the floor to look at wat caused her stumble..and it was Maan's shoes..
"Jahan logon k barhay jootay rastay main barhay barhay pathar ki tarhaan parhay hotay hain..wahan nahi chal sakti m.." she was giving her solid reason looking back into his eyes..when she noticed his clean broad and tough chest.. his buttons were undone..

"Ahem ahem!" Maan teased while staring at her..in a strange..intense way..

Rite after the sequence of her gazing broke..confusion..embarracement and nervousness surrounded her..she noticed the awkward position that they both were in..she hesitantly tried to move away..but Maan's hand quickly moved over her waist and didn't let her move..instead he pulled her closer..Geet trembled
"tum phir mujhse larhnay lageen.." he sed softly in a complaining tone..reaching to her ear..
Geet closed her eyes..thinking it must be her dream..but Maan's warm breaths made her comprehend that it wasn't a dream..it was the reality..oh..she wished the moment cud stop right here..and she live in it forever..but some wishes really can't cum true that simply..
Maan: Bolo..he questioned

..cuming back to her senses..she cursed herself for the fact that she was fighting wid him AGAIN!..

"sss"..she regretted.."Sorry!" she sed in a low tone..
"Kis liye?"..he was still looking at her..wid the same intensity..as if he was observing wat was happening inside her..
Geet's heart was pounding in her chest..she was actually scared..that what if Maan hear her heart beating so rapidly because of the closeness..and wat if he figure out how she feels for him..but the other second she was sure it wasn't that easy..she wished that it was..so she didn't had to confess it first..but it wasn't
"Bolo Geet!"..Maan's voice dragged her back from her thoughts..
"Haan?"..she sed in a very low tone.."woh..actually..accident tha..maine jaan boojh kar nahi kiya"..she sed in a apologizing way..looking in his eyes..pointing towards last nite's incident..
Maan got wat she meant..he was quiet..both kept looking in each other's eyes

After a few seconds geet was embarrassed..how can she be like that wid Maan..in his bed..she tried to get up..but Maan again stopped..and this time he spinned and pinned her both hands and was on top of her..Geet's eyes widenend..Maan knew that it was wrong..but he cudnt keep himself from doing it..

Geet remembered the 1st time when she fell on him when they both were fighting over a picture..and he did the same..but it seemed to be so different now..now it felt so different and yet so thrilling..she thought

"Abhi jo huwa who ghalti..aik accident tha..chalo maaf kardiya..aur kal raat..kal jo huwa..woh.." his question brought her back in present situation..he was looking at her when Geet interrupted.."kal raat jo huwa woh..Aik accident tha"..she sed looking away..there was silence for a moment..
Maan: Main..
"im sorry..kal raat k liye..jo kuch bhi huwa..mujhe tum se aisay baat nahi karni chahiye thi"..Geet again interrupted..but now she spoke the truth wid true feeling..she really was sorry..
Maan quietly listenend to her apology..he was about to say that it's ok..but Geet tried to move..feeling weak in the situation..
Maan realized that he was on top of her.. he quickly moved and turned to the other side of the huge bed..Geet again closed her eyes for a moment..and turned her face toward him..opened her eyes and looked at him laying down next to her..she quickly got up..
"Jaldi neechay aajao..main breakfast bana rahee hoon"..she sed stopping at the door..wid out looking at him..
Maan didn't reply..she looked behind..at him..wid questioning eyes..

"hmm!" he nodded looking at her..Geet left

Maan sat up..thinking wat Geet must be thinking..he shudnt have done all that..y!..y he didn't let her get up..y he reacted that way..y he acted so differently..Geet must be hating him for all that..wat was he about to do..
"oh Gosh"..he sighed heavily..closing his eyes wid confusion and shame ..now it was kinda hard to face her..

"But I have to"..wid this thought he got up..did his buttons and made his way downstairs as Geet must be waiting for him..

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Geet was quiet and totally stunned about whatever just happened..

"yeh kya huwa..."..she sed looking in the air..recalling those moments..Geet cud feel the shivers..she was feeling out of this world..she thought..but the other second..

"Hayee..Yeh kya hogaya hai mujhe..kitni besharam hogayee hoon main..Maan kya soch raha hoga..Geet!" she was agry at herself

"Andhee hoon main..sach main dekh kar chalna nahi aata mujhko..bas gir gayee na uss par..aur itni der tak uske saath..o my God..woh kya sochay ga..kitni besharam hoon main" she regretted

"Kya socha tha aur kya hogaya..socha tha..simply maafi maangloon gee..aur woh simply maaf bhi karday ga..ab yeh.."..she kept talking to herself widout noticing that Maan was now in the kitchen..

"Kya socha tha tum ne?" he sed inquisitively standing rite behind her

Geet who was scared to death..turned with her eyes widened.."Ku..Kuch nahi!..tum kab aaye?"
"Bas abhi" he replied..
There was silence for a moment..
"Bholu kahan hai?" he asked..
Geet: woh!..uski mom ki birthday thi..so maine usko chutti dedi..she replied putting it in plain words
"..oh ok!..Woh Geet!.."..he was about to start to say sorry about whatever happened in the bedroom
"Tum breakfast kya karogai"..she interrupted..
Maan who was already confused in the situation..got a bit frustrated..
"Kya Geet!..kabhi meri baat bhi sunliya karo!" he sed annoyingly stepping up toward Geet
Geet stepped backward..
"haw! ab kon larh raha hai..Haan?.." now she questioned sarcastically stepping up toward Maan..
"Geet!.."..he gnashed his teeth

"Haan..bolo naa..ab tou main nahi larh rahee..hamesha tum he itni si baat ko itna barha bana detay ho.."

"Geet!..shhh..please..breakfast banao!" he hushed her frustatingly and walked to the dining table and sat down..

"aaj ka din he kharab hai.." Geet thought looking at him..
Maan realized he shudnt have behaved like this wid Geet..he was being rude..he got up and looked at Geet who was looking at the pot filled wid water on the stove..
"Geet"..he called
Geet looked at him..
"laao aaj breakfast main banaon ga..breakfast kya..lunch he samjho!" he took the packet of Pasta and started collecting veggies and other stuff to make the pasta..
Geet quietly kept looking at him..
"tum wahan jaa kar wait karo..dekho aisa pasta banaon ga..jaisa kabhi nahi khaya hoga" he sed challengingly while wearing apron
"Mujhe nahi khana"..she replied..expecting Maan to pacify her..
Maan was a bit disappointed at her answer.."As u wish"..he sed shugging pretending that he doesn't care..
Geet looked at him surprisingly..

"aur haan..apna yeh garam paani bhi uthalo..coz I think yeh meray kisi kaam ka nahi!" he sed pointing towards the water at the stove which was boiling now..Geet gave him a stare..and picked up the steel utensil wid the oven glove..and put it on the dining table and angrily sat down on the chair..

"yeh sach mai kharhoos hai.." she thought

On the other hand Maan was busy cooking his pasta..while Geet quietly sat down..

"Hmmm..kya khushboo hai!" Maan announced smelling the pasta..then looking at Geet..

He took the pan wid him and walked to the table..looked at Geet and sat on the chair..he was about to start eating when he looked at Geet..she looked upset..

She didn't look at him..
"Geet!" Maan sed looking at her..as softly as he cud!..
"I know k tum naraz ho!..aur I think tumko hona bhi chahiye..lekin tum khud he socho..abhi tak jo kuch bhi huwa hai..uss main ghalti hum dono main se sirf aik ki tou nahi hai..he paused to see if she had to say something..but she remained quiet..

He continued.."main maanta hoon k kal mujhe tumko pick up karna tha..aur yeh ghalti meri hai k main nahi aasaka..aur tumhare saath woh sab hogaya..aur kal raat main ghar aakar tumko apnay na anay ki wajah batane he wala tha..k tumne mujhse itna kuch keh diya..he paused again..

"Lekin I appreciate k tum ne aaj subha mujhse aakar sorry kaha..lekin mujhe.." he began to think for the rite words..

"Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..bedroom main..jo kuch bhi.." he didn't knw how to put it in the rite manner

Geet: it's ok..u don't have to be sorry for that..
Maan stared at her..
Geet: I mean..ghalti meri bhi thi..aur kal raat bhi..main kuch zyada he bol gayee..lekin tum mujhe pick karne kyun nahi aaye? She asked looking down on the table..not trying to look at him..
Maan: kal main tumko lenay k liye raastay main he tha..lekin road par bohot bura accident huwa..aik car driver aik choti bachi ko hit karke bhaag gaya..aur woh bachi zakhmi hogai..main tou bas usko hospital lekar gaya tha..aur uskay parents ki talash main..raat der hogai..mujhe nahi pata tha k tum iss tarhan..un halaat main phas jaao gee..mujhe laga k tum pinky aur Adi k saath..ya phir khud akelay ghar aajao gee..meri ghalti yeh thi k main tum ko inform nahi kar paya..aur tum! Tumne yeh socha bhi kaise k main tumhari parwah nahi karta..tum nahi jaanteen Geet..tum aik akeli aisee ladki ho..jo meray itnay nazdeek ho..
Geet surprisingly looked at him..both kept looking at each other..but soon the eyelock broke..and both looked away..
"haan!".. he again started..
"tum aik akeli aisee close frend ho..jiski main itni parwah karta hoon..jiskay liye main apnay doston se larh parhta hoon..aur tumne aisay he jazabaat main aakar itna kuch bol diya..woh kal ka aaya ladka..Ankit..tumhare liye Messiah hogaya..meri sirf aik ghalti ki wajah se tumne humari dosti ko bhi nazar-andaaz kar diya.." he took out all of it..all that he felt..all that he kept thinking about..
Geet looked at him apologetically and surprisingly..first of all..she respected his reason of not coming to pick her up..she regretted that she didn't listen to him last nite..she knew that she was rude last nite..but she didn't knw that her words wud hurt Maan this much..she didn't knw that she meant this much to him..she felt cherished knowing that she was the only girl who was this close to him..but his last words stroke her..all of a sudden Pinky and Adi's advice about making Maan jealous echoed in the her mind..and so did a quote that she read once "He that is not jealous is not in love."..she smiled naughtily..

Maan: Kya huwa?..in sab baton main itna muskaranay wali kya baat hai?..he asked reasonably

Geet's smile quickly faded away.."Nahi..kuch nahi!"
Maan: nahi bolo na!..maine aisa kya kaha!?..he asked getting mad that she was laughing at his approach and feelings..

Geet: bola na kuch nahi..sab batadoon kya..kuch baatain thori personal bhi hotee hain..! she sed looking away..

"Personal!..tum mujhse share nahi karo gee..theek hai..nahi karo!..Main newspaper lekar aata hoon!" he angrily got up..took off his apron..slammed it on the table and walked out of the kitchen..

Geet laughed..and looked at the Pasta which looked delicious..she was damn hungry and was about to pick the fork up when Maan came in..she quickly moved her hand away..
he put the newspaper on the table..he was still mad at Geet for not telling the reason.. stumped in his thoughts he tried to pick up the hot steel utensil..
"Ouchhh!!" he yelled throwing the container wid full force on the floor

Geet who was observing the situation and was about to stop him.. rushily got up and held his hand..

"Maan! are u ok?" she asked worriedly

Maan for a second forgot about his hand and looked at concerned Geet..
"O mie God!..jal raha hoga..first aid box?..nahi nahi..toothpaste!"..she was partially talking to herself and partially talking to Maan
"ToothPaste?..Geet!" he asked surprisingly.."
"Mujhe pata hai na..tum chup raho!..main abhi aati hoon!" she made her way out..
Maan stood there cluelessly..but the pain grabbed his all attention..and he stood there wid all his patience having no choice of doing anything..
In a few seconds Geet came back..and made him sit on the chair..
"Geet?!" Maan was confused
"Shhh..chup raho"..she sed empowerly and tried to hold his hand to apply the toothpaste..

Maan was quiet..but was displeased with her..so he didn't let her hold his hand..

Geet gave him a stare..
"Maan!..bachon wali harkatain mat karo..haath do!.." she sed asking for his hand..
Unexpectedly Maan listened to her..Geet quietly picked up the tube..and started applying the tooth paste..Maan looked away angrily..
"sss..jal tou nahi raha na.." she asked worryingly..
she blew on his palm try to make him feel better..her cold blow drew Maan's attention..
She was busy applying it on his hand..and Maan just cudnt look away..he never saw that side of Geet..he knew a Geet who used to always fight with him.. who ask for his help whenever she was in trouble..and the funny 1..who laughs wid him and sometimes at him..but he never saw the Geet who cared for him..who cudnt see him in pain..
"Ab zyada tou nahi jal raha na?..bolo!"

Maan who was lost looking at her..didn't reply..he cudnt..he was so engaged looking at her.. that he just cudnt..he noticed a curled lock of hair was constantly caressing her cheek which she moved behind her ear..applying a bit of toothpaste on her forehead unknowingly..forgetting that he also has toothpaste on his fingers..he tried to wipe her forehead..putting on more on Geet's forehead..realizing wat he did..he looked at Geet who was now smiling..a bit shy he turned his face and looked away..

"Chaliye..aap muskuraye tou..Lagta hai toothpaste ne apna jaado dikha diya..yeh toothpaste ka kamal hai..ya toothpaste laganay wali ka"..Geet who was happy to see him smiling.. mischieviously teased..and put the tube away..
Maan: Zyada khush honay ki zaroorat nahi hai..im Maan..i can deal wid the pain..
"Ohhh" she replied in amazement..as if she didn't know..
"Mujhe tou pata he nahi tha..k jiska haath jala hai..unka naam Maan Singh Khurana hai!..jo kisi se nahi darte.." she teased while wiping her hands wid the napkin..
Maan again was a bit annoyed..
"tum mujhko bina sataye nahi reh sakti na..zaroori hai kya?" he asked
she picked up the fork ignoring his question..and was about to take a bite..but looked at Maan who was looking at her..she offered him ..he gave her a look and opened his mouth..but instead of giving it to Maan..Geet took the bite..making Maan annoyed again..

"hmm..sach main acha bana hai!" she sed honestly..

Maan who was a bit annoyed looked at Geet..who was now busy eating..and he secretly smiled..finally Geet was BACK!..the one whom he missed..

"Oh hello..thora sa meray liye bhi chorho!" Maan sed looking at her pretending to be worried about what wud he eat if she eats all of it

Geet: tum apnay liye phir bana lena..she sed while enjoying the Pasta..

Maan: nahi..aisa karte hain..tum yeh pasta khalo..main bahar se lunch karleta hoon..kisi achay se restaurant main jaa kar..howz that!?..

Geet: akelay?..u mean widout me??..she questioned to clarify
Maan nodded as naively as he cud
Geet: impossible..!
Maan: soch hai tumhari!
Geet: Maaan!..she sed annoyingly
"Geeet" he sed amusingly..
Both looked at each other and laughed loudly..
Geet: Tum bhi naa..badla lenay main dair nahi lagatay!!
Maan: chalo..ready ho..main car main wait karta hoon..he sed getting up wid a grin on his face

Geet: nahi.ruko tou..im just finished wid the pasta..she sed showing him the pan taking the last bite..

Maan looked at her unbelievably.."Itna nahi khaya karo..already moti ho..sumo wrestler banna hai!"..he teased

Geet looked at him wid her eyes widely opened.."Main zyada khati hoon..moti lagti hoon tumko??"

"hmm..haan..wazan dekha hai apna"..Maan amusingly asked

Geet: haan!..ideal weight hai mera!..she sed getting up proudly..standing rite next to Maan

Maan: HaHaHa!..woh tou lag raha tha aaj subha..he paused moving close to her..

Geet nervously looked down..he looked intently

"chalo..ajao..u have only 10 minutes..im waiting for u in the car!"..he sed getting back in his usual tone

Geet looked up..and saw him walking toward the sink..

"Kya kar rahay ho?" she asked

Maan: yeh toothpaste k saath drive kaise karoon ga!

Geet: nahi karo!..phir tumko dard hoga!..she sed trying to stop him..

"Geeet!..drive tum karo gee?..waise bhi its ok..i can deal wid the hurting!.."..he sed washing his hands in the sink

Geet: nahi..aisa karte hain..k main tumhare liye lunch banadeti hoon..tum bahar nahi jaao..Program Cancel!

Maan: Program Cancel?..tou phir shopping kon karay ga!?

Geet: Shopping?

Maan nodded while wiping his hands wid the paper towel..

Geet: kaisee shopping?

Maan walked to her..and slightly stroke her on her forehead.."lunch k baad shopping par jaana hai..aaj raat Prom nite hai! shopping nahi karni?" he asked grinning..

Geet was standing there all surprised..she thought Maan have had forgotten about the Prom..but he remembered..and moreover he was ready to go wid her..

"Only 10 minutes you have!" Maan sed getting out of the kitchen..going to garage

Geet smiled and quickly rushed to her roo to get ready..

here is the Vm on the kitchen scene..hopefully u all like it 😊
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9T6fUdL-j0Y&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]

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Pretty long enough?? šŸ˜›..that was ur Haq..hehehe..and don't forget about my haq ok..šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am sorry to hear abt ur problems hope everything is better now. Thank u for the update ,I really loved it.

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