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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak that was Mind blowing...n "ek dum perfect"😉😆

would have loved to see it on Mayur...n u r right...this is wht MN were supposed to be show as later...Aww.if only😍😍
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kinza it was so sweet n cute os
thnx a lot for this
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply superb as always Kinza.
loved it very much.😛
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hello sweets!! .. again an OS on MN post marriage .. this is just a random thought which crossed my mind, and i wrote a short OS!! .. you all may find it a bit exaggerated, but for me, these small gestures mean alot. <3 .. Hope u all enjoy ..

MayUr OS
How HE loves HER.

"uff, taubaa,", itni garmi hai na!!',

Nupur was cleaning the kitchen shelves and simultaneously mumbling to herself. It was the start of June, which meant the start of summers.

It was a Sunday afternoon. Mayank was gone for his overtime , and nupur was alone at home and in order to kill time, she decided upon a detailed cleaning session of the home.

Their home wasn't a big one, just an outhouse, but it was more than a heaven for them . The small world they had created in this minimum space was enough to bring smiles on their faces. Their house may lack in space and width, but whatever it was, it was knitted with love, which kept it woven tight.

She was now standing on the stool, dusting mayank's heavy books, which were on the top rack of the book shelf. "BY GOD!!, itni moti kitabien", she was calculating their minimum weight as one by one she was brushing off dust from them, but as she was brushing the cloth over the books, her heart was warming with his sense, and dropping the cloth, she brushed her hand over them , "Sunday ko bhi job pe chala gaya", she pouted and said to herself, she had suddenly started missing him.

Completing the book shelf cleaning, she headed for general dusting, and was greeted by mayank's picture on the table. She smiled and held it close, "kia hai?, aisey kia dekh rahe ho?', she brushed her dupptta over the picture and talked to it, but then blushing placed it back. Throughout the dusting, she kept on looking at the picture and the feeling of his being close was warming her heart.

Finally after all the cleaning she decided for a bath and then lunch, but her thoughts were interrupted by the click of the door.

She came out of the kitchen and saw Mayank was entering the home, "MAYANK!!",s he rushed towards him, as she was expecting him to return in evening, but suddenly something struck her and her feet stopped right near him.

"gi haan!! Mayank!!", Mayank smiled and took a step towards her to hug her while she took a step back, "jaldi kaisey a gaye?",she asked taking a step back again

"lunch break thori lambi mil gayi, tu lunch k liye a gaya!!", he again smiled and was about to hug her when she turned towards kitchen, "good, main khana ..

And the next she realized was that she was pulled back and embraced in the strong arms of Mayank.

For a moment she felt awkward, she didn't want to hug him right now, she was so sweaty, and she was working since morning in so much heat, so she thought of staying away, but Mayank hugged her tight and consequently, it wasn't possible for her to keep her arms off.

She hugged him back, and after a while, Mayank moved a bit away, he wiped off sweat droplets from her forehead with his sleeve, "I missed you Mrs Sharma", he said and kissed her check, while she was warmed at his show of affection, "I missed you too!!", she whispered and Mayank held her close, "lag tu nahi raha tha, you were not even interested in hugging me!",.

"nahi wo..", Nupur fumbled as she was not able to put into words why she wanted to stay away, "aisa nahi hai",s he smiled and kissed his cheek,

"acha ab romance main lunch break waste nahi karni hai", he strictly said and both of them giggled, going to kitchen for lunch.

Mayank went again after lunch and Nupur started cleaning the kitchen. It was almost evening and Mayank would be him anytime.

She headed for a bath and dressing herself in a white shalwar suit, she left her hair open and applied minmal make up. She decided to be simple, just the way Mayank liked her.

She was done with the dinner, and now was waiting for Mayank, when finally the door clicked. She rushed and hugged him, "welcome home",s he softly said in his ears and kissed his cheek , while he hugged back tightly.

And as he did, Nupur couldn't help comparing the way he hugged in the afternoon.

In the afternoon she was sweaty and dirty, all full of dust, and now she was fresh just after her bath, so she had to compare that how did he hug her both times and what she found was – there was NO difference.

He loved Nupur, not her beauty and presentation. These maybe enhancing factors and nupur made sure she kept them, but if anytime, they were not present, his love showed no decrease, because it is the PERSON inside her he loved, and every time, he proved it to her, by huge promises and tests or by these small gestures.

"I love you Nupur", he whispered, while just a tiny tear came out of her eyes in return.

"I love you too, aur ab dinner thada ho raha hai,", she pushed him back and both of them headed to spent a beautiful evening with each other, where again mayank had silently told nupur that how he loved her.

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow u are fast kinzuuu!!!!!!!😆
beautiful OS kinzu!!!!!!! simply too good and pure for words!!!! specially these lines!!!!


there was NO difference.

He loved Nupur, not her beauty and presentation. These maybe enhancing factors and nupur made sure she kept them, but if anytime, they were not present, his love showed no decrease, because it is the PERSON inside her he loved, and every time, he proved it to her, by huge promises and tests or by these small gestures.

love u kinzuuu!!!!!!!!1 :)

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey OS is lovely 👏...wat an adorable os <33 they both ar etoo cute man the way u describe the situation is just perfect...specially their feelings for eachother...😳.it was filled with cutennes and romance aww mayur <33333 i imiss them more... now only imagine from ur OS..i luved this OS too cute nd simple <3 do write more and thn xalot 4 PM .
BTW congozz on ur new thread😃
Edited by -Arti4ever- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WhAT A SWEET CUTE ADORABLE OS!!!
LOVED IT!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kinz...it was great how u had put it👏...totally got ur point😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
my small gesture to tell u how much i like ur writing
😊 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome 🤗 ur the best kinza

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